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Shit AI slop. Author promised it would be better after chapter 100, It did NOT. Every single sentence screams AI and initially I'm not opposed to the because understanding what the author is conveying is faster than reading but then it got to the point where he had to talk to people and god it's so BAD. Just read them chinese craps instead of this Ai slop, at least those have proper characters.
the mc just became a pushover somewhere along the way but hope that changes.and the romance 😔 it's like trying to copy sunny and neph romance but end up making it atrocious, unbearable even.at this point the only thing that can save the romance is either a new fl or just make it a harem instead.at this point even jeci can be a better option than raven.i beg you author anyone else but raven🙏🏾.his character seems like it will improve hopefully now that hes'saway from raven.romance is the only issue with the book now,all other areas are seeing improvements even if minute,still better than at the start.
i loved it, it is one of my favorites! . . . . . . . . . ......................................................................................................
Northern's attitude and thought process is the biggest rage bait I've seen on this app. Fr Like I think, there's a distinction between feeling like the mc and actually being one. He is angry that they are treating him like a child when he knows something is about to happen but the bloody idiot doesn't want to tell anyone?? ? Imagine you run a cab service and a sixteen year old gets in and starts acting like he's the shit like tf do you think you are really? I don't know whether this is constructive or not but I just had to speak about it because it keeps coming up I wonder if it's only me with this issue
Writing this fresh off of the free chapters and I have a few things to say. Positive and negative. Writing Quality - 4 stars A few errors here and there, especially at the beginning with the author not doing his best at having a proper flow of text rather than abruptly switching topics back and forth. Definitely improves however later on. One issue I had was him noticing a mistake he made and replying to a comment on it, but never fixing it. Story Development - 5 Stars Most novels are generic. MC gets left by big tiddy fiancee because he's lost his talent or crippled. MC gets cheat. Face slap. Kill mobs. Get stronger. Face slap. Kill mobs. Get stronger. With little to no consequence or suffering. This MC is however, thrown right into the thick of it (shout-out to KSI). Thrown into dangerous territory with nothing but torment and suffering. It's well done honestly, and makes it feel more interesting because it's not just the same bland story repeated over and over. However, a lot of the development is left with a bitter taste due to the character design. Character Design - 1 star Ignoring how cringe all the sappy scenes are with him missing his family like he wasn't originally an adult man before. Because, let's be honest, everyone would be missing their family in these situations, BUT he's an adult man in a child's body who's lived a lifetime plus his age at the moment. When you grow to that age, you don't tear up and cry just because you miss your mommy. Again, kind of understandable but also off putting with how often and the situations in which it occurs. The only acceptable moment was the mines to me as his mind was semi broken. My biggest issue with the MC however, is in fact that, hmm, how do I say this without being offensive. He's retard*d. Which is funny because he constantly states how smart he is, whether it be over his peers or just in general. Yet through the entire first 36 or so chapters, yes you don't even get 40, he doesn't do a single intelligent thing. Mostly a few stupid things. It'd be understandable if he was actually a child, but he's not. The author almost portrays the MC as if he actually is a child, like he forgets that the MC reincarnated. Nevertheless, another issue is the fact that other characters are cardboard. Mother is almost non-existent. Her only scenes are crying after the first battle, and her saying goodbye. I do NOT count the scene with them finding the MC as a baby, simply because it shows little to nothing about their character. The dad is the only character with screentime besides the MC in this entire 40 chapter section. Screentime that amounts to maybe 10 chapters if I had to guess, possibly a little more. Most of it is taken by the fight and the rest just him talking about how he wants a daughter, no Diddy. He doesn't provide much value to the story himself. Every other character has had one scene total. Updating Stability - 5 Stars Nothing to comment. Didn't look into this. World Background- 5 Stars Honestly, pretty well crafted. The rift tier thing is a little silly to me, specifically with how monsters are born. It's slightly confusing in the sense of strength scaling. Basically, stated that beasts who are hellion rank for example, can never become stronger than hellion, only the peak of hellion. I think that's just a silly concept that other organisms are limited, meanwhile humans are SO special. But that can be argued in both ways, what does confuse me is if they are born weak or not? Are they immediately born at the bottom of hellion rank? Similar to how dragons function possibly? Not important though. The World Building while poorly explained sometimes, especially when related to the academy is still well done and unique. Overall - I think it would be a good read if you committed to it and continued. However, the author did a terrible job with doing what the free chapters are supposed to do, hook you to the novel. That's why most novels are quick paced these days, to get to the point and hook you. Yet the MC hasn't gotten even slightly stronger since the first fight of the novel, nor has anything captivating occurred. The last chapter with the archenemy appearing after he killed the hellion did pique my interest, curious to see the result. I will be continuing, but to be honest, it barely struck interest.
A great story to read really good plot and am overpowered protagonist hope author keep going like this but chapters are short I advise author to make them long
ahhh this I drop it already where the copycat ability I'm very confused 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 when he copy his father ability it's a good novel but I get episode 25 nahhhhhh dropt it
Crazily amazing, how can someone write a book as this?? I'm mind blown.. my best book in webnovel
its not bad but your writing in the wrong platform and wrong audience. You have to realized the readers in Webnovel hate incompetent mc, simp, ntr, stupid. I and the others here prefered novels where the MC is matured, calm, focus, overpowered (if not overpowered at least competent like Sylas Brown in Genetic Ascention), Or Atticus who's the definiton of a proper way to write an overpowered main protagonist. I know another novel name The Greatest of All Legends that way rated lowly because of the girl cheating on the main protagonist even when it's just part of his development. You have to pick which audience your targeting. Berserk is popular but some dislike it including myself, some people think the big three are the best manga of all times but some disagree. This situation is the same, your novel is not that bad but for webnovel readers including myself its infatuating, annoying, obnoxius and stupid.
the power class makes no sense, why bother to make a complex power classification if no characters respects it? the author keep saying how some peoples are immensely powerfull, just for their accomplishments to be overtaken by someone who is like 2 or 3 ranks bellow them
i am in ch 164 right now and with this i can say that u need a lot of patience to read this because of the complex words that the author kept throwing here or there but now it has improved a lot....i didn't realize since where the words and sentences got a bit simple but it is more understandable now, i love our main character the most now because he is the kind of character i prefer the most, of course at first his stupid decisions made him a bit irritating but its much better now... also, i saw some comments saying that he is a simp, i don't know whether they were referring to the present or the past(beginning of the story) i really do hope that he doesn't become a simp or something like that, this trope has become annoying at this point...
where's the character development? it's chapter 200+ and he only become more and more immature brat who keep throwing tantrum at everyone, his character we're better before dark continent arc, intellect ual and mature mc but now he become a 3rd rate thug/mob in face slapping novel, the type that got slapped casually by face slapping mc , i know and understand that character need time to develop but common he has 28+16 years of his life we're wasted without development only to go backwards
unlikeable mc, expecting more of how mc becoming op with his copy system not this void/chaos mumbo jumbo, power system we're mess and chaotic
Membuka SPOILER Another character with depth potential in Thalen, leader of the citadel reduced to the assistant head of the 'glaze northern till he bust' club
I take it back; this is for those who are into the 'humiliation' genre. The main character is frustratingly incompetent—he hasn't even tried to develop his talent in the first 30 chapters, despite having the necessary fragments. The author attempts to make him resemble Sunny from "Shadow Slave," but fails miserably. At least Sunny is likable and somewhat intelligent. This character lacks common sense, and I’ve heard from others that the female lead is manipulative while the main character is a simp. Additionally, the writing style contains too many grammatical errors and relies on overly grand words just to inflate the word count. This novel had potential, but it's been squandered.
MC is stupid even after getting betrayed by his women. He was discarded like a trash in his first life. I can't understand why MC believes that she will just give him ship. He didn't learn anything after going through hell in last life and this life. MC is naive and stupid even now.
Bruh , why use complex words when the same can be explained in a easier way.
What a destructive writing my boy you have.. It shit you know and you also know that majority of people who use web novel are younglings. So have some mercy and rewrite this shit, which we can understand Story is good but the execution is horrible and shit.
Story is good overall but mc hates female lead too much he doesn't control his anger and think calmly about what happened, Terence told him she can't tell raven about the future but still he believes Raven plotted and used him. To it looks hopeless how are they gonna end together and most importantly when will this misunderstanding be solved and they will get close. Author tell me would this happen how many more chapters. But honestly, 😁😏 it will interesting and fun to mc getting close to someone having feelings towards someone who he hate the most. Author keep it up 👍 I am waiting for the romance between the two
This review is after reading 150+ chapters. 1st of all this novel feels like a copy of shadow slave and some other novels. The power system also feels like a wish.com rip-off. Also the mc was said to be smart in his previous life but all i can see is a boy dumber than an 8 year old. It also feels like the author just throws him in dangerous situations yet other than becoming OP he Doesn't learn anything and is arrogant for no reason. Tbh the concept of the novel is cool but the author simply is unable to bring out the full potential of the novel. Other than that, the anime and japanese refrences to me personally atleast are very cringe. Final Thought- The novels concept is good but the story feels kinda dumb with very obvious plotholes.
reading it feels like a chore. unnecessary and complex words to convey so little details.
At first when I heard about isekai in this novel, I was immediately not interested. However, after reading this far, it turned out to be different from my expectations. Starting from the background, power system, about the heroine who doesn't fall in love with the protagonist, and so on.
Love this book! Have read all the way to the current chapter 496. Love the characters and the world you have created. I like the complexity of the story and all the plot lines very interested to see where it will go and what happens. Thanks author.
I love this book, a lot.... I love it mostly cause of it's unique power system and the story line isn't a stereotypical renovation novel.... even if the MC is broken he's still not op, awesome development only thing, there author I'm starving for more chapters 😭😭😭😂
First of all, I read until the 24th episode but I can't stand it anymore. Normally, it takes 2-3 episodes for me to connect to MC, but it's 25th episode and I can't connect to MC because there are a lot of unnecessary pov transitions, but these are not specified like pov, 3rd point of view, and let's come to it, our golden finger used the system only once and other than that, he didn't even try to increase his power by wondering. I really started this story thinking there was no harem, unfortunately I didn't like it. If they fix the point of view and bring MC to the forefront, the series would be great, and I have to mention this. While reading, this series gave me the vibe of a Chinese series, despite the very detailed narration, you can't visualize it in your mind at all. I definitely gave this story 3 more
While reading the free chapters I came to the following conclusions: 1.The author writes in an unnecessarily long way, which is quite illegible. 2.The characters are poorly written, I didn't like any of them. 3.The story is not engaging enough and is even boring in places. 4.The main character develops much too slowly. Almost everything I read was boring or frustrating. The only good moment was when the main character finally copied some talent. This was portrayed quite well, especially the description of the Talent. This is probably the only good thing the author did in the part of the novel I read.The plot with his rebirth and new family was also quite good, but the potential was wasted by the author. To sum up, I didn't have much fun with this novel and I probably won't read it again. However, if I ever return to this novel and find it to be better in subsequent chapters, I will revise my review in later stages. But I doubt this will happen because After reading other reviews, I decided that I don't want to read 300 chapters for something interesting to happen. After all, it is the beginning that is supposed to interest the reader, not the end.
Membuka SPOILER
Here's my HONEST review after reading this. First of all when I was reading a comment about Author's review of the story I was flabbergasted about these reader's thoughts of the story. Like this is an amazing story that centers "equality" first it's not overpowered. Second it's not centered only to the MC, third author is making sure that all of the characters in this story has an attitude, background and to be kept as humanly as possible so we could feel they're alive. Second, Author's vocabulary is vast as hell and That's what I like about this story. It's like the same as "Shadow slave" hell I would pay lots to unlock this novel. Third, Author is making sure to check MC's OP ability and is making sure it's not too OP and it's balanced. I like it when the MC's are more of like a human than a cold-hearted MC know-it-all. That seems like not a good story. Fourth, the story has a potential to be at peak. However, the downside of this story is about the title. There's a lot of title you could imagine. (I don't want to think about it) The thing here is there are so many novels, manga, manhwa, manhuas, and webtoons that has the same name as this that seems to give the future readers thoughts that "maybe this story is another 'OP Beginning, destroy everything' novel" thus dropping it viewership significantly. But I think it's good at this rate. I hope this will be posted on the rankings.
MC is still a wimp after 6 months of suffering. After he comes across other human he only get constant humiliation. Power level is confusing asf.
Shit AI slop. Author promised it would be better after chapter 100, It did NOT. Every single sentence screams AI and initially I'm not opposed to the because understanding what the author is conveying is faster than reading but then it got to the point where he had to talk to people and god it's so BAD. Just read them chinese craps instead of this Ai slop, at least those have proper characters.
the mc just became a pushover somewhere along the way but hope that changes.and the romance 😔 it's like trying to copy sunny and neph romance but end up making it atrocious, unbearable even.at this point the only thing that can save the romance is either a new fl or just make it a harem instead.at this point even jeci can be a better option than raven.i beg you author anyone else but raven🙏🏾.his character seems like it will improve hopefully now that hes'saway from raven.romance is the only issue with the book now,all other areas are seeing improvements even if minute,still better than at the start.
i loved it, it is one of my favorites! . . . . . . . . . ......................................................................................................
Northern's attitude and thought process is the biggest rage bait I've seen on this app. Fr Like I think, there's a distinction between feeling like the mc and actually being one. He is angry that they are treating him like a child when he knows something is about to happen but the bloody idiot doesn't want to tell anyone?? ? Imagine you run a cab service and a sixteen year old gets in and starts acting like he's the shit like tf do you think you are really? I don't know whether this is constructive or not but I just had to speak about it because it keeps coming up I wonder if it's only me with this issue
Writing this fresh off of the free chapters and I have a few things to say. Positive and negative. Writing Quality - 4 stars A few errors here and there, especially at the beginning with the author not doing his best at having a proper flow of text rather than abruptly switching topics back and forth. Definitely improves however later on. One issue I had was him noticing a mistake he made and replying to a comment on it, but never fixing it. Story Development - 5 Stars Most novels are generic. MC gets left by big tiddy fiancee because he's lost his talent or crippled. MC gets cheat. Face slap. Kill mobs. Get stronger. Face slap. Kill mobs. Get stronger. With little to no consequence or suffering. This MC is however, thrown right into the thick of it (shout-out to KSI). Thrown into dangerous territory with nothing but torment and suffering. It's well done honestly, and makes it feel more interesting because it's not just the same bland story repeated over and over. However, a lot of the development is left with a bitter taste due to the character design. Character Design - 1 star Ignoring how cringe all the sappy scenes are with him missing his family like he wasn't originally an adult man before. Because, let's be honest, everyone would be missing their family in these situations, BUT he's an adult man in a child's body who's lived a lifetime plus his age at the moment. When you grow to that age, you don't tear up and cry just because you miss your mommy. Again, kind of understandable but also off putting with how often and the situations in which it occurs. The only acceptable moment was the mines to me as his mind was semi broken. My biggest issue with the MC however, is in fact that, hmm, how do I say this without being offensive. He's retard*d. Which is funny because he constantly states how smart he is, whether it be over his peers or just in general. Yet through the entire first 36 or so chapters, yes you don't even get 40, he doesn't do a single intelligent thing. Mostly a few stupid things. It'd be understandable if he was actually a child, but he's not. The author almost portrays the MC as if he actually is a child, like he forgets that the MC reincarnated. Nevertheless, another issue is the fact that other characters are cardboard. Mother is almost non-existent. Her only scenes are crying after the first battle, and her saying goodbye. I do NOT count the scene with them finding the MC as a baby, simply because it shows little to nothing about their character. The dad is the only character with screentime besides the MC in this entire 40 chapter section. Screentime that amounts to maybe 10 chapters if I had to guess, possibly a little more. Most of it is taken by the fight and the rest just him talking about how he wants a daughter, no Diddy. He doesn't provide much value to the story himself. Every other character has had one scene total. Updating Stability - 5 Stars Nothing to comment. Didn't look into this. World Background- 5 Stars Honestly, pretty well crafted. The rift tier thing is a little silly to me, specifically with how monsters are born. It's slightly confusing in the sense of strength scaling. Basically, stated that beasts who are hellion rank for example, can never become stronger than hellion, only the peak of hellion. I think that's just a silly concept that other organisms are limited, meanwhile humans are SO special. But that can be argued in both ways, what does confuse me is if they are born weak or not? Are they immediately born at the bottom of hellion rank? Similar to how dragons function possibly? Not important though. The World Building while poorly explained sometimes, especially when related to the academy is still well done and unique. Overall - I think it would be a good read if you committed to it and continued. However, the author did a terrible job with doing what the free chapters are supposed to do, hook you to the novel. That's why most novels are quick paced these days, to get to the point and hook you. Yet the MC hasn't gotten even slightly stronger since the first fight of the novel, nor has anything captivating occurred. The last chapter with the archenemy appearing after he killed the hellion did pique my interest, curious to see the result. I will be continuing, but to be honest, it barely struck interest.
A great story to read really good plot and am overpowered protagonist hope author keep going like this but chapters are short I advise author to make them long
ahhh this I drop it already where the copycat ability I'm very confused 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 when he copy his father ability it's a good novel but I get episode 25 nahhhhhh dropt it
Crazily amazing, how can someone write a book as this?? I'm mind blown.. my best book in webnovel
its not bad but your writing in the wrong platform and wrong audience. You have to realized the readers in Webnovel hate incompetent mc, simp, ntr, stupid. I and the others here prefered novels where the MC is matured, calm, focus, overpowered (if not overpowered at least competent like Sylas Brown in Genetic Ascention), Or Atticus who's the definiton of a proper way to write an overpowered main protagonist. I know another novel name The Greatest of All Legends that way rated lowly because of the girl cheating on the main protagonist even when it's just part of his development. You have to pick which audience your targeting. Berserk is popular but some dislike it including myself, some people think the big three are the best manga of all times but some disagree. This situation is the same, your novel is not that bad but for webnovel readers including myself its infatuating, annoying, obnoxius and stupid.
the power class makes no sense, why bother to make a complex power classification if no characters respects it? the author keep saying how some peoples are immensely powerfull, just for their accomplishments to be overtaken by someone who is like 2 or 3 ranks bellow them
i am in ch 164 right now and with this i can say that u need a lot of patience to read this because of the complex words that the author kept throwing here or there but now it has improved a lot....i didn't realize since where the words and sentences got a bit simple but it is more understandable now, i love our main character the most now because he is the kind of character i prefer the most, of course at first his stupid decisions made him a bit irritating but its much better now... also, i saw some comments saying that he is a simp, i don't know whether they were referring to the present or the past(beginning of the story) i really do hope that he doesn't become a simp or something like that, this trope has become annoying at this point...
where's the character development? it's chapter 200+ and he only become more and more immature brat who keep throwing tantrum at everyone, his character we're better before dark continent arc, intellect ual and mature mc but now he become a 3rd rate thug/mob in face slapping novel, the type that got slapped casually by face slapping mc , i know and understand that character need time to develop but common he has 28+16 years of his life we're wasted without development only to go backwards
unlikeable mc, expecting more of how mc becoming op with his copy system not this void/chaos mumbo jumbo, power system we're mess and chaotic
Membuka SPOILER Another character with depth potential in Thalen, leader of the citadel reduced to the assistant head of the 'glaze northern till he bust' club
I take it back; this is for those who are into the 'humiliation' genre. The main character is frustratingly incompetent—he hasn't even tried to develop his talent in the first 30 chapters, despite having the necessary fragments. The author attempts to make him resemble Sunny from "Shadow Slave," but fails miserably. At least Sunny is likable and somewhat intelligent. This character lacks common sense, and I’ve heard from others that the female lead is manipulative while the main character is a simp. Additionally, the writing style contains too many grammatical errors and relies on overly grand words just to inflate the word count. This novel had potential, but it's been squandered.
MC is stupid even after getting betrayed by his women. He was discarded like a trash in his first life. I can't understand why MC believes that she will just give him ship. He didn't learn anything after going through hell in last life and this life. MC is naive and stupid even now.
Bruh , why use complex words when the same can be explained in a easier way.
What a destructive writing my boy you have.. It shit you know and you also know that majority of people who use web novel are younglings. So have some mercy and rewrite this shit, which we can understand Story is good but the execution is horrible and shit.
Story is good overall but mc hates female lead too much he doesn't control his anger and think calmly about what happened, Terence told him she can't tell raven about the future but still he believes Raven plotted and used him. To it looks hopeless how are they gonna end together and most importantly when will this misunderstanding be solved and they will get close. Author tell me would this happen how many more chapters. But honestly, 😁😏 it will interesting and fun to mc getting close to someone having feelings towards someone who he hate the most. Author keep it up 👍 I am waiting for the romance between the two
This review is after reading 150+ chapters. 1st of all this novel feels like a copy of shadow slave and some other novels. The power system also feels like a wish.com rip-off. Also the mc was said to be smart in his previous life but all i can see is a boy dumber than an 8 year old. It also feels like the author just throws him in dangerous situations yet other than becoming OP he Doesn't learn anything and is arrogant for no reason. Tbh the concept of the novel is cool but the author simply is unable to bring out the full potential of the novel. Other than that, the anime and japanese refrences to me personally atleast are very cringe. Final Thought- The novels concept is good but the story feels kinda dumb with very obvious plotholes.
reading it feels like a chore. unnecessary and complex words to convey so little details.
At first when I heard about isekai in this novel, I was immediately not interested. However, after reading this far, it turned out to be different from my expectations. Starting from the background, power system, about the heroine who doesn't fall in love with the protagonist, and so on.
Love this book! Have read all the way to the current chapter 496. Love the characters and the world you have created. I like the complexity of the story and all the plot lines very interested to see where it will go and what happens. Thanks author.
I love this book, a lot.... I love it mostly cause of it's unique power system and the story line isn't a stereotypical renovation novel.... even if the MC is broken he's still not op, awesome development only thing, there author I'm starving for more chapters 😭😭😭😂
First of all, I read until the 24th episode but I can't stand it anymore. Normally, it takes 2-3 episodes for me to connect to MC, but it's 25th episode and I can't connect to MC because there are a lot of unnecessary pov transitions, but these are not specified like pov, 3rd point of view, and let's come to it, our golden finger used the system only once and other than that, he didn't even try to increase his power by wondering. I really started this story thinking there was no harem, unfortunately I didn't like it. If they fix the point of view and bring MC to the forefront, the series would be great, and I have to mention this. While reading, this series gave me the vibe of a Chinese series, despite the very detailed narration, you can't visualize it in your mind at all. I definitely gave this story 3 more
While reading the free chapters I came to the following conclusions: 1.The author writes in an unnecessarily long way, which is quite illegible. 2.The characters are poorly written, I didn't like any of them. 3.The story is not engaging enough and is even boring in places. 4.The main character develops much too slowly. Almost everything I read was boring or frustrating. The only good moment was when the main character finally copied some talent. This was portrayed quite well, especially the description of the Talent. This is probably the only good thing the author did in the part of the novel I read.The plot with his rebirth and new family was also quite good, but the potential was wasted by the author. To sum up, I didn't have much fun with this novel and I probably won't read it again. However, if I ever return to this novel and find it to be better in subsequent chapters, I will revise my review in later stages. But I doubt this will happen because After reading other reviews, I decided that I don't want to read 300 chapters for something interesting to happen. After all, it is the beginning that is supposed to interest the reader, not the end.
Membuka SPOILER Here's my HONEST review after reading this. First of all when I was reading a comment about Author's review of the story I was flabbergasted about these reader's thoughts of the story. Like this is an amazing story that centers "equality" first it's not overpowered. Second it's not centered only to the MC, third author is making sure that all of the characters in this story has an attitude, background and to be kept as humanly as possible so we could feel they're alive. Second, Author's vocabulary is vast as hell and That's what I like about this story. It's like the same as "Shadow slave" hell I would pay lots to unlock this novel. Third, Author is making sure to check MC's OP ability and is making sure it's not too OP and it's balanced. I like it when the MC's are more of like a human than a cold-hearted MC know-it-all. That seems like not a good story. Fourth, the story has a potential to be at peak. However, the downside of this story is about the title. There's a lot of title you could imagine. (I don't want to think about it) The thing here is there are so many novels, manga, manhwa, manhuas, and webtoons that has the same name as this that seems to give the future readers thoughts that "maybe this story is another 'OP Beginning, destroy everything' novel" thus dropping it viewership significantly. But I think it's good at this rate. I hope this will be posted on the rankings.
MC is still a wimp after 6 months of suffering. After he comes across other human he only get constant humiliation. Power level is confusing asf.
the updating stability is shit dialogues are cringe do not read guys