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hey there i have been reading your fanfic and it has such a good story so i would like to know if you are interested in publishing advance chapters of this fanfic to my novel group and worry not we will pay you 4 to 5 dollars per thousand views and your can bring more views from other platforms and the more views your novel chapters have the more money you have so if you are interested please contact me on instagram or on discord My Instagram ID is yurichi_adrenaline and My discord Username is earth_19998 so please consider my offer one time and maybe this collaboration will change your whole life thank you
The plot is really good. I had discomforts about certain forced plots in certain parts of the novel, though I do not necessarily hate it, just a bit disturbed. Grammar isn’t great tho still readable
I read till ch 2 or 3 and I am dropping it bc it is a disaster first there are too many half chinese element there second mc said she is scared of danzo then she go and befriend with naruto third I forgot
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I should have figured it out from the cover but the author seems to have built his universe based on D-art........ I should have figured it out from the cover but the author seems to have built his universe based on D-art..........
Enough words are misspelled or misused enough to cause the story to become difficult to read.
The novel has too many Mtl / xinxia elemets. Adding to that The main character is just not likable. They are way too paranoid for little reason. They have withhold progress for this irrational fear, and dont do anything to solve it. They have next to no personality, and almopst no character interations.
not bad story, you forgot genderbender tag, mc was male in his first life, cannon romance btw just a heads up
I don't understand, is it a guy who becomes Sakura or a woman? I was very confused. m ccccccccccccccc ccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccv
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this is the best Sakura fanfic I've ever read and I hope you continue to make it.
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Though the character and story design could use some work, this is a very enjoyable read. However, your other works suggest a certain... pattern. Just don't go too hard on the gender-bender sexual stuff, author.
I'd like to clairify that Sakura isn't useless and embodies the show's values perfectly
Tho I’m not a fan of smut, I still think this was a decent story. The storyline saved it imo and I liked that it wasn’t filled with smut and had a decent storyline. I also quite liked the character development as well as the plot progression that flowed smoothly and allowed for a great story. I think this is your best fanfic yet, but since author writes many fics at once, it may be dropped, however this was the most well written from all of authors past stories.
hey there i have been reading your fanfic and it has such a good story so i would like to know if you are interested in publishing advance chapters of this fanfic to my novel group and worry not we will pay you 4 to 5 dollars per thousand views and your can bring more views from other platforms and the more views your novel chapters have the more money you have so if you are interested please contact me on instagram or on discord My Instagram ID is yurichi_adrenaline and My discord Username is earth_19998 so please consider my offer one time and maybe this collaboration will change your whole life thank you
The plot is really good. I had discomforts about certain forced plots in certain parts of the novel, though I do not necessarily hate it, just a bit disturbed. Grammar isn’t great tho still readable
I read till ch 2 or 3 and I am dropping it bc it is a disaster first there are too many half chinese element there second mc said she is scared of danzo then she go and befriend with naruto third I forgot
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I should have figured it out from the cover but the author seems to have built his universe based on D-art........ I should have figured it out from the cover but the author seems to have built his universe based on D-art..........
Enough words are misspelled or misused enough to cause the story to become difficult to read.
The novel has too many Mtl / xinxia elemets. Adding to that The main character is just not likable. They are way too paranoid for little reason. They have withhold progress for this irrational fear, and dont do anything to solve it. They have next to no personality, and almopst no character interations.
not bad story, you forgot genderbender tag, mc was male in his first life, cannon romance btw just a heads up
I don't understand, is it a guy who becomes Sakura or a woman? I was very confused. m ccccccccccccccc ccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccv
Membuka SPOILER this is the best Sakura fanfic I've ever read and I hope you continue to make it.
Yuri ?? Yuri??? Yuri???[img=Why][img=Why][img=Why][img=Why][img=Why][img=Why][img=Why][img=Why][img=Why][img=Why][img=Why][img=Why][img=Why]
Though the character and story design could use some work, this is a very enjoyable read. However, your other works suggest a certain... pattern. Just don't go too hard on the gender-bender sexual stuff, author.
I'd like to clairify that Sakura isn't useless and embodies the show's values perfectly
Tho I’m not a fan of smut, I still think this was a decent story. The storyline saved it imo and I liked that it wasn’t filled with smut and had a decent storyline. I also quite liked the character development as well as the plot progression that flowed smoothly and allowed for a great story. I think this is your best fanfic yet, but since author writes many fics at once, it may be dropped, however this was the most well written from all of authors past stories.