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Pretty great read. good grammar , character interactions and story development. relationship until now seems pretty real and well thought out. As for following the plot, there was some major changes , how that effects the plot; we'll have to see.
Really solid start, there are some grammatical errors, but they don’t really detract much from the story. Really like where this is going and I hope you can continue it.
Pretty great read. good grammar , character interactions and story development. relationship until now seems pretty real and well thought out. As for following the plot, there was some major changes , how that effects the plot; we'll have to see.
Really solid start, there are some grammatical errors, but they don’t really detract much from the story. Really like where this is going and I hope you can continue it.
Good work, just not sure if the story has been dropped. Hope he continues.