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It just had to be harem…. Was so promising until the harem was mentioned in chapter 6. Get a life
3/2/1/4/3 Came for the 'Shinobi in Marvel', left because its a 'Summoner in Black Lagoon' Quite a few issues with the system, it apparently gives more points for living creatures than dead ones? Wild. MC has shadow clones but is given a multitude of canon naruto character summon cards which can alsp be eaten for the character's abilities. Proceeds to eat the only jonin that can use ninjutsu, Asuma Sarutobi, but summons Iruka(has a sensory ability) and Might Guy(gates + s tier taijutsu). Along with Shikamaru, Tenten and Rock Lee. Spelling could definitely be better, quite a few typos
This is some good Shitatake right here. Plot is good, story is good and it is Readable. but. Hear me out. If you are looking for a fanfic where MC saves everyone for the greater good saves the day and helps cats off the tree and all that Crud. Turn around now. MC is not a good person. He would kill innocents if it will help him get paid or get Points for the system. There is world building and summoning other Characters. and Templates.
Uma incrível mistura de Naruto e Marvel cara você é um verdadeiro artista nesta série está realmente incrível Não ligue para o que as pessoas falam de forma negativa sobre o livro é pura besteira e inveja do seu trabalho está realmente incrível 😁😁😁👍👍👍
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I didn't understand much of the plot being developed here, but that's because I believe he used characters from some anime that I'm not familiar with. Having a shinobi system isn't bad, but seeing the status almost twice per chapter is quite unpleasant. A recurring problem in all system fics.
5 star Just for revy .......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
It just had to be harem…. Was so promising until the harem was mentioned in chapter 6. Get a life
3/2/1/4/3 Came for the 'Shinobi in Marvel', left because its a 'Summoner in Black Lagoon' Quite a few issues with the system, it apparently gives more points for living creatures than dead ones? Wild. MC has shadow clones but is given a multitude of canon naruto character summon cards which can alsp be eaten for the character's abilities. Proceeds to eat the only jonin that can use ninjutsu, Asuma Sarutobi, but summons Iruka(has a sensory ability) and Might Guy(gates + s tier taijutsu). Along with Shikamaru, Tenten and Rock Lee. Spelling could definitely be better, quite a few typos
This is some good Shitatake right here. Plot is good, story is good and it is Readable. but. Hear me out. If you are looking for a fanfic where MC saves everyone for the greater good saves the day and helps cats off the tree and all that Crud. Turn around now. MC is not a good person. He would kill innocents if it will help him get paid or get Points for the system. There is world building and summoning other Characters. and Templates.
Uma incrível mistura de Naruto e Marvel cara você é um verdadeiro artista nesta série está realmente incrível Não ligue para o que as pessoas falam de forma negativa sobre o livro é pura besteira e inveja do seu trabalho está realmente incrível 😁😁😁👍👍👍
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I didn't understand much of the plot being developed here, but that's because I believe he used characters from some anime that I'm not familiar with. Having a shinobi system isn't bad, but seeing the status almost twice per chapter is quite unpleasant. A recurring problem in all system fics.
5 star Just for revy .......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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