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overall your concept is good but after reading it thoroughly I found out story is getting predictable, No one could challenged MC properly up until now ...
This is actual peace and is amazing I love reading this and hope it come out more often
Very good start honestly so much better than other tensura fics hard to find one that isn’t a 1 for 1 plot line even tho this is close it’s still better than others for the character development please don’t drop this author
Love it please continue Also can I know your update time plzzz🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹😛😛🥹🥹🥹😛😛😛😛🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹
New Chapter When ? please release new chapters soon .This is my Favourite Tensura Fic.
Author) as Artoria builds a church, she could use avalon as her divine domain.
Its a good concept. But its like 99.9% of all the other tensura ff's where the mc just follows the slime around, so you could say it's just a copy-paste story with a different mc and different skills. O and the autho made himself a god, because they have egomania. If you are okay with a copy paste ff then read it. If you arent then don't waste your time. read 20/35 chapters.
Please update Arturo’s is my favorite character and there’s few good Tensura fics
Here are five stars for Artoria. But really, I like how whenever something happens, Rimuru just runs to find Artoria like she is Doraemon. Also, I am curious about who is going to be the first one to get hit in the face by Excalibur's giant beam.
overall it's a really good idea unfortunately the execution is not great The dialogue skips around and it doesn't seem like well thought out or real conversations the ideas kind of jump around without logical connection I really want to like it because I love the idea but the way it's written just doesn't make sense and I can't force myself to keep reading it
here's my opinion on this novel: it's not bad, it's not good either because when reading the interaction of characters, it's kinda lackluster overall i had fun reading this as a compensation for my inexperienced review, here's the N-word pass which gives you the privileged to use all the existing N words especially those that dabble with dark arts
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it's honestly quite normal but new ...normal because there is quite a few artoria novels ..new because the setting is artoria in tensura and they include The reincarnation genre it makes for an interesting story and for my personal preference I like to think of it as a genderbend
I really like this one. great character (I like the artoria you chose) the MC while OP doesn't goes around destroying everything. you change the plot for the better. and I'm hoping you keep updating this story.
people just give this a five star because it's artoria in tensura and of course people who like a mc that has no goal in mind and just follow the mc(rimuru) around
Amazing story. Some things that could be improved like how artoria acts and how she speaks but otherwise really good.
Not many artoria books or good Tensura fics and this legend gave us both keep it up man.
This is just sad, the first chapter had me, but 2nd to 8th lost me. The author is unresponsive to anything or anyone I honestly dont blame ya for it, you should have also added in the synopsis that it's a tag along with Rimuru. and honestly for someone so powerful it could have been a stand alone for his own adventure but you do you, Just disappointed that it turned out like that.Writing: 4 starStory dev: 2 star just a rehash of the Original with a strap on of OC.Characters: 5 star it's artoria what else can I say.Update: 4 starWB: 3 star
she plays second fiddle to rimuru, i was expecting a kingdom building or something in those lines(meaning she makes her own kingdom,etc) but she's just being a general to rimuru and becomes his plot Armor....
In the beginning much of the story is a play by play of the original with only a few extra dialogues added. This continues until just before the attack on the ogre village, which is around chapter 14, at which point the plot that the author has finally decided to show is getting heavily forced to work with little to no reason as to why or how it fits in or works. It has the correct components to be a good story if only the author would stop heavily forcing the plot to just work. You aren't Todd Howard my guy.
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overall your concept is good but after reading it thoroughly I found out story is getting predictable, No one could challenged MC properly up until now ...
This is actual peace and is amazing I love reading this and hope it come out more often
Very good start honestly so much better than other tensura fics hard to find one that isn’t a 1 for 1 plot line even tho this is close it’s still better than others for the character development please don’t drop this author
Love it please continue Also can I know your update time plzzz🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹😛😛🥹🥹🥹😛😛😛😛🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹
New Chapter When ? please release new chapters soon .This is my Favourite Tensura Fic.
Author) as Artoria builds a church, she could use avalon as her divine domain.
Its a good concept. But its like 99.9% of all the other tensura ff's where the mc just follows the slime around, so you could say it's just a copy-paste story with a different mc and different skills. O and the autho made himself a god, because they have egomania. If you are okay with a copy paste ff then read it. If you arent then don't waste your time. read 20/35 chapters.
Please update Arturo’s is my favorite character and there’s few good Tensura fics
Here are five stars for Artoria. But really, I like how whenever something happens, Rimuru just runs to find Artoria like she is Doraemon. Also, I am curious about who is going to be the first one to get hit in the face by Excalibur's giant beam.
overall it's a really good idea unfortunately the execution is not great The dialogue skips around and it doesn't seem like well thought out or real conversations the ideas kind of jump around without logical connection I really want to like it because I love the idea but the way it's written just doesn't make sense and I can't force myself to keep reading it
here's my opinion on this novel: it's not bad, it's not good either because when reading the interaction of characters, it's kinda lackluster overall i had fun reading this as a compensation for my inexperienced review, here's the N-word pass which gives you the privileged to use all the existing N words especially those that dabble with dark arts
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it's honestly quite normal but new ...normal because there is quite a few artoria novels ..new because the setting is artoria in tensura and they include The reincarnation genre it makes for an interesting story and for my personal preference I like to think of it as a genderbend
I really like this one. great character (I like the artoria you chose) the MC while OP doesn't goes around destroying everything. you change the plot for the better. and I'm hoping you keep updating this story.
people just give this a five star because it's artoria in tensura and of course people who like a mc that has no goal in mind and just follow the mc(rimuru) around
Amazing story. Some things that could be improved like how artoria acts and how she speaks but otherwise really good.
Not many artoria books or good Tensura fics and this legend gave us both keep it up man.
This is just sad, the first chapter had me, but 2nd to 8th lost me. The author is unresponsive to anything or anyone I honestly dont blame ya for it, you should have also added in the synopsis that it's a tag along with Rimuru. and honestly for someone so powerful it could have been a stand alone for his own adventure but you do you, Just disappointed that it turned out like that.Writing: 4 starStory dev: 2 star just a rehash of the Original with a strap on of OC.Characters: 5 star it's artoria what else can I say.Update: 4 starWB: 3 star
she plays second fiddle to rimuru, i was expecting a kingdom building or something in those lines(meaning she makes her own kingdom,etc) but she's just being a general to rimuru and becomes his plot Armor....
In the beginning much of the story is a play by play of the original with only a few extra dialogues added. This continues until just before the attack on the ogre village, which is around chapter 14, at which point the plot that the author has finally decided to show is getting heavily forced to work with little to no reason as to why or how it fits in or works. It has the correct components to be a good story if only the author would stop heavily forcing the plot to just work. You aren't Todd Howard my guy.
so far, its's one of the best tensura fanfic I've ever seen.👍👍