SpiderGwen: I have a system?!

LV 14

Tyman847

It's a really good fanfic. I'm really hooked and can't wait for the next chapter.

LV 4

Justin_Bailey_7636

pretty good I like the pacing of the story so far can't wait for the 5th chapter onward to see how it develops from here 😀

LV 15

Rizzler4263

Just wish it would be a top priority of the author

LV 15

Rizzler4263

Top tier good stuff, got no compaints. Fun, fast-paced, good character, not too serious… good stuff.

LV 1

Toby_Gamer_2577

My friend, I loved your fanfic so far, I loved everything, congratulations and the 3rd time that I'm rereading it since the last update of the new chapter, I honestly just hope that you abandon this raw pearl that you have in your hands, and I say again to goods for fic.

LV 1

DaoistFvWdGI

I loved this story and its main character. The plot is captivating and the character development is exceptional. I'm looking forward to more. I hope the author continues to publish!

LV 4

Fu_Hua_

Hmm... I love Pure Untainted Yuri so this gets my 5 Stars

LV 4

Piotr_Uklejewski

A very good story, it has its problems but there is always something to improve, it's always worth listening to the opinions and ideas of others, but don't let them destroy what you want to create.

LV 13

Alex_Foster_2624

I love all your books and can't wait for more chapters. reading your books gets me literally on the edge of my seat I am a realy big fan of your work please don't stop writing you have a gift :)

LV 13

SleepySmile

i would put 6 star if it was not for the lack of chapter

LV 13

Omar_Alflh

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LV 15

OCspeller

It is an exciting fanfic. Since the setting is the comics world of DC/Marvel Universe, all the characters/references mentioned are easily understood if you have ever read or watched Marvel/DC. Even if you haven't read/watch Marvel/DC, you get a good understanding of the powers granted to the MC. Or else you can do a Google Search and you immediately can picture the hero/villain with a wiki page of their powers. Nice. The system barely makes a showing here except to show stats and granted rewards. this isn't one of those "symbiotic" systems. it feels more like the AI of a game, or a good secretary/butler. Which is good since the focus is now literally on Gwen's development. However, the story seems to develop too fast. I feel she is really reeeeaaaallly OP. By the 15th chapter, she is basically immortal. Not an Undying, but an Immortal. I mean, she literally receives the knowledge and powers of superheroes/supervillains every few chapters, by the handful. One of them had the ability to survive without breathing, and a few had the ability for rapid regeneration/healing. She is developing too fast.

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Cody_Mohr

I enjoyed reading your three stories they are unique and quite interesting I hope you continue all three of them

LV 5

BrabbitX

ch 17. so far really good for a YURI. Not a fan how the whole universe is AU just so that Author can up the age of 1 character by 2 years, it's clearly done so that when they get together with MC they are 18 instead of younger. Funny how the whole universe in the story needs to become AU just for this.

LV 3

vaicomerseumorcego

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terrificarmy5

soooo good . .

LV 4

Cuslto

A really good fanfic¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

LV 4

XDestroyer867

Great story with great quality please do not drop

LV 3

Fabrice_Hassan

Amazing fic ,Just wish the author would focus on this more