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Good but slow writing. The writing Quality is good but the Stability of Updates is poor. He should not visit other worlds without making his family more powerful. Please get 2 posts/week.
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Writing quality is 5 star 👍👍 . But, MC is a charity giving Moron, i just can't stand. Hope he dies an ugly death and Voldemort wins.
Liking the story so far(Ch.5). The writing is above avarage compared to most WN Fanfics and I love that the chapters are long enough to be quite satisfying. Keep up the Goodwork, hoping to read more chaps.
Good but slow writing. The writing Quality is good but the Stability of Updates is poor. He should not visit other worlds without making his family more powerful. Please get 2 posts/week.
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Writing quality is 5 star 👍👍 . But, MC is a charity giving Moron, i just can't stand. Hope he dies an ugly death and Voldemort wins.
Liking the story so far(Ch.5). The writing is above avarage compared to most WN Fanfics and I love that the chapters are long enough to be quite satisfying. Keep up the Goodwork, hoping to read more chaps.
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