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First time reading a The Last of Us fanfiction, I really liked it! the beginning, I hope more updated chapters!![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Leí esta historia en una página China hasta el cap 100, después lo perdí. Así que estuve feliz cuando encontré esta traducción, pero me decepcione al ver que ya no seguis actualizado.
Mira me encantó esta historia por el sencillo hecho de qué es una historia de the last of us también por otras razones una de ellas es que el protagonista su poder es de supervivencia se basa por sus propias habilidades nada ni isekai de sistema o algo por el estilo también me encantó esta historia aún más por el hecho de que Sara está viva en esta historia y me encanta que se hayan separado para que Joel piense que Sara está muerta que si Sara y nuestro protagonista estaban con él estoy seguro que los eventos de the last of us no serían los mismos cambiarán enormemente y Joel no se arriesgaría en el poner en peligro la Sara y no se alejaría mucho de ella más aún con el mundo en ruinas y sería bonito ver un reencuentro entre los dos después de año de no verse después de 20 años sería grandioso
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The translation is subpar, I think translator didn't bother to edit this after MTL.
The translation on Kibishi78's Patreon is better compared to this where the quality dropped at maybe at the 14th chapter and made my brain cells die just from reading it.
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I generally don't comment on anything because I don't know English, but seeing this story from The Last of Us is incredible (because there's almost no xd) and it doesn't repeat the same story as much as the others, in short it's beautiful
Magnífico la historia, lo que más me gusta es que se basa en lo ordinario, un protagonista que no sabe nada de la trama y solo sabe ciertas cosas de su vida pasada de película y juegos,etc. Eso y no tiene un sistema op ni nada recogiendo mujeres como Pokémon, sobrevive con sus capacidades mortales y haciendo lo posible con sus capacidades limitadas, muy diferente de otras novelas dónde el prota corta zombies como si fueran verduras con su sistema o poderes, le quita la emoción de supervivencia y de que ya casi nada lo amenaza
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I don't care what othe reviews say but Gonna say nice translation, I already read the original it was good
good job and plus ultra!!! ill donate my stones every day ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,😆 ....... ........ ....... .....
First off this is a translated Chinese story. So you can expect the usual type of writing and speech style. The story itself is interesting and shows multiple POVs at times to show whats going on in the world and introduces the world of the Last of Us making it easier to read if you arent very familiar with background. The characters are simply designed with not a lot of depth and the world suffers from that as well. You see weird things that are typical in Chinese stories like a dagger cutting through a gun barrel, as they don't seem to know how guns tend to work. Overall its a decent time killer and interesting enough read so far. I will say that the Patreon is grossly overpriced for a translated story.
Could someone tell me in which chapter Sarah and Joel meet again? Could someone tell me in which chapter Sarah and Joel meet again? Could someone tell me in which chapter Sarah and Joel meet again?
Could someone tell me in which chapter Sarah and Joel meet again? Could someone tell me in which chapter Sarah and Joel meet again? Could someone tell me in which chapter Sarah and Joel meet again?
So far I really love this story. 😊👍. Character development is good and the Pace is nice.
Please don't drop it, please follow me from Morocco 😟😟😟😟😟😟😟[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
please just continue the story at your modest pace and please don't drop it
I used Goolde Translator so there may be errors. I'm currently reading the Chinese version and to get stressed about these communists it's very easy, in chapter 52 mc helps a random boy who lost his mother, the mc offers him food and helps him without anything in return, not to mention that this boy is dead weight . I recommend that you change these facts and make a darker and more calculating protagonist (he really makes a villain), without helping random people unless you get something in return, based on these changes you could make your own fanfic, since from what I'm seeing MC tends to get worse.
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Me gusto mucho, espero que no lo abandones y que lleges a un punto donde conozcan a ellie aunque falte mucho para eso %%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<>>>>><<<>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>____________________________/////////////////////////////////////////////===============================
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Im 70 chs ahead and so far mc is pretty disappointing. He's not useless per say since he is only 13 years old but i expect better from a transmigrator. He cant shoot, he's not that smart he ignores clues, doesn't take initiative. Sighhh its getting tiring to read
Very good fanfic so far, i hope for more chapters and i hope for a darker mc. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I decide to read the chinese fanfic from the raw sources. At chapter 473, I finally dropped the story. After the first 75 chapters, I felt the quality and pacing of the story suffers, and it story just got stalled, predictable, and boring more than a few times. But at the same time, i can't necessarily call this story trash either as the Chinese author put decent effort into the characters plot and mentioned that he was going through a lot issues. Just a decent story with many flaws.
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The author plagiarized this from a Chinese author and sells this on Pantreon as if it were his original work, what a scammer. The original work is in the answer to this post
This story seems very familiar to me from a Chinese novel, is this a translation or are you putting your own unique touch on it? I think the original version was abandoned.
.......%ghjghgfrdsfht42r78hbfrujh7hfetfdtgvrygrug5fduhv really good honestly really good,
The very first TLOU ff I read and it's gooooooooood[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Crossover !!!!!!!!!![img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
I see metro exodus i give 5 stars very and i mean very underrated trilogy if the English voice acting was better the series would be a 10 but for now its a 9.8/10
I haven't read it but the isn't any LOU fanfics out there it gets a five star for me[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Nice concept, i love this, i hope nothing bad happened to joel and tommy and also, sarah will not die here, but so far I'm loving this concept
First time reading a The Last of Us fanfiction, I really liked it! the beginning, I hope more updated chapters!![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Leí esta historia en una página China hasta el cap 100, después lo perdí. Así que estuve feliz cuando encontré esta traducción, pero me decepcione al ver que ya no seguis actualizado.
Mira me encantó esta historia por el sencillo hecho de qué es una historia de the last of us también por otras razones una de ellas es que el protagonista su poder es de supervivencia se basa por sus propias habilidades nada ni isekai de sistema o algo por el estilo también me encantó esta historia aún más por el hecho de que Sara está viva en esta historia y me encanta que se hayan separado para que Joel piense que Sara está muerta que si Sara y nuestro protagonista estaban con él estoy seguro que los eventos de the last of us no serían los mismos cambiarán enormemente y Joel no se arriesgaría en el poner en peligro la Sara y no se alejaría mucho de ella más aún con el mundo en ruinas y sería bonito ver un reencuentro entre los dos después de año de no verse después de 20 años sería grandioso
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The translation is subpar, I think translator didn't bother to edit this after MTL.
The translation on Kibishi78's Patreon is better compared to this where the quality dropped at maybe at the 14th chapter and made my brain cells die just from reading it.
Membuka SPOILER I generally don't comment on anything because I don't know English, but seeing this story from The Last of Us is incredible (because there's almost no xd) and it doesn't repeat the same story as much as the others, in short it's beautiful
Magnífico la historia, lo que más me gusta es que se basa en lo ordinario, un protagonista que no sabe nada de la trama y solo sabe ciertas cosas de su vida pasada de película y juegos,etc. Eso y no tiene un sistema op ni nada recogiendo mujeres como Pokémon, sobrevive con sus capacidades mortales y haciendo lo posible con sus capacidades limitadas, muy diferente de otras novelas dónde el prota corta zombies como si fueran verduras con su sistema o poderes, le quita la emoción de supervivencia y de que ya casi nada lo amenaza
Membuka SPOILER I don't care what othe reviews say but Gonna say nice translation, I already read the original it was good
good job and plus ultra!!! ill donate my stones every day ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,😆 ....... ........ ....... .....
First off this is a translated Chinese story. So you can expect the usual type of writing and speech style. The story itself is interesting and shows multiple POVs at times to show whats going on in the world and introduces the world of the Last of Us making it easier to read if you arent very familiar with background. The characters are simply designed with not a lot of depth and the world suffers from that as well. You see weird things that are typical in Chinese stories like a dagger cutting through a gun barrel, as they don't seem to know how guns tend to work. Overall its a decent time killer and interesting enough read so far. I will say that the Patreon is grossly overpriced for a translated story.
Could someone tell me in which chapter Sarah and Joel meet again? Could someone tell me in which chapter Sarah and Joel meet again? Could someone tell me in which chapter Sarah and Joel meet again?
Could someone tell me in which chapter Sarah and Joel meet again? Could someone tell me in which chapter Sarah and Joel meet again? Could someone tell me in which chapter Sarah and Joel meet again?
So far I really love this story. 😊👍. Character development is good and the Pace is nice.
Please don't drop it, please follow me from Morocco 😟😟😟😟😟😟😟[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
please just continue the story at your modest pace and please don't drop it
I used Goolde Translator so there may be errors. I'm currently reading the Chinese version and to get stressed about these communists it's very easy, in chapter 52 mc helps a random boy who lost his mother, the mc offers him food and helps him without anything in return, not to mention that this boy is dead weight . I recommend that you change these facts and make a darker and more calculating protagonist (he really makes a villain), without helping random people unless you get something in return, based on these changes you could make your own fanfic, since from what I'm seeing MC tends to get worse.
Membuka SPOILER Me gusto mucho, espero que no lo abandones y que lleges a un punto donde conozcan a ellie aunque falte mucho para eso %%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<>>>>><<<>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>____________________________/////////////////////////////////////////////===============================
Membuka SPOILER Im 70 chs ahead and so far mc is pretty disappointing. He's not useless per say since he is only 13 years old but i expect better from a transmigrator. He cant shoot, he's not that smart he ignores clues, doesn't take initiative. Sighhh its getting tiring to read
Very good fanfic so far, i hope for more chapters and i hope for a darker mc. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I decide to read the chinese fanfic from the raw sources. At chapter 473, I finally dropped the story. After the first 75 chapters, I felt the quality and pacing of the story suffers, and it story just got stalled, predictable, and boring more than a few times. But at the same time, i can't necessarily call this story trash either as the Chinese author put decent effort into the characters plot and mentioned that he was going through a lot issues. Just a decent story with many flaws.
Membuka SPOILER The author plagiarized this from a Chinese author and sells this on Pantreon as if it were his original work, what a scammer. The original work is in the answer to this post
This story seems very familiar to me from a Chinese novel, is this a translation or are you putting your own unique touch on it? I think the original version was abandoned.
.......%ghjghgfrdsfht42r78hbfrujh7hfetfdtgvrygrug5fduhv really good honestly really good,
The very first TLOU ff I read and it's gooooooooood[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Crossover !!!!!!!!!![img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
I see metro exodus i give 5 stars very and i mean very underrated trilogy if the English voice acting was better the series would be a 10 but for now its a 9.8/10
I haven't read it but the isn't any LOU fanfics out there it gets a five star for me[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Nice concept, i love this, i hope nothing bad happened to joel and tommy and also, sarah will not die here, but so far I'm loving this concept