Overlord: The Multiverse

LV 15

Gh0st00

well there is quite a few mistakes like things being mentioned that we're actually never mentioned but even though the MC says they were mentioned even though they weren't and it's a Pokemon harem not my cup of tea

LV 4

Fantastic_Rayan_04

Great Start Bro continue what you are doing bro I hope it will become a masterpiece like Multiverse cliché or maybe better I sure think and hope so so please don't drop it or be concerned aur critisim it is good story

LV 12

Black_Bolt_

My Fan fiction so I must give it a full stat.

LV 4

Volhter

Okay, the beginning was so-so, but it got better with the chapters. I like MC's personality. The interactions with the guild members were fun, which made me a little uncomfortable when they just disappeared. And now the chapters are getting shorter and lacking in content...

LV 5

Yuri_is_Ntr

22 chapters, or something like this. Start was a mindless cliche, but that's just how webnovel are... But after this was something unexpected! A weirdly realistic and unnecessary "funny" overlord story... Nope, not from the start of the series, where mamonga gets to a new world. But from playing a game... Which doesn't operate like a game at all. Somehow, one guy could take a raid boss, newly one, means he didn't overleveled them. It's called a "WOLRD ENEMY" not just for show. Which online game works like this? I just don't know... I'm not intrested in Sao level of playing a game in the novel. The stakes are null, how is this supposed to be interesting? Oh, right... We got a clown on a main character. Truly, those npc would appreciate you sense of humor. ... You get my point, it's just that's useless and unbelievable.

LV 12

Universe_Supreme

Good start and good potential only thing I don't like to much is the story being a bit heavy on the comedy aspect. Every sentence has a comedic comparison in it even while he is fighting. The unseriousness of the mc just doesn't make me feel like he is a vampire god just feels like a cocky jokester.

LV 14

omnioutergod

don't drop it plz I'm seen alot of authors just drop a good story after 2 or 3 chapters I'm like it so far

LV 1

Kaxharu_Ryuzaki

fue una buena lectura, pero la personalidad del protagonista no me gusta, hace tantas referencia y chistes que luego empezaron a volverse aburridos. Las interacciones con los otros personajes fue entretenida, pero sus decisiones son demasiado aleatorias, no parece tener un gran plan o no parece tenerlo, talvez sea por la gran cantidad de comedia. No fue tanto de mi agrado. 3☆ Diseño personaje 4☆ Todo lo demás

LV 4

SHADOW_M0narch

it's a pretty good read and the progress speed is also good I'm looking forward to the future updates

LV 13

Tomataoo

i can describe this fic with two words: child fantasy. and like all others children fantasies it have: - hollow characters - absolutely bland mc - a lot of illogical actions

LV 4

Zneo_12345

if you love overlord this fic should curve the craving for new content

LV 11

Ignorantedemrda

10/10 le tengo muchas expectativas, espero que puedas terminar ya que muchos escritores siempre lo dejan a la mitad, igualmente se los entiende tienen una vida

LV 4

gamermax_bg

this is really not that bad and i hope you continue this for a while :D

LV 1

Beniss

Everything is going too fast. You don't even have time to enjoy the fanfiction .. . . ... . . ... . . ... . . ... . . ... . . ... . . ... . . ... . . ... . . ... . . ... . . ... . . ... . . ... . . ... . . ... . . .. . . ..

LV 4

Dylan_Massey_2625

Good story so far, looking forward to what comes next.🙂👍

LV 12

Anathe

I'm about 40 chapters in and I have to say I'm quite enjoying my read so far

LV 3

DaoistRXP0e7

la historia tiene buen potencial tiene buen desarrollo lo recomiendo es graciosa la historia te puede entretener mucho tiene buena acción también el autor le pone imágenes para ver mejor la historia 😉👌

LV 4

Quinton1200

a great story. I do feel cheated, though. I saw at the end of every chapter that I could join his pateron for 3$, assuming I would get the 60~ extra chapters only to find out that the 3$ tier I only six chapters and that I need to pay 25$ for all of them.. 🥲

LV 2

AlexCyberHeart

1/3/3/1/2