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whatever you're doing here i don't know. are you gege akutami family? bad characters with stupid nonsensical plots. I really do like the beginning until the author chose to spoil it with useless gore and suffering.
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great start to the novel, interesting premise, I also like the mc. hope it will grain traction. Good luck to the author and keep up the nice work.
The Chapters is short but I enjoyed it! Hehee The Mc choose to be a villain anyway Looking forward Author More Chapters pls.[img=recommend][img=update]
Although this has the generic leveling system. The writing in this web novel really save the show for me, it is very creative and the pacing is excellent too. Highly recommend
This was a very good and creative novel. It's ideas were profound nonetheless. It's narration just flows and because of that, It was hard to put down. It was a wonderful story to read and good luck. Hope this review encourages you to step forward. And no dropping please.....
Since its just the beginning I won't judge I will just give a review because this story has promise, don't let me down.
Currently on chapter ten and I have a bone to pick with that god we saw for like one scene but he seems like a really dog, nevertheless, nice story, love the stability in updates!!
Really fun read, I like the way you still keep mysteries and intrigue in the story, and yes the writing quality could be improved, because it does have some error's overall that could by pass by me. I'm into the gluttony a lot and could do with more information on her.
Its maybe not the best writing quality but the story and the world is very interesting, I like the concept of the story and the worldbuilding is kind of weird but at the same time understanding. I personally am a big fan of the dungeon starting it helps us see how much he'll grow and the twist and turns are just shocking to me. Please keep up the good work.
Great concept! The plot just keeps me excited every time I scroll down the page. The writing style was clear enough for me, but it could be better. But for now, it was good! Keep it up, author! Wish you luck, and hope you finish this book. Cause the ending piqued my interest.
this is my honest review the plot u are writing is good but the chapters need a lot of editing for example on the first chapter the plot was so rushed and as for the rest of the chapters they were very short. I like ur Idea but your writing style needs more work.
honest review. only 49 chapters. I don't like it. you finished it too early, man.
Membuka SPOILER whatever you're doing here i don't know. are you gege akutami family? bad characters with stupid nonsensical plots. I really do like the beginning until the author chose to spoil it with useless gore and suffering.
Membuka SPOILER great start to the novel, interesting premise, I also like the mc. hope it will grain traction. Good luck to the author and keep up the nice work.
The Chapters is short but I enjoyed it! Hehee The Mc choose to be a villain anyway Looking forward Author More Chapters pls.[img=recommend][img=update]
Although this has the generic leveling system. The writing in this web novel really save the show for me, it is very creative and the pacing is excellent too. Highly recommend
This was a very good and creative novel. It's ideas were profound nonetheless. It's narration just flows and because of that, It was hard to put down. It was a wonderful story to read and good luck. Hope this review encourages you to step forward. And no dropping please.....
Since its just the beginning I won't judge I will just give a review because this story has promise, don't let me down.
Currently on chapter ten and I have a bone to pick with that god we saw for like one scene but he seems like a really dog, nevertheless, nice story, love the stability in updates!!
Really fun read, I like the way you still keep mysteries and intrigue in the story, and yes the writing quality could be improved, because it does have some error's overall that could by pass by me. I'm into the gluttony a lot and could do with more information on her.
Its maybe not the best writing quality but the story and the world is very interesting, I like the concept of the story and the worldbuilding is kind of weird but at the same time understanding. I personally am a big fan of the dungeon starting it helps us see how much he'll grow and the twist and turns are just shocking to me. Please keep up the good work.
Great concept! The plot just keeps me excited every time I scroll down the page. The writing style was clear enough for me, but it could be better. But for now, it was good! Keep it up, author! Wish you luck, and hope you finish this book. Cause the ending piqued my interest.
this is my honest review the plot u are writing is good but the chapters need a lot of editing for example on the first chapter the plot was so rushed and as for the rest of the chapters they were very short. I like ur Idea but your writing style needs more work.
honest review. only 49 chapters. I don't like it. you finished it too early, man.
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