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Shameless Review [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]----------------
4-4-5-5-5, the translation is great but that's coming from an MTL reader. There are still some terms that could've been translated better. I've read alien a bunch of times, and I'm ashamed to think of it as immigrants or foreigners. XD But the proper translation should be Magical Hominids, like Veelas, Sirens, Goblins etc. The story development is going well, but there are some obvious Chinese banters that I don't like much. Too much flattery ykwim. Good thing it only happens during crossover chapters which ain't a lot. Character Designs are on point so far, Credence/Aurelius (MC) acts smarter but doesn't kill like a Psycopath after he got full control of the Obscurus. Updates are great, 2ch/day and bonus chapters once powersstone milestones were reached. I'm mostly impressed by World Background, author somehow made LOL power system work in HP-verse. The whole Siren city is also a welcome surprise. ............................................................... TLDR: MC awakened as Credence Barebone during FB 1, with LOL Summoner skills and used it as summoner:champion skill to get the Obscurus in control. (SPOILER)Ch 80: MC's current runes are Sorcery(Main) - 1. Gathering Storm; 2. Summon Aery (black phoenix here). Resolve(Aux) - 1. Overgrowth
Amazing novel! This story's a really original take on the traditional harry potter fanfiction and I have to say I'm really loving it. Keep up the great work!
Nice Story I like it keep on updating😍😍😍🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏❤️🙏🙏❤️❤️❤️🙏🙏🙏❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Always wanted a ff on Aurelius, if the Chinese novel doesn't go all racist and harem filled then it would be even better but one can only hope.
Shameless Review [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]----------------
4-4-5-5-5, the translation is great but that's coming from an MTL reader. There are still some terms that could've been translated better. I've read alien a bunch of times, and I'm ashamed to think of it as immigrants or foreigners. XD But the proper translation should be Magical Hominids, like Veelas, Sirens, Goblins etc. The story development is going well, but there are some obvious Chinese banters that I don't like much. Too much flattery ykwim. Good thing it only happens during crossover chapters which ain't a lot. Character Designs are on point so far, Credence/Aurelius (MC) acts smarter but doesn't kill like a Psycopath after he got full control of the Obscurus. Updates are great, 2ch/day and bonus chapters once powersstone milestones were reached. I'm mostly impressed by World Background, author somehow made LOL power system work in HP-verse. The whole Siren city is also a welcome surprise. ............................................................... TLDR: MC awakened as Credence Barebone during FB 1, with LOL Summoner skills and used it as summoner:champion skill to get the Obscurus in control. (SPOILER)Ch 80: MC's current runes are Sorcery(Main) - 1. Gathering Storm; 2. Summon Aery (black phoenix here). Resolve(Aux) - 1. Overgrowth
Amazing novel! This story's a really original take on the traditional harry potter fanfiction and I have to say I'm really loving it. Keep up the great work!
Nice Story I like it keep on updating😍😍😍🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏❤️🙏🙏❤️❤️❤️🙏🙏🙏❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Always wanted a ff on Aurelius, if the Chinese novel doesn't go all racist and harem filled then it would be even better but one can only hope.