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first time writing a review for a web novel so that should show you home much I like it
I have finished reading the first 11 chapters and I have to say that I like the idea. For now, the writing is quite pleasant. I don't know what its goal will be, but I would like to find out.
I really like your fics. The character of Andre is, in my opinion, rather interesting. Having him question his current situation and not just accept the loss of his entire previous life makes him more human, which for me is a plus. As well as I have the insertion of the "High trix", with the pokemon transformations is what interests me the most. In any case, great fics, I can't wait to read more.
It’s a fascinating concept for a story with mechanics of both Ben 10 and pokemon and various other genres
Una idea fascinante y increíble que has ejecutado muy bien espero que sigas así amigo............................... ...................................
What first caught my eye was the Ben 10 and Pokemon crossover. It was intriguing because I haven't seen fanfics like this on WebNovel yet (or just haven't found it) and I didn't regret starting to read it. MC is an 8'3 foot Showman who discovered that what he believed his whole life was a lie( or so he thought) The author is trying to be better with each chapter and it's evident in the main character who asks the right questions. Thomas Andre, the MC's name, is a likable character, quite impulsive and dramatic due to his profession as a Showman. But there's a deeper reason for his reactions and theatricality. The chapters are coming out quite frequently, and I hope the Author keeps it up. Another interesting thing here is that the fanfic is not Omnitrix , but HighTrix, a more powerful version of the clock. Plus the author finds slightly different designs for the aliens, since the MC is a middle-aged man and the final information should match( of course the author only showed Humungousaur, but still the design is awesome). I recommend reading it, keep up the good work bro.
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Interesting coincidence. The main character's name is the same as that of serial killer Thomas Andre, who killed his ex-wife, daughter and son.
first time writing a review for a web novel so that should show you home much I like it
I have finished reading the first 11 chapters and I have to say that I like the idea. For now, the writing is quite pleasant. I don't know what its goal will be, but I would like to find out.
I really like your fics. The character of Andre is, in my opinion, rather interesting. Having him question his current situation and not just accept the loss of his entire previous life makes him more human, which for me is a plus. As well as I have the insertion of the "High trix", with the pokemon transformations is what interests me the most. In any case, great fics, I can't wait to read more.
It’s a fascinating concept for a story with mechanics of both Ben 10 and pokemon and various other genres
Una idea fascinante y increíble que has ejecutado muy bien espero que sigas así amigo............................... ...................................
What first caught my eye was the Ben 10 and Pokemon crossover. It was intriguing because I haven't seen fanfics like this on WebNovel yet (or just haven't found it) and I didn't regret starting to read it. MC is an 8'3 foot Showman who discovered that what he believed his whole life was a lie( or so he thought) The author is trying to be better with each chapter and it's evident in the main character who asks the right questions. Thomas Andre, the MC's name, is a likable character, quite impulsive and dramatic due to his profession as a Showman. But there's a deeper reason for his reactions and theatricality. The chapters are coming out quite frequently, and I hope the Author keeps it up. Another interesting thing here is that the fanfic is not Omnitrix , but HighTrix, a more powerful version of the clock. Plus the author finds slightly different designs for the aliens, since the MC is a middle-aged man and the final information should match( of course the author only showed Humungousaur, but still the design is awesome). I recommend reading it, keep up the good work bro.
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Interesting coincidence. The main character's name is the same as that of serial killer Thomas Andre, who killed his ex-wife, daughter and son.