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Absolutely love this novel. I NEED MORE CHAPTERS please author 😢 🙏🏻 Also don't drop this amazing piece of work and break our hearts. Thanks
I'm at chapter 107 and I have to say I'm enjoying the story. Characters are great including the mc, and the pace is fantastic. The games are exciting as well and I find myself feeling similar to how I would feel watching a live match. Which is quite impressive on the authors part as this could make or break the story. Thankfully it was done well. 5/5.
Мне нравится это книга выкладывалбы 2-3 главы в день была вобше супер,(а то выкладывает 1 читаешь как пол расказа то 2 как целую нормальную главу) ну это лично мои придирки а так кто любит читать рассказы в жанре спорт рекомендую!!!
Good read for football fans like me and although i am a system fan it is very good
I hate ntr. Just a reminder to myself to not read this.. only rating five stars for personal reasons that I will not state.
fuck up with the ntr and don't tell me that the author can do whatever he wants with his story because if that's the case I'm telling you not to publish it and on this page people don't like realism, that's why I lower the qualification
The whole story of him becoming the GOAT is wrong for the simple and mere fact that he doesn't have the talent or the qualities for it, he simply has the armor of the plot behind him so that his footballing abilities are randomly raised and the other players' abilities are lowered. With hard work he is not going to become one of the best and in his previous life it was already proven that he does not have an outstanding talent, he could not even play in a lower level team of the 5 major leagues. How do you think that without talent or a system he can become the best? Also, the story contains NTR and on certain occasions the author seems to be undecided whether he prefers Mylo or Jason.
it’s a good story overall with a realistic MC on his way to the top. while the ntr aspect was uncomfortable, i’d like to see how it factors into his growth. the author isn’t afraid to show the harsher realities of life; not every guy becomes the best player in the world while snatching the Jade Beauty without struggle. hopefully the repercussions of mylo and sofias affair are satisfying, it pains me to see them get off scott free while Jasons out here an emotional mess 🙏🏾
Just a fair warning the author has a major NTR fetish. What was once an engaging second-chance, slice-of-life sports novel—focusing on the protagonist's growth both as a footballer and as a person, experiences he never had in his first life—has now devolved into a story driven by cheap drama. The second-chance theme feels redundant, the slice-of-life moments are bleak, and the sport itself has taken a backseat, now serving almost as filler. The girl he starts dating in chapter 39 NTR's him roughly 300 chapters later. We find out the MC is pure rubbish in bed and that the girlfriend even joins the roommate with two prostitutes/random girls... And whats our MC doing during all this? Probably spending his evenings staring at a blank wall for all we know. Even after everything transpires, the roommate and ex-girlfriend face zero repercussions for their actions and are actually rewarded for being terrible people. 1) Does he or she get an STD considering he's been sleeping with multiple girls every night? - No. 2) Does she get outed for cheating on her Boyfriend? No. 3) Does the roommate end the relationship after he had finished cucking the MC? - No. 4) Are there any repercussions for sleeping together behind his back for months? - No In summary, they start dating and live happily ever after, whilst the MC is forced out of the club because the author has to rely on cheap drama to progress the plot whilst overshadowing the actual story.
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Originally I think the novel is good,but it lacks that darkness that is part of our everyday life
Ntr trash the ntr does not even make Snices someone just use his own hand to spoil is novel please put ntr tag let someone know not to waste there time here as i did.
Ntr🖕🖕🖕wtf and there are too way unnecessary descriptions... The autor must be crazy. Who would be so stupid to make his MC ntred???? 😡🤦🤦
Started reading it one day and it has been my favorite since then can't even wait for the weekly updates very good novel and the fact that he is talented and good looking is just a plus for me
The story is not bad and if you love realistic stories you might love this. but im going to be honest i dislike this story a lot, i would never consider it as a romance story, more of drama, realism, sports but besides that if your a romantic guy like me you will hate this, especially the ntr made me feel uncomfortable i already has a bad opinon and pessimism towards real life but now i also has to have a pessmism outlook in fiction. It's not bad author don't get me wrong, but it's not for everyone especially for me who has a sensitive heart when it comes to romance.
great story development almost felt like everything going on in there actually happened
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okay NGL its a good novel but just to let you know in advance the MC got NTRed and the guy who NTRed him became his rival so idk what to say
pls end mylo's career that snake needs to know the only reason he can even score in the league was because mc feeds him goals not because of his own skill.
Membuka SPOILER the novel is good until it reach the romances part like why did the author even had romances and also had heart break to it I don't understand it is better not to had romances and focus on other things. just because there are two females lead and author does not want to write harem author decided to make one of the the female lead cheat on him with his friend this is basically ntr.
if you're looking for another fantastic read check out 'paradox of being ancient sukani's Return'
Deteriorated from ch 247 onwards. Ruined the romance aspect of the novel. Too much match details, one match can take 10 chapters. It reads more like a football journal (play-by-play) analysis.
Los partidos duran demasiados capítulos incluso cuando MC no participa en ellos , 7/8 capítulos par aún partido que MC no está y más de 10 capítulos cua do me juega ... Y todo eso se podría resumir en 1 o 2 capítulos pero el autor quiere alargar los capítulos para aprovechar el contrato con webnovel.
It's my book, soooo... I meannn... obviously 5 stars. But being honest, I believe that it's actually worth such a rating. If you like sports, then hop on for the ride, I guarantee you won't be disappointed, and well, there's a bit of romance as well if you want to see it. Also, this book doesn't have anything supernatural apart from the time regression/displacement at the beginning of the story, so if you fancy something like that, you could hop on the ride too. All in all, I think, it's a book you'll enjoy reading, so read, add it to your library, vote powerstones, leave a review and we'll all be happy. ... If not, I will find you, and force it down your... (Complete that sentence as you will)
Absolutely love this novel. I NEED MORE CHAPTERS please author 😢 🙏🏻 Also don't drop this amazing piece of work and break our hearts. Thanks
I'm at chapter 107 and I have to say I'm enjoying the story. Characters are great including the mc, and the pace is fantastic. The games are exciting as well and I find myself feeling similar to how I would feel watching a live match. Which is quite impressive on the authors part as this could make or break the story. Thankfully it was done well. 5/5.
Мне нравится это книга выкладывалбы 2-3 главы в день была вобше супер,(а то выкладывает 1 читаешь как пол расказа то 2 как целую нормальную главу) ну это лично мои придирки а так кто любит читать рассказы в жанре спорт рекомендую!!!
Good read for football fans like me and although i am a system fan it is very good
I hate ntr. Just a reminder to myself to not read this.. only rating five stars for personal reasons that I will not state.
fuck up with the ntr and don't tell me that the author can do whatever he wants with his story because if that's the case I'm telling you not to publish it and on this page people don't like realism, that's why I lower the qualification
The whole story of him becoming the GOAT is wrong for the simple and mere fact that he doesn't have the talent or the qualities for it, he simply has the armor of the plot behind him so that his footballing abilities are randomly raised and the other players' abilities are lowered. With hard work he is not going to become one of the best and in his previous life it was already proven that he does not have an outstanding talent, he could not even play in a lower level team of the 5 major leagues. How do you think that without talent or a system he can become the best? Also, the story contains NTR and on certain occasions the author seems to be undecided whether he prefers Mylo or Jason.
it’s a good story overall with a realistic MC on his way to the top. while the ntr aspect was uncomfortable, i’d like to see how it factors into his growth. the author isn’t afraid to show the harsher realities of life; not every guy becomes the best player in the world while snatching the Jade Beauty without struggle. hopefully the repercussions of mylo and sofias affair are satisfying, it pains me to see them get off scott free while Jasons out here an emotional mess 🙏🏾
Just a fair warning the author has a major NTR fetish. What was once an engaging second-chance, slice-of-life sports novel—focusing on the protagonist's growth both as a footballer and as a person, experiences he never had in his first life—has now devolved into a story driven by cheap drama. The second-chance theme feels redundant, the slice-of-life moments are bleak, and the sport itself has taken a backseat, now serving almost as filler. The girl he starts dating in chapter 39 NTR's him roughly 300 chapters later. We find out the MC is pure rubbish in bed and that the girlfriend even joins the roommate with two prostitutes/random girls... And whats our MC doing during all this? Probably spending his evenings staring at a blank wall for all we know. Even after everything transpires, the roommate and ex-girlfriend face zero repercussions for their actions and are actually rewarded for being terrible people. 1) Does he or she get an STD considering he's been sleeping with multiple girls every night? - No. 2) Does she get outed for cheating on her Boyfriend? No. 3) Does the roommate end the relationship after he had finished cucking the MC? - No. 4) Are there any repercussions for sleeping together behind his back for months? - No In summary, they start dating and live happily ever after, whilst the MC is forced out of the club because the author has to rely on cheap drama to progress the plot whilst overshadowing the actual story.
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Originally I think the novel is good,but it lacks that darkness that is part of our everyday life
Ntr trash the ntr does not even make Snices someone just use his own hand to spoil is novel please put ntr tag let someone know not to waste there time here as i did.
Ntr🖕🖕🖕wtf and there are too way unnecessary descriptions... The autor must be crazy. Who would be so stupid to make his MC ntred???? 😡🤦🤦
Started reading it one day and it has been my favorite since then can't even wait for the weekly updates very good novel and the fact that he is talented and good looking is just a plus for me
The story is not bad and if you love realistic stories you might love this. but im going to be honest i dislike this story a lot, i would never consider it as a romance story, more of drama, realism, sports but besides that if your a romantic guy like me you will hate this, especially the ntr made me feel uncomfortable i already has a bad opinon and pessimism towards real life but now i also has to have a pessmism outlook in fiction. It's not bad author don't get me wrong, but it's not for everyone especially for me who has a sensitive heart when it comes to romance.
great story development almost felt like everything going on in there actually happened
Ntr 🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
okay NGL its a good novel but just to let you know in advance the MC got NTRed and the guy who NTRed him became his rival so idk what to say
pls end mylo's career that snake needs to know the only reason he can even score in the league was because mc feeds him goals not because of his own skill.
Membuka SPOILER the novel is good until it reach the romances part like why did the author even had romances and also had heart break to it I don't understand it is better not to had romances and focus on other things. just because there are two females lead and author does not want to write harem author decided to make one of the the female lead cheat on him with his friend this is basically ntr.
if you're looking for another fantastic read check out 'paradox of being ancient sukani's Return'
Deteriorated from ch 247 onwards. Ruined the romance aspect of the novel. Too much match details, one match can take 10 chapters. It reads more like a football journal (play-by-play) analysis.
Los partidos duran demasiados capítulos incluso cuando MC no participa en ellos , 7/8 capítulos par aún partido que MC no está y más de 10 capítulos cua do me juega ... Y todo eso se podría resumir en 1 o 2 capítulos pero el autor quiere alargar los capítulos para aprovechar el contrato con webnovel.
It's my book, soooo... I meannn... obviously 5 stars. But being honest, I believe that it's actually worth such a rating. If you like sports, then hop on for the ride, I guarantee you won't be disappointed, and well, there's a bit of romance as well if you want to see it. Also, this book doesn't have anything supernatural apart from the time regression/displacement at the beginning of the story, so if you fancy something like that, you could hop on the ride too. All in all, I think, it's a book you'll enjoy reading, so read, add it to your library, vote powerstones, leave a review and we'll all be happy. ... If not, I will find you, and force it down your... (Complete that sentence as you will)