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oh well....this novel is one of best at webnovel considering how most are just porn novels....thus is such a good story....and it was done perfectly .... writing : the writing is A class... amazing way to handle...like when backstory is shown,it is shown flawlessly... keeping reader intrigued ...it truly have that western novel writing style...and not webnovel shit type .... story... this is a dark story...where our MC suffers a lot ...so dont't expect him to be a gary sue...we see his desperation and need, his weakness and strength .. its not that he doesn't try to use his future knowledge to control things....just his enemies are too smart and strong....and it is just amazing....how he have to figure his way out of imposible scenarios .... characters ...well...if one thing ..this is olace where it shine the most .....and....get my little hate too ..... author have way to make characters so human....they are not good...they are broken...used... destroyed enough that they can't care about about right ....or they are straight up strong motherfuckers...who treats others as pawns but what i like the most is her mother....that fucking bitch shit whore street bitch*beep**beep**beep**beep*... update stability ..... world : it is your normal world where a lot of races lived ..elves,akashas,humans,high humans,dragons(real not human), vampires ,gods,angels...the difference isn't World building but the lore...and boy it is amazing ... thanks author and fuck you....for what you did to oliver and azariah
I love it, I really wasn’t expecting much from the reivews but oh was I wrong, I especially love the relationship the main character has with oliver and christina it honestly healed me from everything else going in the book. 🖕🏽ethan overall it’s really good author i’m gonna read your other book next [img=recommend]
i have read so many novel till ow but the emotional depth i felt in this novel is something different one of the best thing happened to me was that the story inspired me to write a novel on my own so all the best to the for the next chapters. if you want check out my novel the name of the novel is blood saga the story of the novel is similar to this novel ,not good as this but i am trying my best so go and read it.
Hallo author ☺️ I really love this story and it's truly masterpiece 💞😍,i wanted ask you favour,plz make him stronger enough to brutally kill his mother and destroy her empire.. it's pity protagonist 😢 and why did you kill Cristina 😭 it's really tragedy.he only facing lose always he couldn't save anyone.plz get him stronger.and plz kill Ethan quickly it's hated character 😡 sorry to ask you lot It's really tragedy story
it too complicated and toouch control freaky to my liking, author just throw multiple random shit which seems to be important in while story in single chapter but we don't even know what's that, we don't even understand what is what and the terms are just thrown every where which is just confusing and moreover the mc mother is just too strong and her control of the pu**y mc is just discouraging to read like, who would even read depressing chapter continually for 100 chapter and still read it, like how do we even know if mc is even progressing when his enemy every time is much, I mean too much stronger than him, and they can kill simply but no they won't why because some of the absurd reason like " i want to see fear in his eyes" lol just say because it's polt armor and don't even get me started with the plot, it's all over the place, like I can't even describe what important and what connects to what.... so for whoever wants to read this I have warned, You won't like mc, you will get depressed, you will get frustrated, and what's more you won't get relief of even satisfaction that " thank god I preserved and read in until now" so yeah don't read it simple, Moreover why the The mc mother Soo cruel sometime I felt sorry for the mc ... but he is just idiotic and what can he even do like he lived like that since childhood.
Very boring. The amount of information repeated every n chapters is at least n^2. MC is not an enjoyable character to read. 20 chapters have just been a repeat of the same content. Went from telling at first, to showing the very same things.
This story is a true master piece. I am glad I got the chance to read this story. The only sad thing is that I am unable to buy chapters right now and can only read it for free
hello other i have read all chapter upto 255 ane it's interesting story but are you going to dropping it nowthis story because you have start sage of atlantis?
I liked this story at first but after reading nearly 90 chaps, I am quite dissatisfied because MC is just dead set on his doubtable existence and in almost every chap, he is thinking like a game, not reality. The writer is quite confused with his story development either he lives like a game or reality. How can a writer make MC like a total idiot MC's decision-making is totally flawed. I hope the writer first makes the character mentality understandable and not full of doubts and confusion.[img=thinking]
the story is like other iski slop the dialogue is uninteresting. the world is generic as its like every other " I come from the realy world their is a game I know everything" making the story development as u can call it a check list on how the mc get a Heram and become over powered. the characters are both one note and badly written the mc is publicly know to be one of the worst human beings possible but has friend.the combat its well made. world poorly developed e.g mc blessing amun Ra u do know that is and African God African gods behavior comply difficulty then other culture including and thing relayed to them there treat like any generic God like Zeus and u know God in a world wich is mainly dominant but a church like organization
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A Pure masterpiece with a very smart and strong mc....interesting side characters that are very interactive and amazing in their own ways.
i love this novel very much from start till now, i finished this novel in 3 days keep updating 😃😃😃
Prefer Saga of Atlantis as the MC here who knows the future and how to prevent a bad outcome does a lot of moaning and sulking instead of taking action to prevent a bad end.
One of the best novels I've read has made me cry many times. Give it a chance; you won't regret it. The story is epic, the protagonist is perfect, with great supporting characters and a good romance. What more could you want? You have to read it, no excuses!
I gotta say, this is criminally underrated, and the low reviews this book has gotten are undeserved. However... Not many people are going to enjoy this book, mainly because the protagonist will always go through something that he didn't deserve (people hating him because of his mother, always going through pain and torture, being weak, not being loved) and that prolongs throughout the whole story (apart from the last two) which can make people be tired of it or not liking it, and the writing accomplishes that quite well, to the point that it may leave a bad taste in your mouth. The best I can describe this book using another is "The Heroines are trying to kill me (KN Novel)", just a lesser version of it. The writing quality is top tier, that alone would just make me rate this book a 5 star. Story development is also great, but I know many people wouldn't like it. Character design and update stability are great, however World Background, there isn't much but then again I'm only 30+ chapters in so hopefully I'd see more of it. Overall, I'd recommend if you can stomach the darkness the protagonist will go through for the majority of the novel, if not, you will hate this book so don't read it.
I thought that author somehow will shift the FL and mc demeanor but what the f**k he doing..? Killing his friends by his mother some shitty servents and Guess what...? MC can't even protect them. There are needles plot holes,I am droping this shit. Sorry,author but with these chapters you really did bad, The novels was good with some turmoils,It was really good,but at some point it changed.. From first i enjoyed it even saved at libary....haaa, You really did disappoint me..[img=Why]
Warning: Minor Spoilers Big hint before you read, take the 'tragedy' tag seriously. Not just the background of the MC but the events in the story go from 0 to 100 very quick. Like I thought I was reading a romance, bit of comedy and action novel until author pulls a JJK on us and kills off half the main cast over the span of a couple of chapters. I liked Oliver man. The story itself is good, but I didn't read the dang tags and I hate tragedy, got me bawling fr. (Only gave it a 1 star review cuz no-one reads 3 star ones and this info is pretty good to know)
Hallo author, I really love this story 🤩 I want ask you favour pls don't kill character like azariah's friends ex. Like Oliver Plz make character strong enough to stand up against his mother's servant 🙏🏻
Hello, Author here. Here is my review of the story: Firstly, the core element of the story involves transmigration/reincarnation in a game world, with my own twists added to the narrative. Secondly, if you're reading the story, please take a moment to consider the MC's situation and conditions before criticizing either him or me. Thirdly, I will take my time in developing the harem, so don't expect immediate relationships. The first hundred chapters will focus less on romance. Fourthly, if you find the story unappealing within the first fifteen chapters, feel free to drop it. It may not be to your liking. That's all for now. If you have any questions, feel free to ask here. And yes, there will be no NTR or Yuri themes. Thanks for checking out the story. Peace.
oh well....this novel is one of best at webnovel considering how most are just porn novels....thus is such a good story....and it was done perfectly .... writing : the writing is A class... amazing way to handle...like when backstory is shown,it is shown flawlessly... keeping reader intrigued ...it truly have that western novel writing style...and not webnovel shit type .... story... this is a dark story...where our MC suffers a lot ...so dont't expect him to be a gary sue...we see his desperation and need, his weakness and strength .. its not that he doesn't try to use his future knowledge to control things....just his enemies are too smart and strong....and it is just amazing....how he have to figure his way out of imposible scenarios .... characters ...well...if one thing ..this is olace where it shine the most .....and....get my little hate too ..... author have way to make characters so human....they are not good...they are broken...used... destroyed enough that they can't care about about right ....or they are straight up strong motherfuckers...who treats others as pawns but what i like the most is her mother....that fucking bitch shit whore street bitch*beep**beep**beep**beep*... update stability ..... world : it is your normal world where a lot of races lived ..elves,akashas,humans,high humans,dragons(real not human), vampires ,gods,angels...the difference isn't World building but the lore...and boy it is amazing ... thanks author and fuck you....for what you did to oliver and azariah
I love it, I really wasn’t expecting much from the reivews but oh was I wrong, I especially love the relationship the main character has with oliver and christina it honestly healed me from everything else going in the book. 🖕🏽ethan overall it’s really good author i’m gonna read your other book next [img=recommend]
i have read so many novel till ow but the emotional depth i felt in this novel is something different one of the best thing happened to me was that the story inspired me to write a novel on my own so all the best to the for the next chapters. if you want check out my novel the name of the novel is blood saga the story of the novel is similar to this novel ,not good as this but i am trying my best so go and read it.
Hallo author ☺️ I really love this story and it's truly masterpiece 💞😍,i wanted ask you favour,plz make him stronger enough to brutally kill his mother and destroy her empire.. it's pity protagonist 😢 and why did you kill Cristina 😭 it's really tragedy.he only facing lose always he couldn't save anyone.plz get him stronger.and plz kill Ethan quickly it's hated character 😡 sorry to ask you lot It's really tragedy story
it too complicated and toouch control freaky to my liking, author just throw multiple random shit which seems to be important in while story in single chapter but we don't even know what's that, we don't even understand what is what and the terms are just thrown every where which is just confusing and moreover the mc mother is just too strong and her control of the pu**y mc is just discouraging to read like, who would even read depressing chapter continually for 100 chapter and still read it, like how do we even know if mc is even progressing when his enemy every time is much, I mean too much stronger than him, and they can kill simply but no they won't why because some of the absurd reason like " i want to see fear in his eyes" lol just say because it's polt armor and don't even get me started with the plot, it's all over the place, like I can't even describe what important and what connects to what.... so for whoever wants to read this I have warned, You won't like mc, you will get depressed, you will get frustrated, and what's more you won't get relief of even satisfaction that " thank god I preserved and read in until now" so yeah don't read it simple, Moreover why the The mc mother Soo cruel sometime I felt sorry for the mc ... but he is just idiotic and what can he even do like he lived like that since childhood.
Very boring. The amount of information repeated every n chapters is at least n^2. MC is not an enjoyable character to read. 20 chapters have just been a repeat of the same content. Went from telling at first, to showing the very same things.
This story is a true master piece. I am glad I got the chance to read this story. The only sad thing is that I am unable to buy chapters right now and can only read it for free
hello other i have read all chapter upto 255 ane it's interesting story but are you going to dropping it nowthis story because you have start sage of atlantis?
I liked this story at first but after reading nearly 90 chaps, I am quite dissatisfied because MC is just dead set on his doubtable existence and in almost every chap, he is thinking like a game, not reality. The writer is quite confused with his story development either he lives like a game or reality. How can a writer make MC like a total idiot MC's decision-making is totally flawed. I hope the writer first makes the character mentality understandable and not full of doubts and confusion.[img=thinking]
the story is like other iski slop the dialogue is uninteresting. the world is generic as its like every other " I come from the realy world their is a game I know everything" making the story development as u can call it a check list on how the mc get a Heram and become over powered. the characters are both one note and badly written the mc is publicly know to be one of the worst human beings possible but has friend.the combat its well made. world poorly developed e.g mc blessing amun Ra u do know that is and African God African gods behavior comply difficulty then other culture including and thing relayed to them there treat like any generic God like Zeus and u know God in a world wich is mainly dominant but a church like organization
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A Pure masterpiece with a very smart and strong mc....interesting side characters that are very interactive and amazing in their own ways.
i love this novel very much from start till now, i finished this novel in 3 days keep updating 😃😃😃
Prefer Saga of Atlantis as the MC here who knows the future and how to prevent a bad outcome does a lot of moaning and sulking instead of taking action to prevent a bad end.
One of the best novels I've read has made me cry many times. Give it a chance; you won't regret it. The story is epic, the protagonist is perfect, with great supporting characters and a good romance. What more could you want? You have to read it, no excuses!
I gotta say, this is criminally underrated, and the low reviews this book has gotten are undeserved. However... Not many people are going to enjoy this book, mainly because the protagonist will always go through something that he didn't deserve (people hating him because of his mother, always going through pain and torture, being weak, not being loved) and that prolongs throughout the whole story (apart from the last two) which can make people be tired of it or not liking it, and the writing accomplishes that quite well, to the point that it may leave a bad taste in your mouth. The best I can describe this book using another is "The Heroines are trying to kill me (KN Novel)", just a lesser version of it. The writing quality is top tier, that alone would just make me rate this book a 5 star. Story development is also great, but I know many people wouldn't like it. Character design and update stability are great, however World Background, there isn't much but then again I'm only 30+ chapters in so hopefully I'd see more of it. Overall, I'd recommend if you can stomach the darkness the protagonist will go through for the majority of the novel, if not, you will hate this book so don't read it.
I thought that author somehow will shift the FL and mc demeanor but what the f**k he doing..? Killing his friends by his mother some shitty servents and Guess what...? MC can't even protect them. There are needles plot holes,I am droping this shit. Sorry,author but with these chapters you really did bad, The novels was good with some turmoils,It was really good,but at some point it changed.. From first i enjoyed it even saved at libary....haaa, You really did disappoint me..[img=Why]
Warning: Minor Spoilers Big hint before you read, take the 'tragedy' tag seriously. Not just the background of the MC but the events in the story go from 0 to 100 very quick. Like I thought I was reading a romance, bit of comedy and action novel until author pulls a JJK on us and kills off half the main cast over the span of a couple of chapters. I liked Oliver man. The story itself is good, but I didn't read the dang tags and I hate tragedy, got me bawling fr. (Only gave it a 1 star review cuz no-one reads 3 star ones and this info is pretty good to know)
Hallo author, I really love this story 🤩 I want ask you favour pls don't kill character like azariah's friends ex. Like Oliver Plz make character strong enough to stand up against his mother's servant 🙏🏻
Hello, Author here. Here is my review of the story: Firstly, the core element of the story involves transmigration/reincarnation in a game world, with my own twists added to the narrative. Secondly, if you're reading the story, please take a moment to consider the MC's situation and conditions before criticizing either him or me. Thirdly, I will take my time in developing the harem, so don't expect immediate relationships. The first hundred chapters will focus less on romance. Fourthly, if you find the story unappealing within the first fifteen chapters, feel free to drop it. It may not be to your liking. That's all for now. If you have any questions, feel free to ask here. And yes, there will be no NTR or Yuri themes. Thanks for checking out the story. Peace.