Konoha: The Template System

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Odil

The grammar needs serious work... So many 5 star reviews with nobody mentioning the simple fact that the grammar is horrendous at times is fishy.

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Hyuga_Tobirama

Great story and it’s not even close to being half way yet. The fact the mc is just like my favourite Naruto character Tobirama Senju makes the story 100x better. The author is talented and is a good story teller

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behind_your_sister

please don't drop one of the best TOBIRAMA fanfic

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Passerby_Venne

It's pretty good! Too much point of view of people we don't really care about, since I want to read from the MC's pov. Except from that it's really good! Did I say it's good?!

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Lord_Azathoth

I would like to know who is the love interest in the story?

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Luizz_Ricardo

The author answers me one thing, when the MC gained the Tobirama model will he also inherit Tobirama's Senju lineage? Why, if so, will the MC have vitality, physical strength, a large amount of superior chakra, and will he pass these advantages on to his dependents?

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tedmosby2016

Don't waste your time. If you can't switch off your brain this is not for you. It gets worse. Mc doesn't have a personality nor does his motivations make any sense. He has no ambition. He just does things. The author makes up things as he goes along and it is so very obvious it is annoying.

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Gd_Sys

moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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mantaege

i reallyyyyyyy like it because its Tobirama senju template i dont see him often like i see few fanfictions but "few" and i must say its really good but its shame that he doesnt look like tobirama and he isnt from senju clan so that it would make sense well he does have his silver hair but not his red eyes i would imagine him like a boy tobirama but have some similiarities like one red line which tobirama has 3 lines and i mean the middle one and red eyes and ITS

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Z_Ril

This is a gem. Although i never really liked the template system, this makes me have a second thought. Continue producing those chaps my guy. this is absolutely fantastic.

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DaoistHcNmdf

as of this chapter (ch: 10) this is good

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79_amar

well the story was great but the fact that nobody has been talking about that his parents was killed by third lord and danzo and others but he just kill danzo and he is just like not care about his parents well the author himself has said the he hasn't meet his parents everyday and only 1mo or 1y but if you parents die and has power to revenge Why? not Kill them 😭 he is so positive he is like nothing has happened but the story is good if not for family well I'm just read it for time go by and the way lord third act he is just like new character for the story well if you read countless fanfiction you may know that lord third has kill the mc family many time but he is like that was good for greater well this part I'm not understanding it 😔 there was no need for character development 😕 you have just kill lord third he know it that was this boyfriend plans and he didn't stop it if you fix this parts you maybe be a par of best fanfiction

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Big_D_Buster

I haven't started reading this but I heard it was good plus it is about......

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Indra_

Very good fanfiction. I have been following this fanfiction from the first few chapters. Randomly found it while scrolling through Anime and Comics section. Give it a shot, especially if you like Tobirama.

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Angeloverlord

once Kazuki makes out Tobirama's template is he getting a new one??? loving the novel so far

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meHzyk

The grammar needs corrections, but the story is really cool and very engaging. I hope that someday someone or the author himself will correct the grammar errors.

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CouchPotatoDandy

This fanfic definitely deserve a five-star review! My only hope now as of chapter 73 is that I really hope the author won't drop this but actually finish this fanfic.

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DA_Torres

A very good novel with a lot of potential, and a really good author at writing, the story is on the right track. I hope that it continues with this rhythm and that it does not end halfway like many other stories. GOOD LUCK KEEP IT UP!!!

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DaoistkqiheH

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