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to autor plz dont put poke - human sexual relations i realy love the story so far
I’ve been looking for a move with this concept that is actually interesting and I think I found the one I was looking for
Overall a pokemon reincarnation fic with potential. I only have a few grips about it. First the part where the MC gains gold seems like a pointless and unnecessary addition. Second I just straight up don't like him gaining items like that escape rope through the system, and the infinite Oran berries irks me. Not to mention the suicidal Rattatas, they are a weak pokemon on the bottom of the food chain so why are they wantonly attacking a charmander like they are when they are ridiculously weak?
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this is a very good fan fic so far it is a more realistic fan fic of pokemon I'm enjoying it and I hope you continue to update this fan fic and more like it in the future
...................................................................................................................................................................................................................... don't make pokemon more cruel please :[
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to autor plz dont put poke - human sexual relations i realy love the story so far
I’ve been looking for a move with this concept that is actually interesting and I think I found the one I was looking for
Overall a pokemon reincarnation fic with potential. I only have a few grips about it. First the part where the MC gains gold seems like a pointless and unnecessary addition. Second I just straight up don't like him gaining items like that escape rope through the system, and the infinite Oran berries irks me. Not to mention the suicidal Rattatas, they are a weak pokemon on the bottom of the food chain so why are they wantonly attacking a charmander like they are when they are ridiculously weak?
Membuka SPOILER this is a very good fan fic so far it is a more realistic fan fic of pokemon I'm enjoying it and I hope you continue to update this fan fic and more like it in the future
...................................................................................................................................................................................................................... don't make pokemon more cruel please :[
Was very good… lemme know if it continues