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just began reading it after finishing necromancer and just to ask which chapter does lux meet with thirteen? So far Elyon's books are the greatest I've read and big up to yah
it was really good story . I like the character ,if you like system novels you must to read that because different from others this time we look story in system eyes. it was touching sometimes I really really like story please give a try:) ( sorry for my English I try my best to write this) [img=recommend][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
can anyone explain why the privilege tiers are way more expensive than other novels.
who thinks that if therteen had to decide between his family and christopher, he will choose christopher, like im thinking that thirteen will become his bootlicker by the end.yeah I know I'm number 1 christopher hater
Time for the third running book Read the last two and they were beautiful, hope this too
interesting reading. full of action. the author put together the story very carefully.. i can't stop reading it the plot is put together perfectly. good job. hope the writer continues to produce writing.. recommended to all readers who are looking for interesting reading.. keep up the work.. may the writer always be healthy and happy in producing the best work
I was expecting more. The story isn't progressing in an exciting direction so far. The MC has too few challenging obsticles in his path for the theme. The drive behind the main character is very tacky. I find the MC’s interactions with the main antagonists to be immature and cringeworthy(maybe it should be like that if he's an inexperienced kid, but I don't like the time-hardened system acting like that). The intrinsic logic behind the narration is often immature. There is a lot of rushing through infodump after infodump, which leaves events and characters of the story feeling trivial and impersonal. In many scenes, the writing style lacks sufficient description and immersiveness. Don't get it wrong, it’s not a terrible read, just not great. To sum it up, it's readable and feels original, but it could and should be so much better.
The story is great as always. Btw, does anyone know if there's a discord server by the author?
My star rating means nothing. I just want to get a confirmation if this is really Harem or not
A decent take on what it would be like for a system to be the main character, instead of a supporting actor. Although, the story felt rushed and too monotone, unforgiving with the lack of emotions present.
It’s an enjoyable story, but has some very questionable logic “He had been to many worlds where slavery was rampant, so he didn't think of the Slave Traders as bad guys. In fact, one of his Hosts was also a Slave Trader, who sold slaves to people, whom he believed would take good care of them. There were always two sides of a coin. Depending on how one looked at it, there were many stories where slaves actually had a happy ending, and found joy despite the circumstances they were in.” As it turns out, when I beat someone half to death, and poisoned them for a year, that person was quite thankful when I decided to let them sit at the dinner table instead of the prison filled with glass shards…perhaps the system has never heard of the terms Stockholm syndrome and suspension bridge effect. This has been thirteen’s largest character defect in my opinion
I haven't gone far but i absolutely love the book already. It shows a whole new aspect of system novels to be honest Good plot in my opinion, good writing, nice world background and I have absolutely no complaints for real 🤸🏾♀️ a bit surprised at the harem tag tho😂 so refreshing hehe 🤎
Very good, I think it's the first time I've read a web novel where the system is the protagonist, and so far everything is going very well, really good. How about creating a server on discord?
Que enredo envolvente e inovador! Ver tudo através dos olhos de um quase-herói ou quase-vilão, revelando que o verdadeiro antagonista é o próprio sistema que conhecemos há anos, é simplesmente fascinante! Uma reviravolta tão peculiar que deixa um gostinho de "quero mais e mais"!
live your works author -san btw we are in the same country 😁 KEEP IT UP
My honest review of this book so far is: Another great book in the making by Elyon, he sure knows how to pull you into his stories and make you appreciate the time and love he puts into them. Thirteen is definitely my third favorite Mc, lux being my favorite. I look forward to the ups and downs this story is going to bring along with the heartaches when elyon in his classic fashion leaves us on a cliffhanger hungry for more. keep up the great work elypn
A really great novel which hopefully will entertain me for a long time! Elyon is a very talented, and one of my - if not the most - favorite author. The story revolves around the System of cannon fodders and his fight against fate, the God of Systems and some stinky old men. Systems POV is an entertaining novel with a high writing quality, excellent Caracter Design and a well thought out World Background. Elyon is updating this novel regularly, and it seems that he is able to hold his update schedule. if something is endangering the update sability, the readers get warned beforehand, so no one is kept in the dark. the only thing i personally dislike is his way of foreshadowing at the end of many chapters. please consider that this is not necessarily bad but a matter of taste :) thanks for your time. Enjoy this unique novel and congratulations to Elyon for creating this great story. I whish you good luck and all the best for this years writers contest! I'm rooting for you <3
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Having read Elton’s previous books, this is by far my favorite and might be his best one yet!
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A awesome 5 star till where I read. Had to quit it due to it being a harem novel sadly...
i want to read this, but I won't , I resist the temptation of having to anticipate new chapters, elyon get this to chap 300 tomorrow 🌚
Elyon the Goat back at it again with a new novel. Long time fan here since around chapter 500 of the strongest system. I'm ready for another great experience.
just began reading it after finishing necromancer and just to ask which chapter does lux meet with thirteen? So far Elyon's books are the greatest I've read and big up to yah
it was really good story . I like the character ,if you like system novels you must to read that because different from others this time we look story in system eyes. it was touching sometimes I really really like story please give a try:) ( sorry for my English I try my best to write this) [img=recommend][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
can anyone explain why the privilege tiers are way more expensive than other novels.
who thinks that if therteen had to decide between his family and christopher, he will choose christopher, like im thinking that thirteen will become his bootlicker by the end.yeah I know I'm number 1 christopher hater
Time for the third running book Read the last two and they were beautiful, hope this too
interesting reading. full of action. the author put together the story very carefully.. i can't stop reading it the plot is put together perfectly. good job. hope the writer continues to produce writing.. recommended to all readers who are looking for interesting reading.. keep up the work.. may the writer always be healthy and happy in producing the best work
I was expecting more. The story isn't progressing in an exciting direction so far. The MC has too few challenging obsticles in his path for the theme. The drive behind the main character is very tacky. I find the MC’s interactions with the main antagonists to be immature and cringeworthy(maybe it should be like that if he's an inexperienced kid, but I don't like the time-hardened system acting like that). The intrinsic logic behind the narration is often immature. There is a lot of rushing through infodump after infodump, which leaves events and characters of the story feeling trivial and impersonal. In many scenes, the writing style lacks sufficient description and immersiveness. Don't get it wrong, it’s not a terrible read, just not great. To sum it up, it's readable and feels original, but it could and should be so much better.
The story is great as always. Btw, does anyone know if there's a discord server by the author?
My star rating means nothing. I just want to get a confirmation if this is really Harem or not
A decent take on what it would be like for a system to be the main character, instead of a supporting actor. Although, the story felt rushed and too monotone, unforgiving with the lack of emotions present.
It’s an enjoyable story, but has some very questionable logic “He had been to many worlds where slavery was rampant, so he didn't think of the Slave Traders as bad guys. In fact, one of his Hosts was also a Slave Trader, who sold slaves to people, whom he believed would take good care of them. There were always two sides of a coin. Depending on how one looked at it, there were many stories where slaves actually had a happy ending, and found joy despite the circumstances they were in.” As it turns out, when I beat someone half to death, and poisoned them for a year, that person was quite thankful when I decided to let them sit at the dinner table instead of the prison filled with glass shards…perhaps the system has never heard of the terms Stockholm syndrome and suspension bridge effect. This has been thirteen’s largest character defect in my opinion
I haven't gone far but i absolutely love the book already. It shows a whole new aspect of system novels to be honest Good plot in my opinion, good writing, nice world background and I have absolutely no complaints for real 🤸🏾♀️ a bit surprised at the harem tag tho😂 so refreshing hehe 🤎
Very good, I think it's the first time I've read a web novel where the system is the protagonist, and so far everything is going very well, really good. How about creating a server on discord?
Que enredo envolvente e inovador! Ver tudo através dos olhos de um quase-herói ou quase-vilão, revelando que o verdadeiro antagonista é o próprio sistema que conhecemos há anos, é simplesmente fascinante! Uma reviravolta tão peculiar que deixa um gostinho de "quero mais e mais"!
live your works author -san btw we are in the same country 😁 KEEP IT UP
My honest review of this book so far is: Another great book in the making by Elyon, he sure knows how to pull you into his stories and make you appreciate the time and love he puts into them. Thirteen is definitely my third favorite Mc, lux being my favorite. I look forward to the ups and downs this story is going to bring along with the heartaches when elyon in his classic fashion leaves us on a cliffhanger hungry for more. keep up the great work elypn
A really great novel which hopefully will entertain me for a long time! Elyon is a very talented, and one of my - if not the most - favorite author. The story revolves around the System of cannon fodders and his fight against fate, the God of Systems and some stinky old men. Systems POV is an entertaining novel with a high writing quality, excellent Caracter Design and a well thought out World Background. Elyon is updating this novel regularly, and it seems that he is able to hold his update schedule. if something is endangering the update sability, the readers get warned beforehand, so no one is kept in the dark. the only thing i personally dislike is his way of foreshadowing at the end of many chapters. please consider that this is not necessarily bad but a matter of taste :) thanks for your time. Enjoy this unique novel and congratulations to Elyon for creating this great story. I whish you good luck and all the best for this years writers contest! I'm rooting for you <3
Membuka SPOILER Having read Elton’s previous books, this is by far my favorite and might be his best one yet!
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A awesome 5 star till where I read. Had to quit it due to it being a harem novel sadly...
i want to read this, but I won't , I resist the temptation of having to anticipate new chapters, elyon get this to chap 300 tomorrow 🌚
Elyon the Goat back at it again with a new novel. Long time fan here since around chapter 500 of the strongest system. I'm ready for another great experience.
My 3rd novel from Elyon and what should i write, it's awesome.