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very good, like the way he keeps the downsides of the lord of mystery paths and its creative use,
...........................Review to counteract those of a troll, the story is good and I really want to read it to the end............................
Membuka SPOILERthe story is interesting but 1 there are not enough men 2 there is too much attention to female characters, it’s like a harem? 3 the main character is not a villain at all 4 in battle the main character is strong and arrogant, we also know our victory in advance from this, so reading battles is generally not interesting, like water 5 the main character has enormous strength, in general he doesn’t take risks like a mole, although he calls Danzo a rat, it seems he sensed his brother. The beginning was interesting and majestic, but the end is a completely different story
So far the story is good and a lot of things are starting to come together. It had a not so promising start in my opinion but then it progresses very well. I hope it only gets better. Thanks translator, which also makes the Chinese blurred enough to not disturb the reading and enjoy it.
Review: Simply put, If you like characters similar to "Gu Changge" from the manhua "I Am the Fated Villain," you'll relate to this story. MC acts similarly, being a mastermind who shows his true nature right from the start without doing full effort trying to hide it and people will still clueless or wasn't suspicious until "Moment Of Truth" came because in this story they just simply can. However, if you're hoping the MC would be like Aizen or Adam (That kind of mastermind, you kow what i mean) then this is not for you. As i mentioned before, the MC reveals his true nature from the beginning, and the only reason other characters don't notice is because the author adjusts their intelligence to fit the plot. So, there's no significant character development for the MC. Overall: Excelent premise, great story, normal plot
This by far one of the best Naruto ff.The Mc is smart,cautious,goal driven and very universal in the best way possible. The Lotm aspects are perfectly integrated into the world and don’t feel out of place like all those systems in other ff. This for me is one of my top3 Fanfics and I habe read hundreds. I can only thank the author for this piece of art and encourage you to keep writing and complete Fanfic. Because I am sure once completed this will one of the best fanfics in all aspects. Keep going dear author and don’t listen to the haters👍👍😁[img=recommend]
When I saw the words Naruto and Visionary, I clicked. Hey it's not bad. And I chose to reread the tags to make sure there is no harem.
translator, the link for this fanfic raw can't be accessed. Can you send a new one or tell me what this fanfic raw name is?
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Membuka SPOILERVery good Naruto Fanfic, with LOTM elements in it. I enjoyed reading it, though don't expect OP MC from start. .........................................
11/10 Naruto fanfic with Lord of Mysteries sytem. MC is from the visnary path + Uchiha clan. Even if you didn't read Lord of the Mysteries, I would recommend this fic
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I love the lord of the mysteries and so far all the fanfic of LOTM have been good. I like characters like Aizen who control things from behind.
A good novel so far, and we hope that things will remain like this and become more exciting, despite making him a huge character with a bad increase, meaning that the other characters are given a more sense of character.
Membuka SPOILERMan this story really broadens my mind, interesting plots, great interaction, smart Mc, just wonderful I hope you don't drop this fanfic.😁😁
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As of now, it began very interestingly which makes me want to read it more. I am waiting more chapters. I just hope it wont be dropped out. [img=recommend][img=recommend]
Просто говнище, по многим фактором, гг пытается быть манипуляторои, а выглядит будто школьник какой то и планы тупые если честно. Много причин, есть что лучше пояитать
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very good, like the way he keeps the downsides of the lord of mystery paths and its creative use,
...........................Review to counteract those of a troll, the story is good and I really want to read it to the end............................
Membuka SPOILERthe story is interesting but 1 there are not enough men 2 there is too much attention to female characters, it’s like a harem? 3 the main character is not a villain at all 4 in battle the main character is strong and arrogant, we also know our victory in advance from this, so reading battles is generally not interesting, like water 5 the main character has enormous strength, in general he doesn’t take risks like a mole, although he calls Danzo a rat, it seems he sensed his brother. The beginning was interesting and majestic, but the end is a completely different story
So far the story is good and a lot of things are starting to come together. It had a not so promising start in my opinion but then it progresses very well. I hope it only gets better. Thanks translator, which also makes the Chinese blurred enough to not disturb the reading and enjoy it.
Review: Simply put, If you like characters similar to "Gu Changge" from the manhua "I Am the Fated Villain," you'll relate to this story. MC acts similarly, being a mastermind who shows his true nature right from the start without doing full effort trying to hide it and people will still clueless or wasn't suspicious until "Moment Of Truth" came because in this story they just simply can. However, if you're hoping the MC would be like Aizen or Adam (That kind of mastermind, you kow what i mean) then this is not for you. As i mentioned before, the MC reveals his true nature from the beginning, and the only reason other characters don't notice is because the author adjusts their intelligence to fit the plot. So, there's no significant character development for the MC. Overall: Excelent premise, great story, normal plot
This by far one of the best Naruto ff.The Mc is smart,cautious,goal driven and very universal in the best way possible. The Lotm aspects are perfectly integrated into the world and don’t feel out of place like all those systems in other ff. This for me is one of my top3 Fanfics and I habe read hundreds. I can only thank the author for this piece of art and encourage you to keep writing and complete Fanfic. Because I am sure once completed this will one of the best fanfics in all aspects. Keep going dear author and don’t listen to the haters👍👍😁[img=recommend]
When I saw the words Naruto and Visionary, I clicked. Hey it's not bad. And I chose to reread the tags to make sure there is no harem.
translator, the link for this fanfic raw can't be accessed. Can you send a new one or tell me what this fanfic raw name is?
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Membuka SPOILERVery good Naruto Fanfic, with LOTM elements in it. I enjoyed reading it, though don't expect OP MC from start. .........................................
11/10 Naruto fanfic with Lord of Mysteries sytem. MC is from the visnary path + Uchiha clan. Even if you didn't read Lord of the Mysteries, I would recommend this fic
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I love the lord of the mysteries and so far all the fanfic of LOTM have been good. I like characters like Aizen who control things from behind.
A good novel so far, and we hope that things will remain like this and become more exciting, despite making him a huge character with a bad increase, meaning that the other characters are given a more sense of character.
Membuka SPOILERMan this story really broadens my mind, interesting plots, great interaction, smart Mc, just wonderful I hope you don't drop this fanfic.😁😁
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As of now, it began very interestingly which makes me want to read it more. I am waiting more chapters. I just hope it wont be dropped out. [img=recommend][img=recommend]
Просто говнище, по многим фактором, гг пытается быть манипуляторои, а выглядит будто школьник какой то и планы тупые если честно. Много причин, есть что лучше пояитать