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Not gonna lie. In my first attempt at this story I got into a pretty bad depression and I just wanted to finish my obligation regarding of what I promised before I could distance myself from everything. It took me years to crawl back from that dark hole, but hopefully I managed to do so, and I wanted to do this story justice so I took my old scripts and removed 80% of it and rewrote it to better fit my original vision: A revenge story about an antihero, and proper villain, the usual 'evil' of all traditional fantasy tales. A Demon Hero who was schemed against, and killed by his kin. Yet at the very end, when his soul was about to extinguish, his unique trait managed to save him at the cost of EVERYTHING he had at the time. Cast out into a new, unknown unforgiving, primordial world, Aziel will use EVERYTHING he has to get back at those who wronged him!... and eventually find the true reason, the real plot behind everything! By the time most of you read this, the story will probably have progressed much further than what it is now (I have 2 chapters published at the time of writing this!), let these words convey my ideas, thoughts of what I had for the premise!
Not gonna lie. In my first attempt at this story I got into a pretty bad depression and I just wanted to finish my obligation regarding of what I promised before I could distance myself from everything. It took me years to crawl back from that dark hole, but hopefully I managed to do so, and I wanted to do this story justice so I took my old scripts and removed 80% of it and rewrote it to better fit my original vision: A revenge story about an antihero, and proper villain, the usual 'evil' of all traditional fantasy tales. A Demon Hero who was schemed against, and killed by his kin. Yet at the very end, when his soul was about to extinguish, his unique trait managed to save him at the cost of EVERYTHING he had at the time. Cast out into a new, unknown unforgiving, primordial world, Aziel will use EVERYTHING he has to get back at those who wronged him!... and eventually find the true reason, the real plot behind everything! By the time most of you read this, the story will probably have progressed much further than what it is now (I have 2 chapters published at the time of writing this!), let these words convey my ideas, thoughts of what I had for the premise!