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Seems like another chatgpt book. Harry not friends with hermione wired abrupt changes in certain things that happen. To tell the truth this would be an amazing book. It just needs to include harry's best friends .or any friends as it looks like the other characters that harry cares about have been killed off so it can be a stroy JUST about harry and bella. It also needs to be edited and writen like a book and not like a machine. thier a part that feel like this is a novel but i can feel the place in the plot that seem machine influenced. It just doesn't make sense that harry who has been starved of friends his entire childhood would actively not want friends when he finally has a chance.
Seems like another chatgpt book. Harry not friends with hermione wired abrupt changes in certain things that happen. To tell the truth this would be an amazing book. It just needs to include harry's best friends .or any friends as it looks like the other characters that harry cares about have been killed off so it can be a stroy JUST about harry and bella. It also needs to be edited and writen like a book and not like a machine. thier a part that feel like this is a novel but i can feel the place in the plot that seem machine influenced. It just doesn't make sense that harry who has been starved of friends his entire childhood would actively not want friends when he finally has a chance.