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Yo, i just see you write Dxd fic Here is my advice never write Dxd story by using Dxd anime as reference, Because unlike in light novel, dxd version anime ruin a lot of characters, especially Issei's characters hard to the point that reduce him into fanservice machine.
Awesome story so far just wish chapters were a longer not sure what the average word count is not a big deal I do wish to know who is in the chat group i know when the dude from konosuba is just not the girls sense the author hasn't elaborated on who they are
5 āØ just because you use Immortal Taoist Idle game normal cultivation realms and body cultivation realms. šššš
He has got the fallen angel rizz and is plucking flowers like it's spring. Op reincarnated MC with cultivation powers, interesting concept and it's an okay read. It lacks the seriousness of a world building dxd fic and is more of a wishfulfilment FF with good grammer. This will be a hit or miss for a lot. But if you are looking for a light hearted not so serious dxd fic, this is it šš¾
Yo, i just see you write Dxd fic Here is my advice never write Dxd story by using Dxd anime as reference, Because unlike in light novel, dxd version anime ruin a lot of characters, especially Issei's characters hard to the point that reduce him into fanservice machine.
Awesome story so far just wish chapters were a longer not sure what the average word count is not a big deal I do wish to know who is in the chat group i know when the dude from konosuba is just not the girls sense the author hasn't elaborated on who they are
5 āØ just because you use Immortal Taoist Idle game normal cultivation realms and body cultivation realms. šššš
He has got the fallen angel rizz and is plucking flowers like it's spring. Op reincarnated MC with cultivation powers, interesting concept and it's an okay read. It lacks the seriousness of a world building dxd fic and is more of a wishfulfilment FF with good grammer. This will be a hit or miss for a lot. But if you are looking for a light hearted not so serious dxd fic, this is it šš¾