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I'm reborn as Harry Potter
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Not quite Harry, in a not quite standard situation. The magical world has long since written Potter off as dead, but he's the boy who survived, so there's no getting rid of him that easily.
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yeah no thanks already putting them on the back foot make them seem like a villain then he's going to probably start doing stupid stuff and then he's going to end up being a villain anyways so no thank you your story leaves a lot to be desired in my eyes
Read till Chapter 23 and I am really starting to give up. It's like the combination of Harry and our MC was Izuku Midoriya. A cry baby who only makes rash decisions and then blames it all on 'I am a Hero/I am a Gryffindor/I am Harry Potter'. Everyone is against him except for Fleur and his family and he is still in blind hopes of changing them. I hate this so much. He is weak but jumps to solve everything.
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The overall premise is good, however it reads like a slightly better MTL. This needs a Good editor to be anything worth reading.
it's an good old harry/fleur story which most of potterheads have got bored of same plot. this story is a bad translation . there are lot of things I don't understand .
the author has come up with many great stories but there is are major flaws in this book. The grammer is horrible, things which could be fixed with simple grammerly or chatgpt. The gender of things keeps changing. then comes the MC, he is taught again and again he is acting stupid and that it costs him his dears and gets torturred for it. He even died cuz of his own stupidity which he agrees he was stupid for in hindsight, twice!! and the what does he do ? does he change finally ? no he keeps acting stupid while saying what he did before was indeed stupid. ROB told him that people in this AU are smarter, then he keeps on saying people are stupid while he himself keeps on getting caught. im ranting because i wanted to like this story so much cuz of the good things it had. but i had enough once he didnt kill snape who caught him to give to voldemort at chapter 31. btw he mostly is surviving by luck till now.
This guy is either the stupidest mc ever or the author is just throwing felt doesnโt matter that the story make no sense I canโt even tell what going on avoid
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The storyline as a whole was good. There were some spelling and grammar errors, but not enough to be off putting
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It's gloomy, but I really like it, well, for more than 20 chapters it's time to promote the hero in the imbue ัะพ๐๐ฅณ๐ฅณ๐ฅณ๐ฅณ๐ฅณ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
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I think updates will be once a week (either way), but I will post a chapter for every 300 stones. Let's throw me into the gem rankings, because I haven't been there in a while. (((