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Currently chapter 21, Great story well written, I can't wait to read more MC = OK I can only advise you to read it and make up your own mind.
Wow, this fanfiction is actually pretty good, I'm loving it so far! Keep up the good work author. Only downside is that there just aren't enough chapters yet.
............................................................. Muito boa a história, por favor continue. .............................................................
The only mistake in my opinion is the voice in the protagonist's head.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Well, what can be said about this work, i will give it 5, but in truth it is 4,5 work. Author pls do not stop. U are doimg great so far)
Author has a great grasp on all the characters in the show and is making them react just like they would in canon to mc's actions. Cant ask for much more in a FF really.
The kingdom of God has come near. Repent and believe the good news! John3.16 For God so loved the world that he gave his one and only Son, that whoever believes in him shall not perish but have eternal life. 17 For God did not send his Son into the world to condemn the world, but to save the world through him. 18 Whoever believes in him is not condemned, but whoever does not believe stands condemned already because they have not believed in the name of God’s one and only Son. 19 This is the verdict: Light has come into the world, but people loved darkness instead of light because their deeds were evil. 20 Everyone who does evil hates the light, and will not come into the light for fear that their deeds will be exposed. 21 But whoever lives by the truth comes into the light, so that it may be seen plainly that what they have done has been done in the sight of God. For more information: youtube.com/@PastorPatrickWinfrey youtube.com/livingwaters
I don't expect a harem from this book, but I'm hoping for romance. Can you provide an answer, as I don't typically read about 'monk MCs'?
I'm loving how the story is unfolding we need more works about the boys keep up the good work and I hope the frequency of posts continues, I know it can be a lot of work but if I can maintain a good frequency it would be a blessing for readers
one of the best boys' fic It has so much potential. update more and increase the word limit. love the work. good work so far waiting for the new chapters. good luck
gostei bastante, nunca tinha visto uma fic de The boys, quem sera o interesse amoroso ou vai ser harém?
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Like what i read so far 👍 The way he put that snobby board member in her place without threating in the meeting is **chef kiss*
Excellent ! Really like your approach and as you expressed I find myself confused on some of the inconsistencies in the final episode so I'm eager to see your take on it. Thank you for your work. PS : They could find him even more unsettling than og Homelander, his reactions are bound to be different so at first no one is going to know what will trigger this SI into murderous rage and how it will reveals itself, an advantage they slightly had with the original.
This is going great. I don't know how much it already written and how much it will go but I hope we get a full story that reaches it's conclusion even if you have to move past season 3. I'd love to see how he gains allies and how he uses his image, knowledge and violence to shape things. Will he be affected by being in this body too?
I personally liked original season 3, i still love this fic. Please keep regularly updating. This is a really good fanfic and I am interested in the world/story will go.
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Currently chapter 21, Great story well written, I can't wait to read more MC = OK I can only advise you to read it and make up your own mind.
Wow, this fanfiction is actually pretty good, I'm loving it so far! Keep up the good work author. Only downside is that there just aren't enough chapters yet.
............................................................. Muito boa a história, por favor continue. .............................................................
The only mistake in my opinion is the voice in the protagonist's head.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Well, what can be said about this work, i will give it 5, but in truth it is 4,5 work. Author pls do not stop. U are doimg great so far)
Author has a great grasp on all the characters in the show and is making them react just like they would in canon to mc's actions. Cant ask for much more in a FF really.
The kingdom of God has come near. Repent and believe the good news! John3.16 For God so loved the world that he gave his one and only Son, that whoever believes in him shall not perish but have eternal life. 17 For God did not send his Son into the world to condemn the world, but to save the world through him. 18 Whoever believes in him is not condemned, but whoever does not believe stands condemned already because they have not believed in the name of God’s one and only Son. 19 This is the verdict: Light has come into the world, but people loved darkness instead of light because their deeds were evil. 20 Everyone who does evil hates the light, and will not come into the light for fear that their deeds will be exposed. 21 But whoever lives by the truth comes into the light, so that it may be seen plainly that what they have done has been done in the sight of God. For more information: youtube.com/@PastorPatrickWinfrey youtube.com/livingwaters
I don't expect a harem from this book, but I'm hoping for romance. Can you provide an answer, as I don't typically read about 'monk MCs'?
I'm loving how the story is unfolding we need more works about the boys keep up the good work and I hope the frequency of posts continues, I know it can be a lot of work but if I can maintain a good frequency it would be a blessing for readers
one of the best boys' fic It has so much potential. update more and increase the word limit. love the work. good work so far waiting for the new chapters. good luck
gostei bastante, nunca tinha visto uma fic de The boys, quem sera o interesse amoroso ou vai ser harém?
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Membuka SPOILER Like what i read so far 👍 The way he put that snobby board member in her place without threating in the meeting is **chef kiss*
Excellent ! Really like your approach and as you expressed I find myself confused on some of the inconsistencies in the final episode so I'm eager to see your take on it. Thank you for your work. PS : They could find him even more unsettling than og Homelander, his reactions are bound to be different so at first no one is going to know what will trigger this SI into murderous rage and how it will reveals itself, an advantage they slightly had with the original.
This is going great. I don't know how much it already written and how much it will go but I hope we get a full story that reaches it's conclusion even if you have to move past season 3. I'd love to see how he gains allies and how he uses his image, knowledge and violence to shape things. Will he be affected by being in this body too?
I personally liked original season 3, i still love this fic. Please keep regularly updating. This is a really good fanfic and I am interested in the world/story will go.
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