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honestly, if the novel had a more mainstream name, i'd wager that it would've been even better known and more successful. that's how much i like the story. mc is quite the horny guy but don't let the smut distract you from a quite great story. especially the current greek mythology arc left me wanting for more and am quite looking forward to more chapters. author really knows how to write. the smut tooš. very nice. mc is having a nice development, the side characters are also their own people and not a copy past of each other and the setting and background is nicely created. my only criticism would be the 1 chapter/day upload. what torture! it's criminal to have such a good story and only provide us with a stable, but small daily upload. other than that, if the novel continues as is and keeps the level of writing, then i'm in until the end.
Need some new novels like this ? Overpower Mc and system Beauty female with Strong caracters Please please please Please please please Please please please
Author how come every Greek now know that Achilles is a 'she'?...I thought they didn't know...and why is she showing off her and Nathan's baby...to the Greeks I thought she hated them...ur not making any sense....
This novel is a masterpiece. The characters are great (especially the protagonist) the story is peak. The fight scenes are very well written aswell.
Read it on another free website. One of the best story. Masterpiece!!! kept me glued till the end. Made account in this website to thank the writer. Keep writing mann...
Despite the very generic title this novel has been surprisingly good. I was a little hesitant at the end of the first act and was contemplating dropping it, but I'm really glad I didn't as the novel has really found its stride since. From the demon kingdom, to the now Trojan War it has been a delight to read. Keep up the good work author!
This is my second review as I feel it needed another oneā¦.the story can be predictable at times but thereās only so much a human can do to make things unpredictableā¦Khione needs to come back and once she does this is automatically a 5 star
slow update š„² hope you can update 1 chapter every 1 day or 2 to three days
i like this novel but, please don't waste chapters on someone nobody likes Ajax he's an extra and your MC can already rival a god if he goes all out so don't make the fight longer, make it shorter for it to be cool and Baddass, you just make the fight longer if he fought someone like a god, that's all. it's just ive been reading so many novels with OP MC and it makes the readers don't support it because when they got so strong they'll nerf him for some random reason. I've read this from Victor of MTWABV before the chapter hits 800. "if i make OP mc, i shouldn't make him weak when fighting extra despite the enemies marvelous historical data, because they aren't the MC of my story"
Itās a good story, worth reading,but it loses our coz things are predictable cliches, at times, and my goddess Khione isnāt back yet either šš„¹
Overall it's pretty good atleast to my test. I like op chad mcs and it has one. If mcs are likeable then i usually read it. But it's world building is not great. I still don't understand where the counties exist. And the power lvl is pretty inconsistent, at first it was represented by levels, but later the lvl system is completely gone. But great job author, keep it up.
The main character is truly unlikeable. I am not a big fan of forceful relationships. in my eyes forcing slaves to do your s*exual desires is r*pe, which is truly odd to write about in a "good" light. The main character to me seems kinda corny, I feel as if his character is an appeal to an edgy audience who feel as if they're cooler than they really are. The writing quality from what I can see isn't bad at all. The sentences and ideas are spun together well. It isn't hard to imagine the background the characters are in. And the main character no matter how unlikeable he is, the author does a good job at showing what type of character he is in just the first chapter. When writing a character who is not a good person, it really is difficult to still make them likable to the audience, in my humble opinion the execution leaves me with a bitter taste in my mouth. I also was not a fan of how the characters interacted with each other, the interactions felt a little too forced for me, too unrealistic. But it wasn't unrealistic in an interesting or funny type of way. All in all, if you are weirdly into r*pe or super edgy mc's (who is lowkey just a loser), this novel is worth a shot. Perhaps things get better later on.
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I like how the story progresses, keep writing Author this is a masterpiece, and highly recommended can't wait to read the next update š„ā¤ļøāš„ā¤ļøāš„ā¤ļøāš„ā¤ļøāš„ā¤ļøāš„ā¤ļøāš„ā¤ļøāš„ā¤ļøāš„ā¤ļøāš„
some chapter that should have been combined have been separated which makes it disappointing after the wait... rest all is are, too good to be real
A little too bloated for my taste. Plot progression is ridiculously slow. Nevertheless, quite entertaining.
Writing style is way to unorganised and poor story development. Totally waste of time
Author a quick question ....will Nathan ever have a women in his harem who is not a virgin ...I mean like Helen of Troy ..she is just used goods you know... having girls in harem who are not virgin doesn't sound so good ....have you thought about it ?
honestly guys this book is very addicting to read. once you start you're hooked and feining for new chapters. I warn you now, you will enjoy it.
To be honest, I did not expect that I would be able to read the first chapters so well, everything was read in one breath, building peace, relationships, people, everything is fine, I do not like that dark topics were raised in the third volume, but I think it needs to be experienced, I can't wait for what it will happen next. One minus, the system and characteristics are missing, again, if you have already entered it, then you need to continue, although I myself understand that this is an easy way for the authors to type 500 characters in a chapter.
I really enjoyed the novel up until Volume 3, but after that, it took a direction I didnāt find appealing. The story began to focus heavily on background informationālike what the gods are doing or events in other locationsāand it moved away from focusing on the main character and their companions. While I understand the need for world-building, this extra information felt overwhelming and disconnected from the core plot that initially drew me in. Because of this, Iāve become less motivated to unlock and read new chapters. Even when I did, I didnāt enjoy them as much. Many of the chapters felt like filler, and I was hoping for more focus on the main storyline and character development. Whatās more frustrating is the lack of response from the author. I left feedback and comments in hopes of some acknowledgment, but thereās been no replyānot even a simple like to show the feedback was seen. I even joined the Discord server, though it was initially for illustrations, but later I wanted to ask something about the novel with other fans and the author. However, thereās no dedicated channel for conversations, which makes it even more disappointing. It feels like readersā voices arenāt being heard.
damnnnnnn..... author what did you make after reading it I am longing for more ..
I'm going to be honest and say that the first volume of this novel was actually fire. But from the second volume the MC became way too arrogant and edgy, constantly threatening people, unable to hold a proper conversation with anyone. Maybe it's because of the new magic he got which supposedly mutes his emotions, but I haven't seen even flashes of his previous self. He hasn't thought about his vol 1 GFs (only once in Vol 2 I'm pretty sure) after getting separated, the only thing he has thought about is revenge. Maybe this changes when he finds a solution to his problem or reunites with the original gang, but I will be dropping this for now.
author would Nathan get his white hair look back in the future or would he just stay as he is
Membuka SPOILER Author a quick question ....every picture you posted on discord ..are they all going to be harem members?...even the gods??...
Novel for Cultured Men only. With good amount of lemons, romance, story and a lot of waifus of different races! No NTR. NO YURI. Ask any questions and I will answer
honestly, if the novel had a more mainstream name, i'd wager that it would've been even better known and more successful. that's how much i like the story. mc is quite the horny guy but don't let the smut distract you from a quite great story. especially the current greek mythology arc left me wanting for more and am quite looking forward to more chapters. author really knows how to write. the smut tooš. very nice. mc is having a nice development, the side characters are also their own people and not a copy past of each other and the setting and background is nicely created. my only criticism would be the 1 chapter/day upload. what torture! it's criminal to have such a good story and only provide us with a stable, but small daily upload. other than that, if the novel continues as is and keeps the level of writing, then i'm in until the end.
Need some new novels like this ? Overpower Mc and system Beauty female with Strong caracters Please please please Please please please Please please please
Author how come every Greek now know that Achilles is a 'she'?...I thought they didn't know...and why is she showing off her and Nathan's baby...to the Greeks I thought she hated them...ur not making any sense....
This novel is a masterpiece. The characters are great (especially the protagonist) the story is peak. The fight scenes are very well written aswell.
Read it on another free website. One of the best story. Masterpiece!!! kept me glued till the end. Made account in this website to thank the writer. Keep writing mann...
Despite the very generic title this novel has been surprisingly good. I was a little hesitant at the end of the first act and was contemplating dropping it, but I'm really glad I didn't as the novel has really found its stride since. From the demon kingdom, to the now Trojan War it has been a delight to read. Keep up the good work author!
This is my second review as I feel it needed another oneā¦.the story can be predictable at times but thereās only so much a human can do to make things unpredictableā¦Khione needs to come back and once she does this is automatically a 5 star
slow update š„² hope you can update 1 chapter every 1 day or 2 to three days
i like this novel but, please don't waste chapters on someone nobody likes Ajax he's an extra and your MC can already rival a god if he goes all out so don't make the fight longer, make it shorter for it to be cool and Baddass, you just make the fight longer if he fought someone like a god, that's all. it's just ive been reading so many novels with OP MC and it makes the readers don't support it because when they got so strong they'll nerf him for some random reason. I've read this from Victor of MTWABV before the chapter hits 800. "if i make OP mc, i shouldn't make him weak when fighting extra despite the enemies marvelous historical data, because they aren't the MC of my story"
Itās a good story, worth reading,but it loses our coz things are predictable cliches, at times, and my goddess Khione isnāt back yet either šš„¹
Overall it's pretty good atleast to my test. I like op chad mcs and it has one. If mcs are likeable then i usually read it. But it's world building is not great. I still don't understand where the counties exist. And the power lvl is pretty inconsistent, at first it was represented by levels, but later the lvl system is completely gone. But great job author, keep it up.
The main character is truly unlikeable. I am not a big fan of forceful relationships. in my eyes forcing slaves to do your s*exual desires is r*pe, which is truly odd to write about in a "good" light. The main character to me seems kinda corny, I feel as if his character is an appeal to an edgy audience who feel as if they're cooler than they really are. The writing quality from what I can see isn't bad at all. The sentences and ideas are spun together well. It isn't hard to imagine the background the characters are in. And the main character no matter how unlikeable he is, the author does a good job at showing what type of character he is in just the first chapter. When writing a character who is not a good person, it really is difficult to still make them likable to the audience, in my humble opinion the execution leaves me with a bitter taste in my mouth. I also was not a fan of how the characters interacted with each other, the interactions felt a little too forced for me, too unrealistic. But it wasn't unrealistic in an interesting or funny type of way. All in all, if you are weirdly into r*pe or super edgy mc's (who is lowkey just a loser), this novel is worth a shot. Perhaps things get better later on.
Membuka SPOILER I like how the story progresses, keep writing Author this is a masterpiece, and highly recommended can't wait to read the next update š„ā¤ļøāš„ā¤ļøāš„ā¤ļøāš„ā¤ļøāš„ā¤ļøāš„ā¤ļøāš„ā¤ļøāš„ā¤ļøāš„ā¤ļøāš„
some chapter that should have been combined have been separated which makes it disappointing after the wait... rest all is are, too good to be real
A little too bloated for my taste. Plot progression is ridiculously slow. Nevertheless, quite entertaining.
Writing style is way to unorganised and poor story development. Totally waste of time
Author a quick question ....will Nathan ever have a women in his harem who is not a virgin ...I mean like Helen of Troy ..she is just used goods you know... having girls in harem who are not virgin doesn't sound so good ....have you thought about it ?
honestly guys this book is very addicting to read. once you start you're hooked and feining for new chapters. I warn you now, you will enjoy it.
To be honest, I did not expect that I would be able to read the first chapters so well, everything was read in one breath, building peace, relationships, people, everything is fine, I do not like that dark topics were raised in the third volume, but I think it needs to be experienced, I can't wait for what it will happen next. One minus, the system and characteristics are missing, again, if you have already entered it, then you need to continue, although I myself understand that this is an easy way for the authors to type 500 characters in a chapter.
I really enjoyed the novel up until Volume 3, but after that, it took a direction I didnāt find appealing. The story began to focus heavily on background informationālike what the gods are doing or events in other locationsāand it moved away from focusing on the main character and their companions. While I understand the need for world-building, this extra information felt overwhelming and disconnected from the core plot that initially drew me in. Because of this, Iāve become less motivated to unlock and read new chapters. Even when I did, I didnāt enjoy them as much. Many of the chapters felt like filler, and I was hoping for more focus on the main storyline and character development. Whatās more frustrating is the lack of response from the author. I left feedback and comments in hopes of some acknowledgment, but thereās been no replyānot even a simple like to show the feedback was seen. I even joined the Discord server, though it was initially for illustrations, but later I wanted to ask something about the novel with other fans and the author. However, thereās no dedicated channel for conversations, which makes it even more disappointing. It feels like readersā voices arenāt being heard.
damnnnnnn..... author what did you make after reading it I am longing for more ..
I'm going to be honest and say that the first volume of this novel was actually fire. But from the second volume the MC became way too arrogant and edgy, constantly threatening people, unable to hold a proper conversation with anyone. Maybe it's because of the new magic he got which supposedly mutes his emotions, but I haven't seen even flashes of his previous self. He hasn't thought about his vol 1 GFs (only once in Vol 2 I'm pretty sure) after getting separated, the only thing he has thought about is revenge. Maybe this changes when he finds a solution to his problem or reunites with the original gang, but I will be dropping this for now.
author would Nathan get his white hair look back in the future or would he just stay as he is
Membuka SPOILER Author a quick question ....every picture you posted on discord ..are they all going to be harem members?...even the gods??...
Novel for Cultured Men only. With good amount of lemons, romance, story and a lot of waifus of different races! No NTR. NO YURI. Ask any questions and I will answer