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the main charecter is ather not someone reincarnated asdhim but the charecter itself but u havent written it like the charecter at all in fact its been butchered you even said hes from earth when he very clearly is not then u went on to making him afraid of godsand other things when he straight up challeged a god in the opening scene then later in game numerous times
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[certain dragon god slide to your stream with a smug] [certain dragon god approve!!!]
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the main charecter is ather not someone reincarnated asdhim but the charecter itself but u havent written it like the charecter at all in fact its been butchered you even said hes from earth when he very clearly is not then u went on to making him afraid of godsand other things when he straight up challeged a god in the opening scene then later in game numerous times