1Ulasan-ulasan
- Kualitas penulisan
- Stabilitas Pembaruan
- Pengembangan Cerita
- Desain Karakter
- Latar Belakang Dunia
Bagikan pikiran Anda dengan orang lain
Tulis ulasan
I really enjoying the story so far. The detailed description in each scenes add more plus point for me. You got an action scenes in early chapter, and the quality for the rest of the chapter is really good. I read a lot of romance manwha so Im quiet familiar with the plot. I just wish please author make some twist, like unexpected twist in the story. I also want to noted that it seem the update is not on daily basis?If you keep the writing quality or even improve to more better, I think many reader who enjoy this type of novel would like it. I quite liking Maya so far. She's still in early stage of development, and there are many things could be added for her growth as a character. The ML, I don't have much to say since his scenes are still not that much to show his character. For the childhood friend, I feel sorry for you bro. You just on friendzone/familial listš¤£I think that's it my review. I hope you keep on writing and don't give up!Your story have potential to growth. Just trust your ability dear author!
I really enjoying the story so far. The detailed description in each scenes add more plus point for me. You got an action scenes in early chapter, and the quality for the rest of the chapter is really good. I read a lot of romance manwha so Im quiet familiar with the plot. I just wish please author make some twist, like unexpected twist in the story. I also want to noted that it seem the update is not on daily basis?If you keep the writing quality or even improve to more better, I think many reader who enjoy this type of novel would like it. I quite liking Maya so far. She's still in early stage of development, and there are many things could be added for her growth as a character. The ML, I don't have much to say since his scenes are still not that much to show his character. For the childhood friend, I feel sorry for you bro. You just on friendzone/familial listš¤£I think that's it my review. I hope you keep on writing and don't give up!Your story have potential to growth. Just trust your ability dear author!