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It's just average. The story concept isn't original, I read a lot of similar stories with this setup. MC is a go with the flow guy, he's alright. The cheat and background and all that aren't explained, the author acts as if he explained it, but nothing is properly explained. Is it a bowl? a system? what abilities? how does MC know how to create gu? World building is non-existent. Characters are superficial. You won't see any depth in this story. Pacing is horrendous, it's so slow, the author pads words and fills a waste of space paragraphs. Repeated descriptions are a lot. Just felt like I read a lot but I gained nothing. If author focused on producing quality work instead of padding words and filling word count, I might have been interested in continuing to read even if it's a shallow story.
Nothing to say stories is good but hope that it can be made in free reading a little bit more
female characters can be made more diverse or unique.. . everyone fits the same templet.. but cant be blamed too much as they are all under a spell.. if u think them as slaves for the spell then makes sense... or else too much negligence on the part of author while writing them.. the powers and fantasy elements are good.. and overall a good causual binge read
came here to vent to author ,,,the immortal sect took the ownership of the city but mc doesnt' need to pay for rent cause he can be a miner cause he got a clone ...so him paying rent is such a waste really....!!!!
A good story is one where one enjoys reading it, it does not matter if it is cliche or does not make much sense, after all having fun and finding joy in reading it is all that matters
I was hesitant about reading this book at first but I found that it is really good. what I like the most about this book is that it's characters are not without their own flaws and I find that to be a good thing.
I’m enjoying the novel so far. It’s entertaining enough to keep my interest. Currently only has 112 chapters with 30ish of those privilege chapters. Was disappointed that it has missed updates the last few days. I feel like more books are starting to miss their scheduled updates at the end of the month then mass release the withheld chapters when it resets. It’s why I no long fall for the paying for privilege.
At-the-standard for world building, nothing exceptional. Has Gu, much like reverend insanity, but they are not at the center of the martial arts in this, as from the first 20 or so chapters, no one but the MC seems to have any. Importantly, whatever the update schedule for this, you may be best served if you only read 1 chapter per day, or space them out as needed so you forget what's going on in the story, because if you don't forget, the chapters will remind you of everything each chapter. It is excessively repetitive, and frequently will pull things like "he beat cultivators above his cultivation. he was able to contend with those stonger than himself. this meant he could beat people he normally could not." If that^ reads poorly to you, I really can't say the style of this story will treat you much better. TL;DR Entertaining, headache inducing repetitiveness (personal experience)
Not really sure what all the hype is about, to be perfectly honest. MC makes dumb choices, becomes OP immediately, and somehow fumbles his way through everything with his absurdly unbalanced cheat. Really just feels like a chinsy dime-a-dozen story that is trying to mooch off of Reverend Insanity’s popularity.
have read 527 chapters. its a good novel,ofcourse girls are the issue,like in every few chapters "taoist sound starts to play" .At the start i couldnt read this,like he chases every girl ,if there is mention of any girls then mc will marry them.but as you read you will get used to it and mc improves a bit. now for the good part :world background is solid.MC is op asf. random person pov is good .if you liken world development or clan development novel ,do read it. mc has 26 wife and hes not stopping ,lets see what will be his score
Overall, its ok. There is nothing special about the characters or world but I don't see any major flaws either. Story so far is the overpowered cautious MC with a generic harem. If your looking for a book to pass the time, you could do worse.
really liking it so far although this is a rather "casual" novel with somewhat fast pacing i actually dont really mind it also not really many romance moments which is a bit of a shame
Spring Autumn ? Cicada ? the author is playing with fire I see. LET ME BE THE WITNESS !!!!!!
I am currently at chapter 851, the story so far has decent world build character growth (MC) and some kingdom building elements. The story is pretty basic, however it is still entertaining and and enjoyable read. If you like the concept of gu and evolution of abilities, you should give it a read. There is only one major translation issue, that come with the demon clans. There are two different clans but they are called the same thing so it’s impossible to know which is being referenced. Once I a while there is some misgendering but that doesn’t really happen that often. I would say give this a try, it might be your cup of tea.
It's just average. The story concept isn't original, I read a lot of similar stories with this setup. MC is a go with the flow guy, he's alright. The cheat and background and all that aren't explained, the author acts as if he explained it, but nothing is properly explained. Is it a bowl? a system? what abilities? how does MC know how to create gu? World building is non-existent. Characters are superficial. You won't see any depth in this story. Pacing is horrendous, it's so slow, the author pads words and fills a waste of space paragraphs. Repeated descriptions are a lot. Just felt like I read a lot but I gained nothing. If author focused on producing quality work instead of padding words and filling word count, I might have been interested in continuing to read even if it's a shallow story.
Nothing to say stories is good but hope that it can be made in free reading a little bit more
female characters can be made more diverse or unique.. . everyone fits the same templet.. but cant be blamed too much as they are all under a spell.. if u think them as slaves for the spell then makes sense... or else too much negligence on the part of author while writing them.. the powers and fantasy elements are good.. and overall a good causual binge read
came here to vent to author ,,,the immortal sect took the ownership of the city but mc doesnt' need to pay for rent cause he can be a miner cause he got a clone ...so him paying rent is such a waste really....!!!!
A good story is one where one enjoys reading it, it does not matter if it is cliche or does not make much sense, after all having fun and finding joy in reading it is all that matters
I was hesitant about reading this book at first but I found that it is really good. what I like the most about this book is that it's characters are not without their own flaws and I find that to be a good thing.
I’m enjoying the novel so far. It’s entertaining enough to keep my interest. Currently only has 112 chapters with 30ish of those privilege chapters. Was disappointed that it has missed updates the last few days. I feel like more books are starting to miss their scheduled updates at the end of the month then mass release the withheld chapters when it resets. It’s why I no long fall for the paying for privilege.
At-the-standard for world building, nothing exceptional. Has Gu, much like reverend insanity, but they are not at the center of the martial arts in this, as from the first 20 or so chapters, no one but the MC seems to have any. Importantly, whatever the update schedule for this, you may be best served if you only read 1 chapter per day, or space them out as needed so you forget what's going on in the story, because if you don't forget, the chapters will remind you of everything each chapter. It is excessively repetitive, and frequently will pull things like "he beat cultivators above his cultivation. he was able to contend with those stonger than himself. this meant he could beat people he normally could not." If that^ reads poorly to you, I really can't say the style of this story will treat you much better. TL;DR Entertaining, headache inducing repetitiveness (personal experience)
Not really sure what all the hype is about, to be perfectly honest. MC makes dumb choices, becomes OP immediately, and somehow fumbles his way through everything with his absurdly unbalanced cheat. Really just feels like a chinsy dime-a-dozen story that is trying to mooch off of Reverend Insanity’s popularity.
have read 527 chapters. its a good novel,ofcourse girls are the issue,like in every few chapters "taoist sound starts to play" .At the start i couldnt read this,like he chases every girl ,if there is mention of any girls then mc will marry them.but as you read you will get used to it and mc improves a bit. now for the good part :world background is solid.MC is op asf. random person pov is good .if you liken world development or clan development novel ,do read it. mc has 26 wife and hes not stopping ,lets see what will be his score
Overall, its ok. There is nothing special about the characters or world but I don't see any major flaws either. Story so far is the overpowered cautious MC with a generic harem. If your looking for a book to pass the time, you could do worse.
really liking it so far although this is a rather "casual" novel with somewhat fast pacing i actually dont really mind it also not really many romance moments which is a bit of a shame
Spring Autumn ? Cicada ? the author is playing with fire I see. LET ME BE THE WITNESS !!!!!!
I am currently at chapter 851, the story so far has decent world build character growth (MC) and some kingdom building elements. The story is pretty basic, however it is still entertaining and and enjoyable read. If you like the concept of gu and evolution of abilities, you should give it a read. There is only one major translation issue, that come with the demon clans. There are two different clans but they are called the same thing so it’s impossible to know which is being referenced. Once I a while there is some misgendering but that doesn’t really happen that often. I would say give this a try, it might be your cup of tea.