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Well it's entertaining, interesting from the start but has a shortcoming like a short chapter but as the author has compensated for that by daily update so it's fine. Overall it good FF.
If anyone wants to have fun with an op protagonist who isn’t necessarily op at the same time, I advise you read this novel. And I like that the protagonist knows his position in the world, but isn’t at the same time trying to lecture and fight every character around him or trying to hold moral ground. His power also works in a fun way that even though it makes him practically op, you still have room for him to grow and you won’t feel like he’s nothing else to do except just overwhelm everyone and get every girl. This is my assessment so far, hopefully it continues with this good attributes.
I think it is necessary to diversify the scenes more specifically of his increased luck, because there are a lot of novels where the characters get this or that power and they are no longer so interesting to watch, but here is an unusual concept and you need to reveal it more strongly, by the nature of the character it is not clear what actions he adheres to and I would like not an explanation of his character but his manifestations in actions, but this can be corrected by a large number of chapters, in general a good novel, I want the basic concept to be used more often and more strongly
what is the original title of this mtl author can you give us the name or raw link
Though not confirmed ship seems to be black widow which is very good and i don't know why other fics doesn't have.
I like it, it's not the best story on the planet, but it's good. Apparently it's a translation (I'm sorry if I'm wrong), and it's translated well.
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I like everything about this FF. ############################################################©©©©©©©©©©©©©©©©©©©©©©© ®®®®®®®®®®®®®®®®®®®®®®®
I am rating it 4.2 for now, but I know it will be downhill for sure, and character development is extremely rushed; it can be lot better
treat it like what it is- a crack fic and you will enjoy it. its not a 10 but easily a comedy jewel as of chapter 8. enjoyable will be one word descripton.
To be honest... I'm currently writing this review without actually reading the fic just because why not? I'll stock up on some chapters for now and see how this goes I guess? But before I leave here's a random meme of mine and steal it if you want.
Man, I love this book. The concept and plot are done in a very good way. Writing 8/10, plus the power of domino-like luck haha. Looking forward to the next chapters.
This is really good!!! I love the comedy, i love the interaction between characters, i love everything!!! The mc have OP ability but not cringe at all. Thank you for this good stuff!!!
Hey everyone, Thanks for checking out this translated novel! Just a heads up, I’ve done a lot of editing on this version. I’ve removed some toxic stuff and made the story more positive overall. I’ve also made some big changes to the story itself. So, if you’re familiar with the original, don’t expect this to be exactly the same. There will be new twists, different character developments, and maybe even a different ending. My aim is to make the story better and more enjoyable for a wider audience. So, while you might recognize the basic plot, expect some surprises along the way. I hope you enjoy this revamped version as much as I enjoyed working on it! Thanks for your support and happy reading!
Well it's entertaining, interesting from the start but has a shortcoming like a short chapter but as the author has compensated for that by daily update so it's fine. Overall it good FF.
If anyone wants to have fun with an op protagonist who isn’t necessarily op at the same time, I advise you read this novel. And I like that the protagonist knows his position in the world, but isn’t at the same time trying to lecture and fight every character around him or trying to hold moral ground. His power also works in a fun way that even though it makes him practically op, you still have room for him to grow and you won’t feel like he’s nothing else to do except just overwhelm everyone and get every girl. This is my assessment so far, hopefully it continues with this good attributes.
I think it is necessary to diversify the scenes more specifically of his increased luck, because there are a lot of novels where the characters get this or that power and they are no longer so interesting to watch, but here is an unusual concept and you need to reveal it more strongly, by the nature of the character it is not clear what actions he adheres to and I would like not an explanation of his character but his manifestations in actions, but this can be corrected by a large number of chapters, in general a good novel, I want the basic concept to be used more often and more strongly
what is the original title of this mtl author can you give us the name or raw link
Though not confirmed ship seems to be black widow which is very good and i don't know why other fics doesn't have.
I like it, it's not the best story on the planet, but it's good. Apparently it's a translation (I'm sorry if I'm wrong), and it's translated well.
👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I like everything about this FF. ############################################################©©©©©©©©©©©©©©©©©©©©©©© ®®®®®®®®®®®®®®®®®®®®®®®
I am rating it 4.2 for now, but I know it will be downhill for sure, and character development is extremely rushed; it can be lot better
treat it like what it is- a crack fic and you will enjoy it. its not a 10 but easily a comedy jewel as of chapter 8. enjoyable will be one word descripton.
To be honest... I'm currently writing this review without actually reading the fic just because why not? I'll stock up on some chapters for now and see how this goes I guess? But before I leave here's a random meme of mine and steal it if you want.
Man, I love this book. The concept and plot are done in a very good way. Writing 8/10, plus the power of domino-like luck haha. Looking forward to the next chapters.
This is really good!!! I love the comedy, i love the interaction between characters, i love everything!!! The mc have OP ability but not cringe at all. Thank you for this good stuff!!!
Hey everyone, Thanks for checking out this translated novel! Just a heads up, I’ve done a lot of editing on this version. I’ve removed some toxic stuff and made the story more positive overall. I’ve also made some big changes to the story itself. So, if you’re familiar with the original, don’t expect this to be exactly the same. There will be new twists, different character developments, and maybe even a different ending. My aim is to make the story better and more enjoyable for a wider audience. So, while you might recognize the basic plot, expect some surprises along the way. I hope you enjoy this revamped version as much as I enjoyed working on it! Thanks for your support and happy reading!