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Ch280, the story is good, the mc is a breath of fresh air in the douluo fanfic history, he followed the path of the martial soul palace so he would be an enemy of tang san eventaly so be warned, his cheat is as the title says a simulator that won't seperate the simulated world from reality(in the simulated world he wont retain his realm just his knowledge, and the simulated world impact on the world is if he spend's a lot of time with a certain character in the simulated word there is chance that the character will retain it's memory's or memory fragments it depends on the characters realtionship with the mc) his simulations work like a second life so the current simulations at ch280 is few and every simulation is followed by a cooldown that depends on the simulatior Rewards to the mc (if the rewards are good it will have a longer cooldown, but the cooldown's are months apart currently. )
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too much drama for me tbh. it's okay, so you can read it if you like drama between girls and the mc like those in Indian bollywood style with douluo mix,and Mc is an impotent[img=disgusted]
too much drama for me tbh. it's okay, so you can read it if you like drama between girls and the mc like those in Indian bollywood style with douluo mix (maybe not that exaggerated), but you get me. 3 stars overall because of world background cus it's ff, update stability and story development. character design is good and writing quality as well.
Translation is quite average, it's more like a better version of MTL. Several grammatical errors. Aside from that plot seems quite rushed, and simulator is honestly quite useless. Especially when it gives memories to all parties involved.
A great story though the translation can be a bit off sometimes, still very readable though. What I think makes the story great is the character interactions and their development due to the simulations. It makes you look forward to how the characters will act. In the end would recommend very entertaining. To the translator and author keep up the good work.
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I really like this story, it has stable updates and for a chinese translation fanfiction it has fewer grammer mistakes thank anticipated. It is also a rare chinese fanfiction that has a MC that is not completely braindead. Moreover it's probably the second fanfiction/novel i read with a HighIQ Tag that really shows HighIQ MC. All in all i thank thee for this fanfiction.
this novel is good but your translation without any proofreader or any fix in some word make it worse and in the end i choose to fix it myself thanks and goodbye, im gonna back to scrap again dunno when
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Surprisingly good fanfic. Translation is good. System is barely there. MC and other characters are driving the plot and no wish fulfillment (good writing). That's pretty good! This is one of those rare novels where you end up screaming: "MOOOORE CHAPTERS!"
The simulation system is pretty worthless imo. If everyone important remembers the simulation what is the point of it?
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Very interesting take on a Soul system as a whole, alsonthe plot and dialogues are amazing
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As a person who has read the original to the end, I can say that this is the best fandom fanfiction in existence, thanks for the translation.
Ch280, the story is good, the mc is a breath of fresh air in the douluo fanfic history, he followed the path of the martial soul palace so he would be an enemy of tang san eventaly so be warned, his cheat is as the title says a simulator that won't seperate the simulated world from reality(in the simulated world he wont retain his realm just his knowledge, and the simulated world impact on the world is if he spend's a lot of time with a certain character in the simulated word there is chance that the character will retain it's memory's or memory fragments it depends on the characters realtionship with the mc) his simulations work like a second life so the current simulations at ch280 is few and every simulation is followed by a cooldown that depends on the simulatior Rewards to the mc (if the rewards are good it will have a longer cooldown, but the cooldown's are months apart currently. )
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too much drama for me tbh. it's okay, so you can read it if you like drama between girls and the mc like those in Indian bollywood style with douluo mix,and Mc is an impotent[img=disgusted]
too much drama for me tbh. it's okay, so you can read it if you like drama between girls and the mc like those in Indian bollywood style with douluo mix (maybe not that exaggerated), but you get me. 3 stars overall because of world background cus it's ff, update stability and story development. character design is good and writing quality as well.
Translation is quite average, it's more like a better version of MTL. Several grammatical errors. Aside from that plot seems quite rushed, and simulator is honestly quite useless. Especially when it gives memories to all parties involved.
A great story though the translation can be a bit off sometimes, still very readable though. What I think makes the story great is the character interactions and their development due to the simulations. It makes you look forward to how the characters will act. In the end would recommend very entertaining. To the translator and author keep up the good work.
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I really like this story, it has stable updates and for a chinese translation fanfiction it has fewer grammer mistakes thank anticipated. It is also a rare chinese fanfiction that has a MC that is not completely braindead. Moreover it's probably the second fanfiction/novel i read with a HighIQ Tag that really shows HighIQ MC. All in all i thank thee for this fanfiction.
this novel is good but your translation without any proofreader or any fix in some word make it worse and in the end i choose to fix it myself thanks and goodbye, im gonna back to scrap again dunno when
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Surprisingly good fanfic. Translation is good. System is barely there. MC and other characters are driving the plot and no wish fulfillment (good writing). That's pretty good! This is one of those rare novels where you end up screaming: "MOOOORE CHAPTERS!"
The simulation system is pretty worthless imo. If everyone important remembers the simulation what is the point of it?
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Very interesting take on a Soul system as a whole, alsonthe plot and dialogues are amazing
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As a person who has read the original to the end, I can say that this is the best fandom fanfiction in existence, thanks for the translation.