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First of all I like the story. The only problem I have with it is that it feels rushed, like the author wants to finish as fast as possible.
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A great story so far so keep up the amazing work 💯 💯 💯 💯 💯 .
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Cool, fun and easy to read strong Ash harem story, both as a treiner and person.
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First of all I like the story. The only problem I have with it is that it feels rushed, like the author wants to finish as fast as possible.
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A great story so far so keep up the amazing work 💯 💯 💯 💯 💯 .
Cool, fun and easy to read strong Ash harem story, both as a treiner and person.