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Absolutely love this novel. I NEED MORE CHAPTERS please author 😢 🙏🏻 Also don't drop this amazing piece of work and break our hearts. Thanks
I'm at chapter 107 and I have to say I'm enjoying the story. Characters are great including the mc, and the pace is fantastic. The games are exciting as well and I find myself feeling similar to how I would feel watching a live match. Which is quite impressive on the authors part as this could make or break the story. Thankfully it was done well. 5/5.
it’s a good story overall with a realistic MC on his way to the top. while the ntr aspect was uncomfortable, i’d like to see how it factors into his growth. the author isn’t afraid to show the harsher realities of life; not every guy becomes the best player in the world while snatching the Jade Beauty without struggle. hopefully the repercussions of mylo and sofias affair are satisfying, it pains me to see them get off scott free while Jasons out here an emotional mess 🙏🏾
Just a fair warning the author has a major NTR fetish. What was once an engaging second-chance, slice-of-life sports novel—focusing on the protagonist's growth both as a footballer and as a person, experiences he never had in his first life—has now devolved into a story driven by cheap drama. The second-chance theme feels redundant, the slice-of-life moments are bleak, and the sport itself has taken a backseat, now serving almost as filler. The girl he starts dating in chapter 39 NTR's him roughly 300 chapters later. We find out the MC is pure rubbish in bed and that the girlfriend even joins the roommate with two prostitutes/random girls... And whats our MC doing during all this? Probably spending his evenings staring at a blank wall for all we know. Even after everything transpires, the roommate and ex-girlfriend face zero repercussions for their actions and are actually rewarded for being terrible people. 1) Does he or she get an STD considering he's been sleeping with multiple girls every night? - No. 2) Does she get outed for cheating on her Boyfriend? No. 3) Does the roommate end the relationship after he had finished cucking the MC? - No. 4) Are there any repercussions for sleeping together behind his back for months? - No In summary, they start dating and live happily ever after, whilst the MC is forced out of the club because the author has to rely on cheap drama to progress the plot whilst overshadowing the actual story.
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Originally I think the novel is good,but it lacks that darkness that is part of our everyday life
Ntr trash the ntr does not even make Snices someone just use his own hand to spoil is novel please put ntr tag let someone know not to waste there time here as i did.
Ntr🖕🖕🖕wtf and there are too way unnecessary descriptions... The autor must be crazy. Who would be so stupid to make his MC ntred???? 😡🤦🤦
Started reading it one day and it has been my favorite since then can't even wait for the weekly updates very good novel and the fact that he is talented and good looking is just a plus for me
The story is not bad and if you love realistic stories you might love this. but im going to be honest i dislike this story a lot, i would never consider it as a romance story, more of drama, realism, sports but besides that if your a romantic guy like me you will hate this, especially the ntr made me feel uncomfortable i already has a bad opinon and pessimism towards real life but now i also has to have a pessmism outlook in fiction. It's not bad author don't get me wrong, but it's not for everyone especially for me who has a sensitive heart when it comes to romance.
great story development almost felt like everything going on in there actually happened
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okay NGL its a good novel but just to let you know in advance the MC got NTRed and the guy who NTRed him became his rival so idk what to say
pls end mylo's career that snake needs to know the only reason he can even score in the league was because mc feeds him goals not because of his own skill.
Membuka SPOILER the novel is good until it reach the romances part like why did the author even had romances and also had heart break to it I don't understand it is better not to had romances and focus on other things. just because there are two females lead and author does not want to write harem author decided to make one of the the female lead cheat on him with his friend this is basically ntr.
if you're looking for another fantastic read check out 'paradox of being ancient sukani's Return'
Deteriorated from ch 247 onwards. Ruined the romance aspect of the novel. Too much match details, one match can take 10 chapters. It reads more like a football journal (play-by-play) analysis.
Los partidos duran demasiados capítulos incluso cuando MC no participa en ellos , 7/8 capítulos par aún partido que MC no está y más de 10 capítulos cua do me juega ... Y todo eso se podría resumir en 1 o 2 capítulos pero el autor quiere alargar los capítulos para aprovechar el contrato con webnovel.
It’s a nice book but come on man a simple match can take at least 10 chapters why the annoying part is even the matches he doesn’t participate in take about 7 chapters You are just wording your shit so you can get more chapters for your novel As at 300 chapters nothing significant has happened in the story mind you it’s not that it’s a slow story it’s just that it’s at a normal pace but author just can’t summarize a simple scenario but tend to increase his wordings so that he can gain more chapters A single match can take 15 chapters alone why what at all are you trying to right here Read greatest of all time ans see how the author summarizes most of his writings
Everything is good, the writing, background story, and grammar everything is great. You got me hooked up on chapter 1-10, however when I was thinking about it. How nice for a story to have a sister and a mother supporting you. So yeah I felt like the MC is lonely and it makes me sad because I know the MC is strong but I like the kind of little-drama on the family story😅. I like a positive atmosphere stories because you know I am reading novel right now to ease my loneliness and sadness. So I hope you won't take this review as an offense✌️, so yea keep it up author but I think I will pass for now. I came here for the limited free reading but it sucks to know that the story got a tragedy plot. I really like the story though and the MC's attitude but Shi Why do you want to kill the mother and even the sister? If you could just make the sister alive I could've read this damn.😟
I don't know why but sometimes it's hard to read the couple the MC is with, it's not worth it at the beginning everything is fine, after his visit everything falls apart I don't know why I feel that her partner slept with Maylo sometimes he feels more like the protagonist, Adele has more chemistry with MC they are a nice couple.
love it!!! more chapters please author! on another note though, I am hoping to see a possible coaching/management dynamic shift for the better in another team with our MC... atm it's only a small complaint. Still, it seems like he's constantly getting the short end of the stick, I only hope that doesn't become a long-term troupe.
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You have to pay to see all the chapters that’s just the worst and It is a really good story so far sad I’m going to have to drop it from the 41 chapters onwards you have to gift something if you want to see the full chapter.That just sucks that’s why it’s such a low rating for me if you have the money would recommend but as a brook dude I can’t buy it.
It's my book, soooo... I meannn... obviously 5 stars. But being honest, I believe that it's actually worth such a rating. If you like sports, then hop on for the ride, I guarantee you won't be disappointed, and well, there's a bit of romance as well if you want to see it. Also, this book doesn't have anything supernatural apart from the time regression/displacement at the beginning of the story, so if you fancy something like that, you could hop on the ride too. All in all, I think, it's a book you'll enjoy reading, so read, add it to your library, vote powerstones, leave a review and we'll all be happy. ... If not, I will find you, and force it down your... (Complete that sentence as you will)
Absolutely love this novel. I NEED MORE CHAPTERS please author 😢 🙏🏻 Also don't drop this amazing piece of work and break our hearts. Thanks
I'm at chapter 107 and I have to say I'm enjoying the story. Characters are great including the mc, and the pace is fantastic. The games are exciting as well and I find myself feeling similar to how I would feel watching a live match. Which is quite impressive on the authors part as this could make or break the story. Thankfully it was done well. 5/5.
it’s a good story overall with a realistic MC on his way to the top. while the ntr aspect was uncomfortable, i’d like to see how it factors into his growth. the author isn’t afraid to show the harsher realities of life; not every guy becomes the best player in the world while snatching the Jade Beauty without struggle. hopefully the repercussions of mylo and sofias affair are satisfying, it pains me to see them get off scott free while Jasons out here an emotional mess 🙏🏾
Just a fair warning the author has a major NTR fetish. What was once an engaging second-chance, slice-of-life sports novel—focusing on the protagonist's growth both as a footballer and as a person, experiences he never had in his first life—has now devolved into a story driven by cheap drama. The second-chance theme feels redundant, the slice-of-life moments are bleak, and the sport itself has taken a backseat, now serving almost as filler. The girl he starts dating in chapter 39 NTR's him roughly 300 chapters later. We find out the MC is pure rubbish in bed and that the girlfriend even joins the roommate with two prostitutes/random girls... And whats our MC doing during all this? Probably spending his evenings staring at a blank wall for all we know. Even after everything transpires, the roommate and ex-girlfriend face zero repercussions for their actions and are actually rewarded for being terrible people. 1) Does he or she get an STD considering he's been sleeping with multiple girls every night? - No. 2) Does she get outed for cheating on her Boyfriend? No. 3) Does the roommate end the relationship after he had finished cucking the MC? - No. 4) Are there any repercussions for sleeping together behind his back for months? - No In summary, they start dating and live happily ever after, whilst the MC is forced out of the club because the author has to rely on cheap drama to progress the plot whilst overshadowing the actual story.
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Originally I think the novel is good,but it lacks that darkness that is part of our everyday life
Ntr trash the ntr does not even make Snices someone just use his own hand to spoil is novel please put ntr tag let someone know not to waste there time here as i did.
Ntr🖕🖕🖕wtf and there are too way unnecessary descriptions... The autor must be crazy. Who would be so stupid to make his MC ntred???? 😡🤦🤦
Started reading it one day and it has been my favorite since then can't even wait for the weekly updates very good novel and the fact that he is talented and good looking is just a plus for me
The story is not bad and if you love realistic stories you might love this. but im going to be honest i dislike this story a lot, i would never consider it as a romance story, more of drama, realism, sports but besides that if your a romantic guy like me you will hate this, especially the ntr made me feel uncomfortable i already has a bad opinon and pessimism towards real life but now i also has to have a pessmism outlook in fiction. It's not bad author don't get me wrong, but it's not for everyone especially for me who has a sensitive heart when it comes to romance.
great story development almost felt like everything going on in there actually happened
Ntr 🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
okay NGL its a good novel but just to let you know in advance the MC got NTRed and the guy who NTRed him became his rival so idk what to say
pls end mylo's career that snake needs to know the only reason he can even score in the league was because mc feeds him goals not because of his own skill.
Membuka SPOILER the novel is good until it reach the romances part like why did the author even had romances and also had heart break to it I don't understand it is better not to had romances and focus on other things. just because there are two females lead and author does not want to write harem author decided to make one of the the female lead cheat on him with his friend this is basically ntr.
if you're looking for another fantastic read check out 'paradox of being ancient sukani's Return'
Deteriorated from ch 247 onwards. Ruined the romance aspect of the novel. Too much match details, one match can take 10 chapters. It reads more like a football journal (play-by-play) analysis.
Los partidos duran demasiados capítulos incluso cuando MC no participa en ellos , 7/8 capítulos par aún partido que MC no está y más de 10 capítulos cua do me juega ... Y todo eso se podría resumir en 1 o 2 capítulos pero el autor quiere alargar los capítulos para aprovechar el contrato con webnovel.
It’s a nice book but come on man a simple match can take at least 10 chapters why the annoying part is even the matches he doesn’t participate in take about 7 chapters You are just wording your shit so you can get more chapters for your novel As at 300 chapters nothing significant has happened in the story mind you it’s not that it’s a slow story it’s just that it’s at a normal pace but author just can’t summarize a simple scenario but tend to increase his wordings so that he can gain more chapters A single match can take 15 chapters alone why what at all are you trying to right here Read greatest of all time ans see how the author summarizes most of his writings
Everything is good, the writing, background story, and grammar everything is great. You got me hooked up on chapter 1-10, however when I was thinking about it. How nice for a story to have a sister and a mother supporting you. So yeah I felt like the MC is lonely and it makes me sad because I know the MC is strong but I like the kind of little-drama on the family story😅. I like a positive atmosphere stories because you know I am reading novel right now to ease my loneliness and sadness. So I hope you won't take this review as an offense✌️, so yea keep it up author but I think I will pass for now. I came here for the limited free reading but it sucks to know that the story got a tragedy plot. I really like the story though and the MC's attitude but Shi Why do you want to kill the mother and even the sister? If you could just make the sister alive I could've read this damn.😟
I don't know why but sometimes it's hard to read the couple the MC is with, it's not worth it at the beginning everything is fine, after his visit everything falls apart I don't know why I feel that her partner slept with Maylo sometimes he feels more like the protagonist, Adele has more chemistry with MC they are a nice couple.
love it!!! more chapters please author! on another note though, I am hoping to see a possible coaching/management dynamic shift for the better in another team with our MC... atm it's only a small complaint. Still, it seems like he's constantly getting the short end of the stick, I only hope that doesn't become a long-term troupe.
Membuka SPOILER You have to pay to see all the chapters that’s just the worst and It is a really good story so far sad I’m going to have to drop it from the 41 chapters onwards you have to gift something if you want to see the full chapter.That just sucks that’s why it’s such a low rating for me if you have the money would recommend but as a brook dude I can’t buy it.
It's my book, soooo... I meannn... obviously 5 stars. But being honest, I believe that it's actually worth such a rating. If you like sports, then hop on for the ride, I guarantee you won't be disappointed, and well, there's a bit of romance as well if you want to see it. Also, this book doesn't have anything supernatural apart from the time regression/displacement at the beginning of the story, so if you fancy something like that, you could hop on the ride too. All in all, I think, it's a book you'll enjoy reading, so read, add it to your library, vote powerstones, leave a review and we'll all be happy. ... If not, I will find you, and force it down your... (Complete that sentence as you will)