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This story and character design are on top. The only downside was the punctuation and sentence structure. Writing style was okay and emotions were fleshed out. I must say that the novel has a chance to get popular with few edits. Gambatte Author nim!
Interesting story and characters... It only has a few chapters available but it was enough to get into the story... Keep writing this because we need more strong Female Main Characters here at Webnovel... 😆
In love with Dwelfiee. She is a unique character that just pulls you. Its been a while since I have seen such forbidden romance. looking forward to seeing what crazy thing our halfling will bring😁🤗🤗
What a great read! Not only was the flow of the story flawless, the grammar was "almost" spotless. I suggest passing it once through a grammar checker. It's nothing major, though, so it's fine as is. While reading this, I was reminded of a few anime I've watched long before... To be specific, "No Game No Life" and "Goblin Slayer". Thanks to that, I had a pretty solid image of the world you're building. All in all, a wonderful story that I would definitely recommend to others. Great work, Author! Keep up the chapters~!
This is the first time I read a Dwarf/elf hybrid, an elf with a temperment of Dwarf is really something!hope you continue this!
For your first try, I'd say you did really great!😁😁 Reading this is just like watching a TV show, and honestly, that's what I think a slice of life should be like.
Once again, I'm not going to be arrogant and give myself five stars, but I think I'd say that I did pretty well for my first try at a comedic, slice of life story.
I love the title and it’s content Remind me of my grandma and her stories, I love reading about them elfs, will surely give my friends and sibling who also loves fairy tales
This story and character design are on top. The only downside was the punctuation and sentence structure. Writing style was okay and emotions were fleshed out. I must say that the novel has a chance to get popular with few edits. Gambatte Author nim!
Interesting story and characters... It only has a few chapters available but it was enough to get into the story... Keep writing this because we need more strong Female Main Characters here at Webnovel... 😆
In love with Dwelfiee. She is a unique character that just pulls you. Its been a while since I have seen such forbidden romance. looking forward to seeing what crazy thing our halfling will bring😁🤗🤗
What a great read! Not only was the flow of the story flawless, the grammar was "almost" spotless. I suggest passing it once through a grammar checker. It's nothing major, though, so it's fine as is. While reading this, I was reminded of a few anime I've watched long before... To be specific, "No Game No Life" and "Goblin Slayer". Thanks to that, I had a pretty solid image of the world you're building. All in all, a wonderful story that I would definitely recommend to others. Great work, Author! Keep up the chapters~!
This is the first time I read a Dwarf/elf hybrid, an elf with a temperment of Dwarf is really something!hope you continue this!
For your first try, I'd say you did really great!😁😁 Reading this is just like watching a TV show, and honestly, that's what I think a slice of life should be like.
Once again, I'm not going to be arrogant and give myself five stars, but I think I'd say that I did pretty well for my first try at a comedic, slice of life story.
I love the title and it’s content Remind me of my grandma and her stories, I love reading about them elfs, will surely give my friends and sibling who also loves fairy tales