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I realy like this story, Gino slowly learns about world he lives in now, and gains new units who will become part of his Army and Fleets, but realy,i wonder if he will be able to create land units like Titans and Tanks, and other land weaponry thanks to his system.?
Cool story, i realy want to see him commanding huge Armys and Fleets, and showing everyone who is Boss, and i realy want to see him geting Farsee as a Wife,
Just reading the Synopsis, Author is tickling all my pleasure points. Being New to 40k. Check. Slow and Grind. Check. Forge system. Check. Harem. check
Nice fanfic, great immersion actually and decent intro into warhammer so author does a pretty good job on that. The pace feels good as well. The downsides: I don't mind his limited knowledge, I feel it's perfect for the fic, it's just that it's inconsistent (eg. if MC found out about hive cities being from the Age of Technology before crossing over, he would've automatically found out about the pollution they produced by 40k, not been ignorant of it and it's danger) The real problem is the MC, he's dumb, really dumb, to the point that him having logical or properly analytical thoughts later on feels out of character, not everyone's cup of tea. It's passed off as naivete, but that's not how that works. Naivete would've been him experimenting with being a psycher believing he's safe, not him forgetting he is one 10 seconds after being told he and all those who become his followers are incorruptible. Naivete was him believing a wh40k bartender was honestly helping him find a proper job, not him spending days not even trying to find out exactly what he'd need to get off planet while clamoring that he needs money to do it.
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W FIC PLS DONT Drop.................................................................................................................
Aunque soy alguien que habla español ,no puedo evitar que me guste esta escritura por el echo de ser un forjador/herrero para el universo de Warhammer 40k .
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you heresy how dare u upload new book without finishing the first one ( nc ff btw)
good book , but your second book is even better (saiyan in Warhammer ) please continue it. ................................................................................
As of chapter 22, this story is on my back burner. The pacing combined with the release schedule is too slow. At this point, I feel nothing but annoyance and contempt with the MC. Mutilating the MC is something that I find personally distasteful.
I realy like this story, Gino slowly learns about world he lives in now, and gains new units who will become part of his Army and Fleets, but realy,i wonder if he will be able to create land units like Titans and Tanks, and other land weaponry thanks to his system.?
Cool story, i realy want to see him commanding huge Armys and Fleets, and showing everyone who is Boss, and i realy want to see him geting Farsee as a Wife,
Just reading the Synopsis, Author is tickling all my pleasure points. Being New to 40k. Check. Slow and Grind. Check. Forge system. Check. Harem. check
Nice fanfic, great immersion actually and decent intro into warhammer so author does a pretty good job on that. The pace feels good as well. The downsides: I don't mind his limited knowledge, I feel it's perfect for the fic, it's just that it's inconsistent (eg. if MC found out about hive cities being from the Age of Technology before crossing over, he would've automatically found out about the pollution they produced by 40k, not been ignorant of it and it's danger) The real problem is the MC, he's dumb, really dumb, to the point that him having logical or properly analytical thoughts later on feels out of character, not everyone's cup of tea. It's passed off as naivete, but that's not how that works. Naivete would've been him experimenting with being a psycher believing he's safe, not him forgetting he is one 10 seconds after being told he and all those who become his followers are incorruptible. Naivete was him believing a wh40k bartender was honestly helping him find a proper job, not him spending days not even trying to find out exactly what he'd need to get off planet while clamoring that he needs money to do it.
Membuka SPOILER W FIC PLS DONT Drop.................................................................................................................
Aunque soy alguien que habla español ,no puedo evitar que me guste esta escritura por el echo de ser un forjador/herrero para el universo de Warhammer 40k .
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you heresy how dare u upload new book without finishing the first one ( nc ff btw)
good book , but your second book is even better (saiyan in Warhammer ) please continue it. ................................................................................
As of chapter 22, this story is on my back burner. The pacing combined with the release schedule is too slow. At this point, I feel nothing but annoyance and contempt with the MC. Mutilating the MC is something that I find personally distasteful.