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Yum_q327

An MC who is unable to take responsibility for more than 1 woman is equal to garbage in priority. This is a fictional story and the author should not have focused on loyalty to one woman. In addition, it feels like it was written by a woman or a 16-year-old teenager. Bold fonts are just cringe when you realize that the author has completely screwed up his understanding of emotions. Thanks for the work, but only a schoolboy might like it.

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stuff0069

first sim is great. Second sim is absolute PEAK

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Suzuha_Yuu

i haven't write a review for a past 2 years because I'm lazy but for now I'll supress my laziness just to write one.This story is really the peak of the fan fiction story at fight i thought this was just another fate fanfiction with simulated system with a op MC but as the author gradually make new chapter the story gradually reaching the peak of COOKING specially on how the author cook on the first volume about alvin pendragon.I really love this fanfiction plus the updating stability is daily and it is really amazing how the story don't go bad but no it just became great.

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DaoistSBkpFm

------------------------------------------------------------------Good. Very good.-------------------------------------------------------------------

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Alex_167

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Wryyyyyyyy

The Translation of this fanfic couldn't be anything more than magnificent. The story is CN and I think it might fall of in the later parts....cuz that's how these types of novels often end up to, but so far? Wow, this is absolutely a great fic to read and I am absolutely enjoying each chap about it. The way the MC causes diversions in the worlds that he hops in is notable and very intriguing. While some are probably grumbling to themselves that this fic should be harem, I think going for a single FL is good in its own way too. Morgan's the best Waifu you could ask for. Literally. Anyways, I hope you have good days ahead for both the Eng Translator and the CN Author! Thanks for bringing this fic into reality.

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IsekaiHentaiKakeru

-As the plot goes Good so far ... not much poison from the original author.. -A Good English at i can finally understand naturally -Daily update - Story First, he is a reincarnator in fate lord melloi ll(nasuverse). Have a system to simulate the world and become that character(some of it) in real world and events become real as well. In the first dream, he is an evil protagonist the first dream simulation he is the son(like Artoria artificial) of Vortigern and cousin of Artoria. In the second world, he becomes Kratos the adopted son of Leonidas king of Sparta, and brother of Vergil and Dante (yeah DMC, League of Legends, God of War, and a few more). -The Character progression is Fantastically good for now but there are some questions about the protagonist's intention since he is evil so maybe this can be resolved(maybe not) in the future. So I can say for now it promising to read.. *But it may change in the future..so maybe I will change my review if so happens.

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Priest_Buster

Unbelievably cool! I'd say one of the best I've read until now. Expectations are sky-high! so happy the daughter didn't ...

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SurenK
LV 14 Badge

Absolute peak fiction. By far the best FATE fanfic Iโ€™ve ever read and top 5 fanfics Iโ€™ve ever read

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kneegrew_cotton

mass release mass release mass release mass release

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AllFather_

This is one of the best fate fanfic so far unfortunately i will not give full star on this cuz author just updated 1 a day.i hope author working like a horse can update 3 a day or maybe 5 so i can give full star๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

10mth
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Elementey

After reading many fanfics about fate and other novels/light novels, from game to movie fics, I can tell that this is one is a masterpiece as of a moment (ch 68). How story and character development are perfectly executed, atleast done a better job than most fanfics. I would recommend this to anyone who wants a quality and immersive, I would even say original, story. Thank you XElenea for the translating this and perfecting it. If I have grammer mistakes I sincerely apologise.

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PelerinliKeltos

Artoria's arc was very good, hope to see more

10mth
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nacht
LV 14 Badge

it's good fanfic, but sometimes the author adds unnecessary drama because of that it's kinda painful for me to read this fanfic who doesn't like drama when reading a story.

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Arslan_Aly

As someone who has mastered the MTL dao, I still can't believe that this fic was written by a Chinese author. But all the credit here should not go to the author, we should thank our friend who translated this story for us. Chinese writers can write really good fiction, but the problem is that it contains a lot of 'poison'. That's why most people don't want to read Chinese authors's fic. I would like to thank our translator friend here for purifying all the 'poison' inside him with the 'heavenly purification pen technique'.

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DaoisthnL3C3

The translation is wonderful, the story itself is also interesting, I really look forward to continuing, I hope for early updates (100 chapters per minute would be enough, thank you), but the translator should not forget about himself, no matter how painful it may be for us, but rest is also important. In any case, the work is wonderful, the grammar is excellent, I read in my native language through a translator, and there are no problems. This review was also written using translate. Thanks to the translator for his work. Thanks to the translator for his work.

10mth
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Miistro

At the time of writing this review, I finished reading chapter 63. This is by far the best fanfiction I have ever read. I didn't even know it was a translation until chapter 34 and how, as i may try, I can not fully express the sheer quality of it. For anyone reading this review who has not read this story, please read it, no matter how much you may be tempted to turn away, read to chapter 35, and then make your final decision on whether or not to continue. You should not be disappointed. long live King of Cinder

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ORIGINofALL

if you want a honest review then i will say that it is one of the best ff that i ever read. Author really write the fight scenes and other scenes in such a cinematic way that its really is fun to read. This is one of the few fanfics that ever made me cry. The only thing about it is that i had to wait for new chapters and its really hard to wait after finding such a gem about other ff

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Dmitri_Bystritski

It just keeps getting better and better!________-----------...................................................................-----------________

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AbysmaI

ABSOLUTE PEAK FATE FIC THEN ADD + ON TOP OF IT 99/10 CINEMA FAVE STORY ON THE WEBNOVEL SO FAR THE PROTAGONIST, STORY SIDE CHARACTERS, REFERENCES ARE AMAZING DO GIVE THIS FIC A TRY IF YOU CURIOUS

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lapis
LV 4 Badge

This review is based on the 1st volume, i.e., till Chapter 64. Writing Quality - 5/5 - One of the best when it concerns writing quality. Story Development - 5/5 - This story is definitely among my all time top 5 list when it comes to Nasuverse. The story really has a great flow, it goes from general arthurian myth to connecting to FGO lore and from how the first volume ended, it seems even lostbelt shall be included. Have really great expectations for succeeding volumes. Character Design - 4/5 - I loved how you went about fleshing the MC along with his relationship with other characters. The only flaw I find is I found the ending of volume a bit rushed along with the fact that the inclusion of Ritsuka Fujimaru and Mash was not required as they were merely spectators. Updating Stability - 5/5 - I have no complaints with respect to updating stability. World Background - 5/5 - I believe that the author has made great use of Nasuverse lore in this novel. Overall - 4.8/5 - I have to say that although my review is subjective, I have really liked the first volume of this Novel. Kudos to you author! ๐ŸŽ‰, may you continue to bring to us more of your wonderful, sacred text!

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ArdaPendragon

The author cooks a masterpiece in the last chapters[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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takeru_two

What is the name in Chinese? Please write it in the comments[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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AngelOfFire

Bro is cooked. One of the best fic I have ever read.

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ILove_Hayan048

This is without a doubt a gem of a fanfic. The story, the characters...I can't help but be immersed. This brings back the same feeling when I read my very first HP fanfic and I thought to myself. Fanfiction can sometimes be better than the original. I love the MCs mindset, his interaction with other characters, the other characters' impression of him, the plot progression is also solid. I have only one thing to say about the author...you are doing a good job. Keep cooking.

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DesolateRipper

the development is not bad and I even enjoy it, however I feel some distance with this Novel. The progression of the plot in general has been rather fast and finer details somewhat glossed over, it's very condensed and I'd say it's a shame but the benefit is that you actually get to see progression but the price for it is there.

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The_WheelOfFortune

The concept and idea of the story is really good, and overall the story is interesting

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Ellipse_ark

Translation is awesome i have read original novel it have really unpleasant bias what do you expect form these types of author and story is really get emotional during the end of the simulator Author you have great job

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BlurryDream

Not a Villain but antagonist... Until now, perfect,...............

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god_of_the_empty

Gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo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9mth
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Yum_q327

An MC who is unable to take responsibility for more than 1 woman is equal to garbage in priority. This is a fictional story and the author should not have focused on loyalty to one woman. In addition, it feels like it was written by a woman or a 16-year-old teenager. Bold fonts are just cringe when you realize that the author has completely screwed up his understanding of emotions. Thanks for the work, but only a schoolboy might like it.

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stuff0069

first sim is great. Second sim is absolute PEAK

9mth
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Suzuha_Yuu

i haven't write a review for a past 2 years because I'm lazy but for now I'll supress my laziness just to write one.This story is really the peak of the fan fiction story at fight i thought this was just another fate fanfiction with simulated system with a op MC but as the author gradually make new chapter the story gradually reaching the peak of COOKING specially on how the author cook on the first volume about alvin pendragon.I really love this fanfiction plus the updating stability is daily and it is really amazing how the story don't go bad but no it just became great.

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DaoistSBkpFm

------------------------------------------------------------------Good. Very good.-------------------------------------------------------------------

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Alex_167

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Wryyyyyyyy

The Translation of this fanfic couldn't be anything more than magnificent. The story is CN and I think it might fall of in the later parts....cuz that's how these types of novels often end up to, but so far? Wow, this is absolutely a great fic to read and I am absolutely enjoying each chap about it. The way the MC causes diversions in the worlds that he hops in is notable and very intriguing. While some are probably grumbling to themselves that this fic should be harem, I think going for a single FL is good in its own way too. Morgan's the best Waifu you could ask for. Literally. Anyways, I hope you have good days ahead for both the Eng Translator and the CN Author! Thanks for bringing this fic into reality.

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IsekaiHentaiKakeru

-As the plot goes Good so far ... not much poison from the original author.. -A Good English at i can finally understand naturally -Daily update - Story First, he is a reincarnator in fate lord melloi ll(nasuverse). Have a system to simulate the world and become that character(some of it) in real world and events become real as well. In the first dream, he is an evil protagonist the first dream simulation he is the son(like Artoria artificial) of Vortigern and cousin of Artoria. In the second world, he becomes Kratos the adopted son of Leonidas king of Sparta, and brother of Vergil and Dante (yeah DMC, League of Legends, God of War, and a few more). -The Character progression is Fantastically good for now but there are some questions about the protagonist's intention since he is evil so maybe this can be resolved(maybe not) in the future. So I can say for now it promising to read.. *But it may change in the future..so maybe I will change my review if so happens.

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Priest_Buster

Unbelievably cool! I'd say one of the best I've read until now. Expectations are sky-high! so happy the daughter didn't ...

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SurenK
LV 14 Badge

Absolute peak fiction. By far the best FATE fanfic Iโ€™ve ever read and top 5 fanfics Iโ€™ve ever read

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kneegrew_cotton

mass release mass release mass release mass release

10mth
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AllFather_

This is one of the best fate fanfic so far unfortunately i will not give full star on this cuz author just updated 1 a day.i hope author working like a horse can update 3 a day or maybe 5 so i can give full star๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

10mth
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Elementey

After reading many fanfics about fate and other novels/light novels, from game to movie fics, I can tell that this is one is a masterpiece as of a moment (ch 68). How story and character development are perfectly executed, atleast done a better job than most fanfics. I would recommend this to anyone who wants a quality and immersive, I would even say original, story. Thank you XElenea for the translating this and perfecting it. If I have grammer mistakes I sincerely apologise.

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PelerinliKeltos

Artoria's arc was very good, hope to see more

10mth
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nacht
LV 14 Badge

it's good fanfic, but sometimes the author adds unnecessary drama because of that it's kinda painful for me to read this fanfic who doesn't like drama when reading a story.

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Arslan_Aly

As someone who has mastered the MTL dao, I still can't believe that this fic was written by a Chinese author. But all the credit here should not go to the author, we should thank our friend who translated this story for us. Chinese writers can write really good fiction, but the problem is that it contains a lot of 'poison'. That's why most people don't want to read Chinese authors's fic. I would like to thank our translator friend here for purifying all the 'poison' inside him with the 'heavenly purification pen technique'.

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DaoisthnL3C3

The translation is wonderful, the story itself is also interesting, I really look forward to continuing, I hope for early updates (100 chapters per minute would be enough, thank you), but the translator should not forget about himself, no matter how painful it may be for us, but rest is also important. In any case, the work is wonderful, the grammar is excellent, I read in my native language through a translator, and there are no problems. This review was also written using translate. Thanks to the translator for his work. Thanks to the translator for his work.

10mth
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Miistro

At the time of writing this review, I finished reading chapter 63. This is by far the best fanfiction I have ever read. I didn't even know it was a translation until chapter 34 and how, as i may try, I can not fully express the sheer quality of it. For anyone reading this review who has not read this story, please read it, no matter how much you may be tempted to turn away, read to chapter 35, and then make your final decision on whether or not to continue. You should not be disappointed. long live King of Cinder

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ORIGINofALL

if you want a honest review then i will say that it is one of the best ff that i ever read. Author really write the fight scenes and other scenes in such a cinematic way that its really is fun to read. This is one of the few fanfics that ever made me cry. The only thing about it is that i had to wait for new chapters and its really hard to wait after finding such a gem about other ff

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Dmitri_Bystritski

It just keeps getting better and better!________-----------...................................................................-----------________

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AbysmaI

ABSOLUTE PEAK FATE FIC THEN ADD + ON TOP OF IT 99/10 CINEMA FAVE STORY ON THE WEBNOVEL SO FAR THE PROTAGONIST, STORY SIDE CHARACTERS, REFERENCES ARE AMAZING DO GIVE THIS FIC A TRY IF YOU CURIOUS

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lapis
LV 4 Badge

This review is based on the 1st volume, i.e., till Chapter 64. Writing Quality - 5/5 - One of the best when it concerns writing quality. Story Development - 5/5 - This story is definitely among my all time top 5 list when it comes to Nasuverse. The story really has a great flow, it goes from general arthurian myth to connecting to FGO lore and from how the first volume ended, it seems even lostbelt shall be included. Have really great expectations for succeeding volumes. Character Design - 4/5 - I loved how you went about fleshing the MC along with his relationship with other characters. The only flaw I find is I found the ending of volume a bit rushed along with the fact that the inclusion of Ritsuka Fujimaru and Mash was not required as they were merely spectators. Updating Stability - 5/5 - I have no complaints with respect to updating stability. World Background - 5/5 - I believe that the author has made great use of Nasuverse lore in this novel. Overall - 4.8/5 - I have to say that although my review is subjective, I have really liked the first volume of this Novel. Kudos to you author! ๐ŸŽ‰, may you continue to bring to us more of your wonderful, sacred text!

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ArdaPendragon

The author cooks a masterpiece in the last chapters[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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takeru_two

What is the name in Chinese? Please write it in the comments[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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AngelOfFire

Bro is cooked. One of the best fic I have ever read.

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ILove_Hayan048

This is without a doubt a gem of a fanfic. The story, the characters...I can't help but be immersed. This brings back the same feeling when I read my very first HP fanfic and I thought to myself. Fanfiction can sometimes be better than the original. I love the MCs mindset, his interaction with other characters, the other characters' impression of him, the plot progression is also solid. I have only one thing to say about the author...you are doing a good job. Keep cooking.

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DesolateRipper

the development is not bad and I even enjoy it, however I feel some distance with this Novel. The progression of the plot in general has been rather fast and finer details somewhat glossed over, it's very condensed and I'd say it's a shame but the benefit is that you actually get to see progression but the price for it is there.

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The_WheelOfFortune

The concept and idea of the story is really good, and overall the story is interesting

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Ellipse_ark

Translation is awesome i have read original novel it have really unpleasant bias what do you expect form these types of author and story is really get emotional during the end of the simulator Author you have great job

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BlurryDream

Not a Villain but antagonist... Until now, perfect,...............

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