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Ragnarök, Eternal Tragedy.
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Amari Zanders. An orphan who doesn't have uncos (powers). Has always been looking forward to being part of a family but being a black kid with no uncos people have always looked at him as a curse. Will he ever meet his family? or will he die alone.
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On this comment I'll leave a critique, for anyone interested in reading the book. Grammatically it's okay, nothing bad or amazing, just okay. The story development is pretty good, and every character that is introduced during the story plays a major role in the development of the story and characters. The world background is also okay, nothing special about it, could get better during the chapters.
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Jilid 0 : Auxiliary Volume
Jilid 1 : A New Chapter
- 1 The Prince, The Destroyer and The Demon. 6 months ago
- 2 The City of Algoria. 5 months ago
- 3 The World. 5 months ago
- 4 The Boy in The Woods. 5 months ago
- 5 Survival Of the fittest. 5 months ago
- 6 The instincts of a beast. 5 months ago
- 7 A monster's cry. 5 months ago
- 8 Welcome Home. 5 months ago
- 9 The Oruba Clan. 5 months ago
- 10 The Ogen Woods. 5 months ago
- 11 An official encounter. 5 months ago
- 12 An Old Foe. 5 months ago
- 13 Unresolved Problem. 5 months ago
- 14 Learning Curve. 5 months ago
- 15 Introducing new ways. 5 months ago
- 16 Moving forward. 5 months ago
- 17 New environment 5 months ago
- 18 New Friends. 5 months ago
- 19 The thrill of danger 5 months ago
- 20 Feeling Empty. 5 months ago
- 21 Unexpected Approach 5 months ago
- 22 Crazy Concert. 5 months ago
Jilid 2 : Cutthroat
- 23 The Search Begins 5 months ago
- 24 Altercations 5 months ago
- 25 Form of Friendship 4 months ago
- 26 Form of friendship 2 4 months ago
- 27 A cry for help. 4 months ago
- 28 Deserved Punishment 4 months ago
- 29 Endurance. 4 months ago
- 30 Rage. 4 months ago
- 31 In need of help. 4 months ago
- 32 A King's Curse 4 months ago
- 33 What's Important. 4 months ago
- 34 Exceeding Expectation 4 months ago
- 35 The Investigation. 3 months ago
- 36 Uncomfortable. 3 months ago
- 37 Going Back. 3 months ago
- 38 Times Up 3 months ago
- 39 Conflict. 3 months ago
- 40 The Prince's Power 3 months ago
- 41 The Prince's Evolution 3 months ago
Yo! It's your author here, I wanted to give an analysis based on the work I've done so far. So far there has been very few moments of action and more focus on the characters and their growth. The world building is okay, and I want to improve on it. The story is inspired by stories like God of War 1,2 and 3, but is won't be the same to be exact, just inspired. I hope you guys enjoy this journey as much as I will.