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He did this, then he did that,two months later he did this, 3 years later he did that. This is just a summary with absurd time skips. No recommended, it's not worth the wasted time
Good story i read next charapter too and guys you dont lose nothing because story become cultivation novel with chinese mythology[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
I enjoyed reading this very much although there are some Chinese moments (which is inevitable i guess) but overall this is good. Specially the world building, all kinds of DB shows are in here. Just hoping it'll keep updating.
Não é ruim. Embora eu n seja um grande fã das transformações como o 5,6, etc, achei interessante suas colocações nessa fanfic. As viagens no tempo e as contra-partes deixaram a leitura extremamente confusa. A personalidade do MC é a melhor de todas as FF de DB que já li, mesmo tendo tanto poder ele ainda não parou de treinar, além de treinar os outros personagens tbm. O nivel de poder escalou dpara fora dos limites, não tenho certeza de como vai proceder os próximos capítulos mas acho que decorrente as atividades dos últimos o melhor a se fazer é procurar um bom final rapidamente e não arrastar mais.
it has a lot of potential this a good book as you can perfect you translation🔄🔤
i like this a lot but will there be anything with the great ape transformation like super Saiyan 4. Or even something with ikari. I think that would open up a lot more transformations like a mix of super Saiyan god and super Saiyan 4 would be awesome
well mtlnation uploaded it so I will continue uploading the chapters if you don't want to read it here with my bad translation you can go to mtlnation mtl nation . com/novel/i-am-son-goku-suppressing-the-world-of-dragon-ball (quitar los espacios)
Membuka SPOILER He did this, then he did that,two months later he did this, 3 years later he did that. This is just a summary with absurd time skips. No recommended, it's not worth the wasted time
Good story i read next charapter too and guys you dont lose nothing because story become cultivation novel with chinese mythology[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
I enjoyed reading this very much although there are some Chinese moments (which is inevitable i guess) but overall this is good. Specially the world building, all kinds of DB shows are in here. Just hoping it'll keep updating.
Não é ruim. Embora eu n seja um grande fã das transformações como o 5,6, etc, achei interessante suas colocações nessa fanfic. As viagens no tempo e as contra-partes deixaram a leitura extremamente confusa. A personalidade do MC é a melhor de todas as FF de DB que já li, mesmo tendo tanto poder ele ainda não parou de treinar, além de treinar os outros personagens tbm. O nivel de poder escalou dpara fora dos limites, não tenho certeza de como vai proceder os próximos capítulos mas acho que decorrente as atividades dos últimos o melhor a se fazer é procurar um bom final rapidamente e não arrastar mais.
it has a lot of potential this a good book as you can perfect you translation🔄🔤
i like this a lot but will there be anything with the great ape transformation like super Saiyan 4. Or even something with ikari. I think that would open up a lot more transformations like a mix of super Saiyan god and super Saiyan 4 would be awesome
well mtlnation uploaded it so I will continue uploading the chapters if you don't want to read it here with my bad translation you can go to mtlnation mtl nation . com/novel/i-am-son-goku-suppressing-the-world-of-dragon-ball (quitar los espacios)
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