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liked the story. definitely very funny but solid take on uchiha. laughed a lot reading it but also glad that story is not purely crack fic and progresses well. very rare to see shisui take the stance he took. worth reading
as a person who doesn't typically read harem type novels. this once a exception, cause this novel makes me laugh so much that it overshadows the harm part of novel. one of the most funniest novels out there. pls give recommendations for similar novels or other funny novels
So now I will be giving a proper review on the story writing quality : There are a few mistakes in the between lines that happen during translation, like changing he/she and a few more. But the grammar is manageable and above average a d completely readable. story development: I have seen in many Naruto fanfics, the authors just outright forget saving shisui and bringing itachi to the right path. this novel does not do that, The story is developed from time after end of Third great shinobi war. The story develops in an optimal and although not the most logical but in a direction that satisfies the details. character development: The protagonist is funny and fairly strong from the start. The antagonists may be a bit dumb. But overall, every character introduced was good and was given good appearance time. Updating stability: Just one word awesome world background: Well, It's NARUTO
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Me encanta esta historia, debo decir que me parece muy gracioso muchas situaciones que provoca el mc que me rei a carcajadas ademas de que vez de otra manera a los personajes odiados como a danzo como un desahogo comico
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I swear this wasn’t a harem before ugh I don’t like harems😭 still a great story but I can’t read this anymore
Absolutely amazing. I haven't laughed this much in a long time. I was wheezing and rolling in bed so much that I even surprised myself. Everything is nice especially the interactions and manipulations.
it was good novel.. just skip the romance moment.. i read too many novel rn romance is very exhausting to read
This story is super good only thing is grammar sometimes tweaks out like using her instead of him but the plot is great and dives in into the Naruto politics making it even better wish his cheat got explained better but that’s fine but overall so good
I have read 96 chapters as of this review. The story is very good, however it is pretty slow too. While other books would have killed the Hokage in 20 chapters, this one may take hundreds of chapters to do it. If you like reading about political struggles, this is the book for you. The MC is strong and grows throughout the book. The only caveat I have is that the book has no timeframe indicators. After reading so many chapters, I know a lot of time has passed, but I don’t know how much time has passed. All in all, it’s a good and exciting book with many funny lines and serious topics, and the MC likes to make jokes and shame other characters. It’s almost 5 stars in my book.
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I love the MC and the dialogues. The story is pretty hilarious and entertaining.
I rarely give out five stars but the translator has done a fine job translating this novel , its not great but it’s too bad which makes me wanna drop it 6.75/10. Except some masculine and feminine pronouns used incorrectly the rest of story is amazing . I would recommend it . The MC HAHHAHAHAHSAHHA is breath of fresh air , he’s so unserious and funny that I have so much fun reading the story and him trolling everyone.
It's a great Naruto fanfiction!! 👍😍 It have a good story/plot and good english/translate.. The grammar is good too.. I like MC/Funan personality.. He smart, brave, careful, and funny 😂🤣.. But I think he's too proudful, he make enemy whenever he go and talk (but that makes this story funny).. I understand we must show our power too make people doesn't want to fight us, but doesn't meant we're the one to instigate the problem, that's stupid for me.. I don't mind harem.. And it's so funny to see his interactions with many women like Shirayu, Pakura, and Kurenai.. I like how he change Itachi and Shisui (either their vision to Konoha or their fate).. By the way, where Uzumaki mother and daughter?? Can't wait to see how will you destroy/kill 3rd Hokage and especially Danzo 😁 Love your story author san.. Keep up the good work 😁👍😍😍
It's a very fun story to read, its just the monologues are plenty and tedious to read so I advise the readers to just skim those and focus on reading the dialogues, the mc of the story is very likeable also
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Everything is pretty good. The story is interesting enough It's just that Hiruzen is not Hiruzen and Funan is s bit cunning but also distasteful. Itachi the lunatic is somehow sane and Shisui is not as smart as he should be.
Es una gran historia con una excelente gramática y traducción, su ritmo de desarrollo es fluido y lo que destaca más es su sentido del humor muy refrescante 🤣👌🏻 lo recomiendo
it's really funny it's really funny it's really funny it's really funny it's really funny it's really funny it's really funny why do i need a word quota to post
Can we get a mass release . I thank the author for this great read ..it is the only novel I m reading currently and I wait all day for the release
love it fan fic . Keep showing the darkside of the village getting butt kicked.
Absolutely amazing. I haven't laughed this much in a long time. I was wheezing and rolling in bed so much that I even surprised myself. Everything is nice especially the interactions and manipulations. Totally unique and deserve a try.
This is the one the best uchiha fanfic I have ever read ... the mc is the biggest genius manipulator ... its really satisfying seeing his plans unfold ... if you like strong and cunning uchiha ... this is the right place ... and the update consistency is also good ... great work ...
♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️
So the story is very good but I have a warning for you all, Mc has the ms and one the eyes power let him influence people slowly, it’s like a low level hypnose so there is some mind control and rape?? Or sexual abuse ?? So most people here are dumber that’s basically his ms power. In a way the title of this ff is true he makes people dance like puppets and rarely do they suspect anything
liked the story. definitely very funny but solid take on uchiha. laughed a lot reading it but also glad that story is not purely crack fic and progresses well. very rare to see shisui take the stance he took. worth reading
as a person who doesn't typically read harem type novels. this once a exception, cause this novel makes me laugh so much that it overshadows the harm part of novel. one of the most funniest novels out there. pls give recommendations for similar novels or other funny novels
So now I will be giving a proper review on the story writing quality : There are a few mistakes in the between lines that happen during translation, like changing he/she and a few more. But the grammar is manageable and above average a d completely readable. story development: I have seen in many Naruto fanfics, the authors just outright forget saving shisui and bringing itachi to the right path. this novel does not do that, The story is developed from time after end of Third great shinobi war. The story develops in an optimal and although not the most logical but in a direction that satisfies the details. character development: The protagonist is funny and fairly strong from the start. The antagonists may be a bit dumb. But overall, every character introduced was good and was given good appearance time. Updating stability: Just one word awesome world background: Well, It's NARUTO
Jalan cerita nya bagus sampai sejauh ini tapi update cerita yang tidak konsisten membuat cerita ini kurang di tambah pengembangan cerita yang lambat
Me encanta esta historia, debo decir que me parece muy gracioso muchas situaciones que provoca el mc que me rei a carcajadas ademas de que vez de otra manera a los personajes odiados como a danzo como un desahogo comico
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I swear this wasn’t a harem before ugh I don’t like harems😭 still a great story but I can’t read this anymore
Absolutely amazing. I haven't laughed this much in a long time. I was wheezing and rolling in bed so much that I even surprised myself. Everything is nice especially the interactions and manipulations.
it was good novel.. just skip the romance moment.. i read too many novel rn romance is very exhausting to read
This story is super good only thing is grammar sometimes tweaks out like using her instead of him but the plot is great and dives in into the Naruto politics making it even better wish his cheat got explained better but that’s fine but overall so good
I have read 96 chapters as of this review. The story is very good, however it is pretty slow too. While other books would have killed the Hokage in 20 chapters, this one may take hundreds of chapters to do it. If you like reading about political struggles, this is the book for you. The MC is strong and grows throughout the book. The only caveat I have is that the book has no timeframe indicators. After reading so many chapters, I know a lot of time has passed, but I don’t know how much time has passed. All in all, it’s a good and exciting book with many funny lines and serious topics, and the MC likes to make jokes and shame other characters. It’s almost 5 stars in my book.
Membuka SPOILER I love the MC and the dialogues. The story is pretty hilarious and entertaining.
I rarely give out five stars but the translator has done a fine job translating this novel , its not great but it’s too bad which makes me wanna drop it 6.75/10. Except some masculine and feminine pronouns used incorrectly the rest of story is amazing . I would recommend it . The MC HAHHAHAHAHSAHHA is breath of fresh air , he’s so unserious and funny that I have so much fun reading the story and him trolling everyone.
It's a great Naruto fanfiction!! 👍😍 It have a good story/plot and good english/translate.. The grammar is good too.. I like MC/Funan personality.. He smart, brave, careful, and funny 😂🤣.. But I think he's too proudful, he make enemy whenever he go and talk (but that makes this story funny).. I understand we must show our power too make people doesn't want to fight us, but doesn't meant we're the one to instigate the problem, that's stupid for me.. I don't mind harem.. And it's so funny to see his interactions with many women like Shirayu, Pakura, and Kurenai.. I like how he change Itachi and Shisui (either their vision to Konoha or their fate).. By the way, where Uzumaki mother and daughter?? Can't wait to see how will you destroy/kill 3rd Hokage and especially Danzo 😁 Love your story author san.. Keep up the good work 😁👍😍😍
It's a very fun story to read, its just the monologues are plenty and tedious to read so I advise the readers to just skim those and focus on reading the dialogues, the mc of the story is very likeable also
Membuka SPOILER Everything is pretty good. The story is interesting enough It's just that Hiruzen is not Hiruzen and Funan is s bit cunning but also distasteful. Itachi the lunatic is somehow sane and Shisui is not as smart as he should be.
Es una gran historia con una excelente gramática y traducción, su ritmo de desarrollo es fluido y lo que destaca más es su sentido del humor muy refrescante 🤣👌🏻 lo recomiendo
it's really funny it's really funny it's really funny it's really funny it's really funny it's really funny it's really funny why do i need a word quota to post
Can we get a mass release . I thank the author for this great read ..it is the only novel I m reading currently and I wait all day for the release
love it fan fic . Keep showing the darkside of the village getting butt kicked.
Absolutely amazing. I haven't laughed this much in a long time. I was wheezing and rolling in bed so much that I even surprised myself. Everything is nice especially the interactions and manipulations. Totally unique and deserve a try.
This is the one the best uchiha fanfic I have ever read ... the mc is the biggest genius manipulator ... its really satisfying seeing his plans unfold ... if you like strong and cunning uchiha ... this is the right place ... and the update consistency is also good ... great work ...
♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️
So the story is very good but I have a warning for you all, Mc has the ms and one the eyes power let him influence people slowly, it’s like a low level hypnose so there is some mind control and rape?? Or sexual abuse ?? So most people here are dumber that’s basically his ms power. In a way the title of this ff is true he makes people dance like puppets and rarely do they suspect anything