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Bro I make a fanfic about pokemon the harem have all of the female gym leaders and champions and elite four and the name of my fanfiction is a legend make his legend again in pokemon
Nice story but grammar is the problem.I liked mtl version more.If you have mtl reading experience try reading it in readerhub.com,there you can change names of the characters to your liking and mtl quality is pretty good.
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Author where are you now? Your work has so much potential and so is beautiful pls continue it.
very good novel, I hope with all my heart that it continues because it would honestly be a shame if such a good novel fell into oblivion, thank you for publishing
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This an updated rating I've catch to the newest chapters and I can say this is a good pokemon fanfic at first I was worry the story was gonna be about ash harem taking most of the story but it's not but it's mostly misty and Sabrina and the author still wants to add 50s members to the harem and the 18s scenes can be skip and author let's u know when it's gonna start and end ill update this rating when I change my mind so far so good I have no almost no complains but to not add all those love interests (50 harem girls)
Everything is good about your story except for all the bad grammar and writing errors that plague every single chapter (if possible can you please go back and fix them so this story can become better to read)
Best Pokemon fanfic till now keep up , Plz complete the whole Pokemon journey we will keep supporting you
One of the best Pokemon fanfictions. The only problem is the updating. Updating of chapters is very slow.
Mr. author, you forgot about Sonia in galar, it is great material for waifu.................................... ................................................ . .................................................. .................................................. ... .................................................. .................................................. ...........................
I enjoy the pacing and fluid interactions with the characters. I do like that the author does pay attention to what the reader opinion, but still has his own clear vision. I will offer ideas in some of my comments, feel free to use them if I can inspire your creative flow for putting out more chapters. I hope to see where you decide to take your story and bring it to life. I appreciate the time and effort you spent on it. P.S. I'll be using this gif for any future ideas I'll will offer.
read up to 30 chaps. and still writing has no improvement yet my brain had enough🤯💀💀💀,,like what is this - ("but now ash can earn his own money and travel without having to work so hard for his mother delia" totally different from what you wish to express) and a lot more of mistakes like this or even worse in every chapter, i repeat every chapter that reader's has to wrack their brains to make sense of what you want to express. so rather than releasing multiples off chap. in a short span of time, you could just take your time to write a better quality (just my suggestion though as it's up to you) WRITING QUALITY- 1⭐ UPDATING STABILITY- 5⭐ STORY DEVELOPMENT-4⭐ CHARACTER DESIGN- 4⭐ WORLD BACKGROUND- 5⭐ 4⭐ for the story development as i didn't reach the depth to judge your story.
Pretty good fanfic, even though it's a translation Stromerthaha edits things so that it doesn't cause much cringe as normal Chinese stories so in addition to adding his own things. Besides some sentences that I have to reread to make sense of them and that some names some characters or places are wrong (like calling Acapulco to Porta Vista), the only negative thing is that the pokemon battles are quite short, the MC's pokemon are so dominated that they almost finish them all with an attack.
this novel started as a translation but the author made great changes to the story and made it so better than the original novel. keep it up and give more updates.
could've been a good story, too bad even if the translator/editor is doing a good job but the OG work still shows a gross charizard fanboy... you could feel the toxic masculinity of the insecure tiny peepee chinese author when it didn't want to evolve bulbasaur cause Venusaur and Ivysaur have flowers
Melhor fan fic de pokemon de todas, seguindo o caminho de Ash mas fazendo suas camadas e capturando novos pokemon........................,..........
Membuka SPOILER
Interesting story, i always hated the fact,how Ash/Satoshi, just left behind some of his Pokemons and never come back for them.Sure in Pokemon Journey we have some comebacks from his older Pokemons, but no everyone,another thing is him just restarting everything, each time he travels to another region, and taking only Pikachu with him,and never again calling back his other Pokemon who are left on Profesor Oak ranch.
A melhor fan fic de Pokémon---------‐-‐‐,,,,, ,,, ---------------------‐-----‐------------‐-‐‐,,,,, ,,, ---------------------‐-----‐-----
shameless review from authour thank you all the people who are supporting me to write this fic people . people who are reading this story should have noticed it's completely changing from original fic based on mine and your idea's i will suggest some changes if you like comment me this story will stabilize more.
Very good translation and novel, hope that you keep updating it ...........................................................................
i like the story ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Excellent original story, if it can no longer be considered a translation, try reading the Chinese MTL and it is garbage. Keep it up. More
It might have been a good read if there weren't so many spelling and grammatical errors. Commas, quotations, etc are also not always used correctly and make reading extremely hard. The scenarios are also in 1st and 3rd person perspective on the same paragraph which makes reading very hard Nowadays there are many language assist tools like quillboat, grammarly which can help solve these issues, so I think if the author ran these chapters through them and updated the chapters, it would be better
Bro I make a fanfic about pokemon the harem have all of the female gym leaders and champions and elite four and the name of my fanfiction is a legend make his legend again in pokemon
Nice story but grammar is the problem.I liked mtl version more.If you have mtl reading experience try reading it in readerhub.com,there you can change names of the characters to your liking and mtl quality is pretty good.
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Author where are you now? Your work has so much potential and so is beautiful pls continue it.
very good novel, I hope with all my heart that it continues because it would honestly be a shame if such a good novel fell into oblivion, thank you for publishing
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This an updated rating I've catch to the newest chapters and I can say this is a good pokemon fanfic at first I was worry the story was gonna be about ash harem taking most of the story but it's not but it's mostly misty and Sabrina and the author still wants to add 50s members to the harem and the 18s scenes can be skip and author let's u know when it's gonna start and end ill update this rating when I change my mind so far so good I have no almost no complains but to not add all those love interests (50 harem girls)
Everything is good about your story except for all the bad grammar and writing errors that plague every single chapter (if possible can you please go back and fix them so this story can become better to read)
Best Pokemon fanfic till now keep up , Plz complete the whole Pokemon journey we will keep supporting you
One of the best Pokemon fanfictions. The only problem is the updating. Updating of chapters is very slow.
Mr. author, you forgot about Sonia in galar, it is great material for waifu.................................... ................................................ . .................................................. .................................................. ... .................................................. .................................................. ...........................
I enjoy the pacing and fluid interactions with the characters. I do like that the author does pay attention to what the reader opinion, but still has his own clear vision. I will offer ideas in some of my comments, feel free to use them if I can inspire your creative flow for putting out more chapters. I hope to see where you decide to take your story and bring it to life. I appreciate the time and effort you spent on it. P.S. I'll be using this gif for any future ideas I'll will offer.
read up to 30 chaps. and still writing has no improvement yet my brain had enough🤯💀💀💀,,like what is this - ("but now ash can earn his own money and travel without having to work so hard for his mother delia" totally different from what you wish to express) and a lot more of mistakes like this or even worse in every chapter, i repeat every chapter that reader's has to wrack their brains to make sense of what you want to express. so rather than releasing multiples off chap. in a short span of time, you could just take your time to write a better quality (just my suggestion though as it's up to you) WRITING QUALITY- 1⭐ UPDATING STABILITY- 5⭐ STORY DEVELOPMENT-4⭐ CHARACTER DESIGN- 4⭐ WORLD BACKGROUND- 5⭐ 4⭐ for the story development as i didn't reach the depth to judge your story.
Pretty good fanfic, even though it's a translation Stromerthaha edits things so that it doesn't cause much cringe as normal Chinese stories so in addition to adding his own things. Besides some sentences that I have to reread to make sense of them and that some names some characters or places are wrong (like calling Acapulco to Porta Vista), the only negative thing is that the pokemon battles are quite short, the MC's pokemon are so dominated that they almost finish them all with an attack.
this novel started as a translation but the author made great changes to the story and made it so better than the original novel. keep it up and give more updates.
could've been a good story, too bad even if the translator/editor is doing a good job but the OG work still shows a gross charizard fanboy... you could feel the toxic masculinity of the insecure tiny peepee chinese author when it didn't want to evolve bulbasaur cause Venusaur and Ivysaur have flowers
Melhor fan fic de pokemon de todas, seguindo o caminho de Ash mas fazendo suas camadas e capturando novos pokemon........................,..........
Membuka SPOILER Interesting story, i always hated the fact,how Ash/Satoshi, just left behind some of his Pokemons and never come back for them.Sure in Pokemon Journey we have some comebacks from his older Pokemons, but no everyone,another thing is him just restarting everything, each time he travels to another region, and taking only Pikachu with him,and never again calling back his other Pokemon who are left on Profesor Oak ranch.
A melhor fan fic de Pokémon---------‐-‐‐,,,,, ,,, ---------------------‐-----‐------------‐-‐‐,,,,, ,,, ---------------------‐-----‐-----
shameless review from authour thank you all the people who are supporting me to write this fic people . people who are reading this story should have noticed it's completely changing from original fic based on mine and your idea's i will suggest some changes if you like comment me this story will stabilize more.
Very good translation and novel, hope that you keep updating it ...........................................................................
i like the story ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Excellent original story, if it can no longer be considered a translation, try reading the Chinese MTL and it is garbage. Keep it up. More
It might have been a good read if there weren't so many spelling and grammatical errors. Commas, quotations, etc are also not always used correctly and make reading extremely hard. The scenarios are also in 1st and 3rd person perspective on the same paragraph which makes reading very hard Nowadays there are many language assist tools like quillboat, grammarly which can help solve these issues, so I think if the author ran these chapters through them and updated the chapters, it would be better