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I can't believe I haven't written a review for this fic yet.. Story development is pretty good. There's no Racist remarks MC is not morally bad also MC doesn't change girlfriends like changing clothes. No supreme Chinese or any other country not biased. no lucky happenings 90% realistic. MCs doesn't get everything he wishes overall one of the best Hollywood fic you will find in webnovel. good work author. Don't believe hating comments just read the story and you'll see how good this is past 50 chapters there is not even a single thing to criticize about.
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Terrible story mc seems racist he's a pedo hooked up with a runaway 16 years old actress and his friend James Franco(pedo) took a 12 year old girl costar to a lake house to do whatever pedos do
aside from kara faith to cara fess to kara fes, the whole thing is soooo goood! one just need to push through and it will be good
I'm up to date with the story chapter 230 and I recommend it 100% very good to pass the time and very entertaining, the development of the MC is constant and does not get stagnant, the secondary characters are interesting and complement the story 👍
Hello, I love reading through your story, i enjoy the energy you gathered together but it has low engagers I would like to discuss something with you that will help the engagement of your book
Racist and murderer mc ,.............................😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓.....................................................
Translation is okay, also you posted ch 1 twice. I've read this before, and I must say this is one of the more realistic start among CN Hollywood stories, it's not just write this and baam Millionaire! But my main complaint is there's too much water (too verbose for word count). If you're looking for a HW story where the MC chose films that would be critically acclaimed instead of quick cash grab like Blair Witch, then this is for you.
The story is good and translation is fine.mc's character is consistent . But why is there so much pedophilia in this story . the mc is dating a 16 year old and mc's friend is taking a 12 girl who thinks him like a father to Lake house for bad intentions and mc is fine with. mc and his friend always get drunk and joke about underage girls. over all the story would be 10x better if not for the pedophils
Membuka SPOILER I can't believe I haven't written a review for this fic yet.. Story development is pretty good. There's no Racist remarks MC is not morally bad also MC doesn't change girlfriends like changing clothes. No supreme Chinese or any other country not biased. no lucky happenings 90% realistic. MCs doesn't get everything he wishes overall one of the best Hollywood fic you will find in webnovel. good work author. Don't believe hating comments just read the story and you'll see how good this is past 50 chapters there is not even a single thing to criticize about.
Interesting (___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________)
Terrible story mc seems racist he's a pedo hooked up with a runaway 16 years old actress and his friend James Franco(pedo) took a 12 year old girl costar to a lake house to do whatever pedos do
aside from kara faith to cara fess to kara fes, the whole thing is soooo goood! one just need to push through and it will be good
I'm up to date with the story chapter 230 and I recommend it 100% very good to pass the time and very entertaining, the development of the MC is constant and does not get stagnant, the secondary characters are interesting and complement the story 👍
Hello, I love reading through your story, i enjoy the energy you gathered together but it has low engagers I would like to discuss something with you that will help the engagement of your book
Racist and murderer mc ,.............................😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓.....................................................
Translation is okay, also you posted ch 1 twice. I've read this before, and I must say this is one of the more realistic start among CN Hollywood stories, it's not just write this and baam Millionaire! But my main complaint is there's too much water (too verbose for word count). If you're looking for a HW story where the MC chose films that would be critically acclaimed instead of quick cash grab like Blair Witch, then this is for you.
The story is good and translation is fine.mc's character is consistent . But why is there so much pedophilia in this story . the mc is dating a 16 year old and mc's friend is taking a 12 girl who thinks him like a father to Lake house for bad intentions and mc is fine with. mc and his friend always get drunk and joke about underage girls. over all the story would be 10x better if not for the pedophils
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