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Honestly it's a disappointing story, the MC had a difficult past which could give us an interesting character since he didn't need to adapt to the harsh environment of TWD, but the author turned him into a useless depressed alcoholic who can't hear the zombies until they breathe down his neck and always narrowly escapes, as if it were a game, but it is not a game, the author constantly emphasizes that it is real life and that not everyone acts like in the game (within fiction of course) but although they all act slightly different from the game, the MC seems to try hard to act like an in-game NPC would, being blind, deaf and at times weak and without strength. Somewhere near the middle there is a 1 month time jump where the protagonist apparently did nothing to improve his chances of not dying, he simply searched for resources, It is disappointing since he did not improve his weak physique (a zombie with little flesh literally almost killed him in a struggle of forces on the second day of the story), He also didn't explore the area for threats (when I stopped reading the MC he was living in the motel where there were bandits nearby) , he basically behaved like an NPC and not like a person who knows he must maximize his chances of survival and even more so in the MC's situation because he knows the plot.
The world of Telltale's Walking Dead is a rarity. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
dozens of years in the future, chatgpt will sue you for copyright, at least mention his name in the description .................................
5* cuz author is my homie, and I believe he can make great novels. ššŗā¤šŖ................
A very good story so far š[img=recommend] .........................................................
good for now ....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
just because there is no harem and the author is not trying to please everyone make this a 5 star fanfic
Homie found work, but takes up all his time, so he most likely won't update anymore.
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Honestly it's a disappointing story, the MC had a difficult past which could give us an interesting character since he didn't need to adapt to the harsh environment of TWD, but the author turned him into a useless depressed alcoholic who can't hear the zombies until they breathe down his neck and always narrowly escapes, as if it were a game, but it is not a game, the author constantly emphasizes that it is real life and that not everyone acts like in the game (within fiction of course) but although they all act slightly different from the game, the MC seems to try hard to act like an in-game NPC would, being blind, deaf and at times weak and without strength. Somewhere near the middle there is a 1 month time jump where the protagonist apparently did nothing to improve his chances of not dying, he simply searched for resources, It is disappointing since he did not improve his weak physique (a zombie with little flesh literally almost killed him in a struggle of forces on the second day of the story), He also didn't explore the area for threats (when I stopped reading the MC he was living in the motel where there were bandits nearby) , he basically behaved like an NPC and not like a person who knows he must maximize his chances of survival and even more so in the MC's situation because he knows the plot.
The world of Telltale's Walking Dead is a rarity. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
dozens of years in the future, chatgpt will sue you for copyright, at least mention his name in the description .................................
5* cuz author is my homie, and I believe he can make great novels. ššŗā¤šŖ................
A very good story so far š[img=recommend] .........................................................
good for now ....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
just because there is no harem and the author is not trying to please everyone make this a 5 star fanfic
Homie found work, but takes up all his time, so he most likely won't update anymore.