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La historia es genial y me gusta mucho el desarrollo de esta especialmente la parte del desarollo de la tripulación y la reclutación de esta, aunque me gustaria que Nami se uniear a esta en lugar de Permanecer con los Sombreros de Paja
Мне понравилось. Рад, что нет "системы". Жду продолжения.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Good for a translation. Although there are some chinese terms and stuff in this story still the translator has worked hard.....................
I dunno about others, but the concept and the Cover art of the MC(?) is giving me hopes. Author please do not drop.
como é o nome em chinês dessa fanfic alguém me envia por favor 👏🏾👏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾👏🏾👏🏾🙏🏾👏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾🙏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾
even though translator have done a good job but this fic is still a chinese fic where 1.MC get brain dead after getting a system here a mythical zoan. 2.Just after a week or 2 of getting mythical zoan and a month or 2 max of getting manual to learn armament haki from crocus mc can fight kuzan to standstill going as far as giving him a scar. 3.Even though MC have left straw hats you will find him in every arc from akaoji one to water 7 to ennies loby to thriller bloark to sabaondy, well dumb chinese can't cook an original arc. etc etc chinese bullshit. Man i hate these chinese fanfic writers so much i am thinking of joining indian army in hope to catch one of these fic writers in opposite chinese army so that i can beat them to the plup
La historia es genial y me gusta mucho el desarrollo de esta especialmente la parte del desarollo de la tripulación y la reclutación de esta, aunque me gustaria que Nami se uniear a esta en lugar de Permanecer con los Sombreros de Paja
Мне понравилось. Рад, что нет "системы". Жду продолжения.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Good for a translation. Although there are some chinese terms and stuff in this story still the translator has worked hard.....................
I dunno about others, but the concept and the Cover art of the MC(?) is giving me hopes. Author please do not drop.
como é o nome em chinês dessa fanfic alguém me envia por favor 👏🏾👏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾👏🏾👏🏾🙏🏾👏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾🙏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾
even though translator have done a good job but this fic is still a chinese fic where 1.MC get brain dead after getting a system here a mythical zoan. 2.Just after a week or 2 of getting mythical zoan and a month or 2 max of getting manual to learn armament haki from crocus mc can fight kuzan to standstill going as far as giving him a scar. 3.Even though MC have left straw hats you will find him in every arc from akaoji one to water 7 to ennies loby to thriller bloark to sabaondy, well dumb chinese can't cook an original arc. etc etc chinese bullshit. Man i hate these chinese fanfic writers so much i am thinking of joining indian army in hope to catch one of these fic writers in opposite chinese army so that i can beat them to the plup