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It seems good it’s just so fast paced. It really needs to slow down. Unless it’s just the first couple chapters or something. But the chapters are good so I guess it isn’t that big a deal.
It seems good it’s just so fast paced. It really needs to slow down. Unless it’s just the first couple chapters or something. But the chapters are good so I guess it isn’t that big a deal.