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For now, this novel is interesting but i hate the mc view point (his good personality) i mean. We talk about vampire at least make him more logical.
This seems to be just the beginning, but I like systems, especially when applied to a vampire. Curious to read the rest, and see where it all leads.
Hi, I'm the author. Well, I put 5 stars but I'm not very objective ahaha! This is the second webnovel I've written, and I'm going to do my best to make sure you enjoy it. The story in the first few chapters may seem simple, but it's just to lay the groundwork. Don't worry, the rest will be very interesting (I hope aha)! So don't hesitate to give me constructive feedback! Sorry for my non-native English, but I'll try to improve too! Enjoy !
For now, this novel is interesting but i hate the mc view point (his good personality) i mean. We talk about vampire at least make him more logical.
This seems to be just the beginning, but I like systems, especially when applied to a vampire. Curious to read the rest, and see where it all leads.
Hi, I'm the author. Well, I put 5 stars but I'm not very objective ahaha! This is the second webnovel I've written, and I'm going to do my best to make sure you enjoy it. The story in the first few chapters may seem simple, but it's just to lay the groundwork. Don't worry, the rest will be very interesting (I hope aha)! So don't hesitate to give me constructive feedback! Sorry for my non-native English, but I'll try to improve too! Enjoy !