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Uzumaki of the Six Eyes
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Choking to death on his love letter, now named Satoru, finds himself reborn as a helpless babe in the unforgiving world of Naruto. He lands in the lap of destiny, nestled amongst the vibrant red haired Uzumaki clan, during a period of false peace before the Second Shinobi War. But Satoru isn't your average infant. Reborn with the unparalleled power and name of The Honored One, his silver hair and piercing blue eyes hold a secret – the potential to rewrite the bloody history of the ninja world.
But how will a silver haired, blue kid person from the modern world fare along alone in a world filled with war, violence, death and destruction. Will he be able to protect those he loves or will he be protected by them only to lose them.
Every otaku dreams of being reincarnated but is it truly a blessing or just a cruel joke from fate.
I do not own any of the characters from Naruto written by the one and only Masahi Kishimoto or Jujutsu Kaisen by Gege Akutami. I only hold rights of any kind to my OCs.
Love y'all for reading my fanfic. Criticism is welcomed.
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I have read a lotta fanfics whose MC has their power based if fuinjutsu haven't really read one where uzushio is still active. nevertheless, despite the fact that this is a new author, it seems to have a lotta potential and there's a setup for a big novel here, given the fact that we're just supposedly shortly after the first Shinobi war. I hope the author takes his time to write what he wants what he enjoys and just uses criticism as just that, criticism. This has a lot of potential, and I would hate to see it join the pile of dropped novels.
Shameless review from the author. Thanks for reading. I will try to upload at least once a day.
(PT-BR) No geral a história está muito boa, nada para criticar realmente, afinal mesmo lendo muito não sou um crítico profissional, na minha visão como consumidor assíduo de fanfics essa história está boa.
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Plot seems interesting so far, grammar is decent and not much can be said about the baby MC for now. Atleast he doesn’t seem to be an edgelord so that is a plus. But what does bug me is the constant shift in POV’s that happens 3-5 times in a chapter. This wouldn’t be so bad if the chapters were around 5-10k words but with only 1-2k it is literally 300-500 words and a shift. It constantly breaks the immersion of the reader and the author could have easily dedicated a whole chaptee to the different POV’s instead of making this bothersome constant jumping between characters.