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really liked the novel fast paced; no time waste ; MC is not dense and dumb recommend books like this in the reply
dropped at chapter 151 . the fact that the originals soul is still there and he comes out in between the novels is an instant drop for me . all the work MC put in went to shit .I mean the original was a freaking rapist. u really should have thought out this part better author.
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it's this cover from CANVA, good thing I did not use it for my book. Anyways the book is cringe that's all I have to say... and it's not because he copied the book cover๐ค
ๆตช่ดนๆถ้ดใๆ ่ๆฏซๆ ๅธๆ๏ผๅจ็ฌฌไธๅทไธญ๏ผMC ่ขซๅคง่ๅฎฃไผ ๏ผไฝๅจ็ฌฌไบๅทๅ็ฌฌไธๅทไธญ๏ผไปๅๅพไธๆไธๅผ
The synopsis was bait. I thought the story would break cliches or atleast make fun or play with it. But all I got was an occasional comment here and there on how garbage the orginal story was. I laughed a bit on the first chapter with him yelling at the system. When he walked out and bought suits on his underwear I thought he was a lunatic that doesn't take the world seriously but then it was revealed that he was supposed to be a business billioanaire and that he vauled his time a lot. So why did he do that? He could have just ordered someone to buy the suits its not like they took his measurements in the store he gave it to them and how did he even knew the size of the original body he was in? Then a lot of illogical things happened. They thought he was possed by an evil cultivator but no one even bothered to check they just accept it and move on that he became a completely person. Then he fell in love with one of the heroines out of nowhere (well it felt like that for me anyway) after that he started acting like a teen in puberty that doesn't know what love is. Then the crimes and trials which I will admit is entertaining but could have been completely avoided if he was smart enough. Killing three people in a motel like some sort of anti hero then leaving camera evidence? Anyway there were a lot of things that left me scratching my head but its ok because it was good junkfood. But all the little things pile up and I just ran out of patience to this story especially when I read the part that he will lose control of his body because of the original owner.
I say the story is great,but only problem if you say that I am confused by the names of these characters,these chinese names all sound the same.
Itโs honestly quite a good read so far, I like it. Characters are unique and the story idea while done quite a bit is actually in a fresh way. Well done author-san.
Gave it a 5 star when I truly feel it should be at 4 star because some people just gave it a review after reading 1-2 chapters... The story is very interesting since I was able to read the free chapters in one sitting. This novel isn't that actually that bad. There would be lots of cursing, but then again if you are in the same situation as MC you would also curse a lot. One thing to note is that MC is very capable that it makes him OP in the standard of a normal human. This novel is a mix of real modern world and cultivation though, so there is still definitely a lot of progress when it comes to actual strength. One thing to note of is that the body MC current possesses is a useless POS. That's basically what would hinder MC, but MC is awesome, so I don't think he it would hinder or nerf him that much. Basically just give this book a read at least until chapter 50, which is as far as I got with the free chapter/daily free chapter.
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I enjoyed the novel ( the first volume to be exact). Please be more subtle with your nerfs in future novels if you ever write another. The second volume though made me lose interest. The real soul/personality of the body being able to gain control without MC's knowledge was a big let down for me. The reason behind that move was reasonable( with a little holes but I'm sure it'll be or it's already clarified ). Got more disappointed with the marriage the idiot personality did(I hope they've already separated) cos I really liked Xia Yu. I don't know about others but I don't really like it when MC doesn't have full control of his body so that's it for me for now.
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After reading a few chapters, getting to know and analyzing the protagonist, this was my conclusion: A vulgar guy, with a questionable brain, and an attitude just like those clichรฉ protagonists he complains so much about.
This is a masterpiece, plain and simple. The mind games that the MC plays with the police, and the way he handles his enemies is something that sets this story apart from many others. Also, unlike many other novels this MC is not entirely reliant on the system, and has his own skills. That doesnโt mean he isnโt reliant though, as he uses the system to his advantage on multiple ocations. All in all, if you are looking for an interesting read I highly recommend this book, it gets much better in the mid to later chapters.
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Good one with mc with brains no additional drama. But there is just one thing as u said from the start mc was a international company holder so he should know how run a business but in the who story the only thing he did was make a movie nothing about business. Try to focus on this side as well. Overall this was one of the best one iโve ever read. Thanks for the novel๐ช๐ช๐ซก๐ซก
synopsis is bait, doesn't correlate with the story I thought this web novel was supposed to break cliches but it didn't. Main character becomes a villain and gets a luck plunder system, also he's supposed to make hell for the protagonist. Overused and really bland tbh, other than that it just feels like another Chinese cashgrab with with a copy and pasted plot.
This idea sounds bonkers so why the heck not, hey? ๐ Can't be any worse than the stuff already out there. Hopefully the A.I won't use the term "orbs" for eyes and will use proper grammar, spelling, pronouns etc... for the most part anyway. But hey, I'm only writing this reveiw for the points, so who cares what I think ๐๐. I say good luck to you!
Decided to read it since it was free and luckily it was. Ignoring everything off putting with the Mc, his personality, and the system, itโs blatantly obvious that the author goes out of their way to nerf him multiple times. To awaken Qi he all of sudden has to earn 1 billion yuan and instead of converting stolen money to gold he end up leaving it because the author says he doesnโt need it right now. What exactly is the main premise of this novel?? Isnโt the whole point of him doing business and making money to get gold and beat the protagonist?? This Mc is supposedly some business savant in his previous life and all he does is kill and rob people. His businesses are even more of a joke and are forced asf. He has 1 year before he dies and he does what? Produce movies and gamesโฆ But sure plot allows him to complete everything in a month. Like honestly, he inherits an entertainment company from his current body and he fires everyone from the beginning. At that point why even have an entertainment company at all, just make a completely different one or better yet just copy the company you had in your past life. Canโt say how frustrating it was to read this, the author tries making things intricate but ends up contradicting himself, adding in a bunch of things that donโt really help the story. I will say that the premise is somewhat novel in having an mc who doesnโt know the plot. However, the inclusion of him buying said plot via the system was definitely a mistake. Overall, good idea but it was a fumble.
Personally, this novel is better then many out there. though many think MC is short tempered due to first few chapters, but believe me the Author Cooked 5 star cuisine. Anyways without spoiling much, mc isn't system slave, readable and most important uses his BRAIN. All in all, it's a good read that I enjoyed. Definitely rereading again.
I was hooked reading the synopsis thinking the mc going to bash all the cliche events of the Chinese novel setting but colour me suprised when he get a snaching hero luck type of system and then routine continue where mc take mantle of villain taking hero opportunity like in all chinese novel , i expected the novel to be like [I want play by the books] novel,but i was disappointed, sad,angry .
this a good wn, so good in fact, atleast for me... so i definitelu recommend it! my only issue is that the chapters were short... or is it just because im reading it too fast?
So far I love the story it's a fun read, but i at this point it doesn't feel like his family is the top family in the city, everyone is so easily targeting them and facing no serious repercussions. Everything he is facing on his own. Does the family gets more involve later on, and shows why they are the top family?
the 1st chapter is a totally let down. im only reading it and i can totally not believe it. because the MC seems to have a few screws loose from the get go and seems to like walking and running naked all over the place. and seems to like screaming a lot and looks stupid to everyone around him. so those looking to try it. better not.
Author has cooked really hard. Many left halfway because of mc temperament, but if u read till 76, you will notice he only behaves such on useless matter
I really like this story. No harems, no super duper pianos, no perversions. The temperamental main character. This is exactly what I've been looking for all this time.
I stopped at chapter two, MC is temperamental, every time he speaks he has to shout ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
If you are going to God forbid read this novel be prepared for half baked jokes and cringe dialogues where Mc screaming at the air is considered funny.
really liked the novel fast paced; no time waste ; MC is not dense and dumb recommend books like this in the reply
dropped at chapter 151 . the fact that the originals soul is still there and he comes out in between the novels is an instant drop for me . all the work MC put in went to shit .I mean the original was a freaking rapist. u really should have thought out this part better author.
Membuka SPOILER it's this cover from CANVA, good thing I did not use it for my book. Anyways the book is cringe that's all I have to say... and it's not because he copied the book cover๐ค
ๆตช่ดนๆถ้ดใๆ ่ๆฏซๆ ๅธๆ๏ผๅจ็ฌฌไธๅทไธญ๏ผMC ่ขซๅคง่ๅฎฃไผ ๏ผไฝๅจ็ฌฌไบๅทๅ็ฌฌไธๅทไธญ๏ผไปๅๅพไธๆไธๅผ
The synopsis was bait. I thought the story would break cliches or atleast make fun or play with it. But all I got was an occasional comment here and there on how garbage the orginal story was. I laughed a bit on the first chapter with him yelling at the system. When he walked out and bought suits on his underwear I thought he was a lunatic that doesn't take the world seriously but then it was revealed that he was supposed to be a business billioanaire and that he vauled his time a lot. So why did he do that? He could have just ordered someone to buy the suits its not like they took his measurements in the store he gave it to them and how did he even knew the size of the original body he was in? Then a lot of illogical things happened. They thought he was possed by an evil cultivator but no one even bothered to check they just accept it and move on that he became a completely person. Then he fell in love with one of the heroines out of nowhere (well it felt like that for me anyway) after that he started acting like a teen in puberty that doesn't know what love is. Then the crimes and trials which I will admit is entertaining but could have been completely avoided if he was smart enough. Killing three people in a motel like some sort of anti hero then leaving camera evidence? Anyway there were a lot of things that left me scratching my head but its ok because it was good junkfood. But all the little things pile up and I just ran out of patience to this story especially when I read the part that he will lose control of his body because of the original owner.
I say the story is great,but only problem if you say that I am confused by the names of these characters,these chinese names all sound the same.
Itโs honestly quite a good read so far, I like it. Characters are unique and the story idea while done quite a bit is actually in a fresh way. Well done author-san.
Gave it a 5 star when I truly feel it should be at 4 star because some people just gave it a review after reading 1-2 chapters... The story is very interesting since I was able to read the free chapters in one sitting. This novel isn't that actually that bad. There would be lots of cursing, but then again if you are in the same situation as MC you would also curse a lot. One thing to note is that MC is very capable that it makes him OP in the standard of a normal human. This novel is a mix of real modern world and cultivation though, so there is still definitely a lot of progress when it comes to actual strength. One thing to note of is that the body MC current possesses is a useless POS. That's basically what would hinder MC, but MC is awesome, so I don't think he it would hinder or nerf him that much. Basically just give this book a read at least until chapter 50, which is as far as I got with the free chapter/daily free chapter.
What a TRASH! ๐ค What a TRASH! ๐ค What a TRASH! ๐ค What a TRASH! ๐ค What a TRASH! ๐ค What a TRASH! ๐ค What a TRASH! ๐ค What a TRASH! ๐ค What a TRASH! ๐ค What a TRASH! ๐ค
I enjoyed the novel ( the first volume to be exact). Please be more subtle with your nerfs in future novels if you ever write another. The second volume though made me lose interest. The real soul/personality of the body being able to gain control without MC's knowledge was a big let down for me. The reason behind that move was reasonable( with a little holes but I'm sure it'll be or it's already clarified ). Got more disappointed with the marriage the idiot personality did(I hope they've already separated) cos I really liked Xia Yu. I don't know about others but I don't really like it when MC doesn't have full control of his body so that's it for me for now.
Membuka SPOILER After reading a few chapters, getting to know and analyzing the protagonist, this was my conclusion: A vulgar guy, with a questionable brain, and an attitude just like those clichรฉ protagonists he complains so much about.
This is a masterpiece, plain and simple. The mind games that the MC plays with the police, and the way he handles his enemies is something that sets this story apart from many others. Also, unlike many other novels this MC is not entirely reliant on the system, and has his own skills. That doesnโt mean he isnโt reliant though, as he uses the system to his advantage on multiple ocations. All in all, if you are looking for an interesting read I highly recommend this book, it gets much better in the mid to later chapters.
Membuka SPOILER Good one with mc with brains no additional drama. But there is just one thing as u said from the start mc was a international company holder so he should know how run a business but in the who story the only thing he did was make a movie nothing about business. Try to focus on this side as well. Overall this was one of the best one iโve ever read. Thanks for the novel๐ช๐ช๐ซก๐ซก
synopsis is bait, doesn't correlate with the story I thought this web novel was supposed to break cliches but it didn't. Main character becomes a villain and gets a luck plunder system, also he's supposed to make hell for the protagonist. Overused and really bland tbh, other than that it just feels like another Chinese cashgrab with with a copy and pasted plot.
This idea sounds bonkers so why the heck not, hey? ๐ Can't be any worse than the stuff already out there. Hopefully the A.I won't use the term "orbs" for eyes and will use proper grammar, spelling, pronouns etc... for the most part anyway. But hey, I'm only writing this reveiw for the points, so who cares what I think ๐๐. I say good luck to you!
Decided to read it since it was free and luckily it was. Ignoring everything off putting with the Mc, his personality, and the system, itโs blatantly obvious that the author goes out of their way to nerf him multiple times. To awaken Qi he all of sudden has to earn 1 billion yuan and instead of converting stolen money to gold he end up leaving it because the author says he doesnโt need it right now. What exactly is the main premise of this novel?? Isnโt the whole point of him doing business and making money to get gold and beat the protagonist?? This Mc is supposedly some business savant in his previous life and all he does is kill and rob people. His businesses are even more of a joke and are forced asf. He has 1 year before he dies and he does what? Produce movies and gamesโฆ But sure plot allows him to complete everything in a month. Like honestly, he inherits an entertainment company from his current body and he fires everyone from the beginning. At that point why even have an entertainment company at all, just make a completely different one or better yet just copy the company you had in your past life. Canโt say how frustrating it was to read this, the author tries making things intricate but ends up contradicting himself, adding in a bunch of things that donโt really help the story. I will say that the premise is somewhat novel in having an mc who doesnโt know the plot. However, the inclusion of him buying said plot via the system was definitely a mistake. Overall, good idea but it was a fumble.
Personally, this novel is better then many out there. though many think MC is short tempered due to first few chapters, but believe me the Author Cooked 5 star cuisine. Anyways without spoiling much, mc isn't system slave, readable and most important uses his BRAIN. All in all, it's a good read that I enjoyed. Definitely rereading again.
I was hooked reading the synopsis thinking the mc going to bash all the cliche events of the Chinese novel setting but colour me suprised when he get a snaching hero luck type of system and then routine continue where mc take mantle of villain taking hero opportunity like in all chinese novel , i expected the novel to be like [I want play by the books] novel,but i was disappointed, sad,angry .
this a good wn, so good in fact, atleast for me... so i definitelu recommend it! my only issue is that the chapters were short... or is it just because im reading it too fast?
So far I love the story it's a fun read, but i at this point it doesn't feel like his family is the top family in the city, everyone is so easily targeting them and facing no serious repercussions. Everything he is facing on his own. Does the family gets more involve later on, and shows why they are the top family?
the 1st chapter is a totally let down. im only reading it and i can totally not believe it. because the MC seems to have a few screws loose from the get go and seems to like walking and running naked all over the place. and seems to like screaming a lot and looks stupid to everyone around him. so those looking to try it. better not.
Author has cooked really hard. Many left halfway because of mc temperament, but if u read till 76, you will notice he only behaves such on useless matter
I really like this story. No harems, no super duper pianos, no perversions. The temperamental main character. This is exactly what I've been looking for all this time.
I stopped at chapter two, MC is temperamental, every time he speaks he has to shout ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
If you are going to God forbid read this novel be prepared for half baked jokes and cringe dialogues where Mc screaming at the air is considered funny.
this is just bad...end of the Review [img=faceslap]