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1. The MC won't be OP at the start. He will work hard and train to achieve his prowess. ( Though he will be quite talented, Not itachi talented though ).

2. No harem or romance.

3. Lots of bloodshed, Killing and maybe torture or gore.

4. The story will be slow paced. 10 to 15 chapters will be about training, exploring and academic life.

5. The MC is a cautious person, he won't put his life at risk.

6. The MC will be quite similar to Yamcha obviously better and more refined. He will have his talents as well.

7. The plot will not extended to Boruto.

Expectation : 

1. Smart and resourceful MC.

2. A LOT of training.

3. Good amount of original arcs.

4.Non plot divergence at least until Shippuden. No repeated scenes/dialogues.

Disclaimer : I don't own Naruto or Dragon ball. All credits go to their original creators.

Author : It's my first fanfic. English is my second language so there may be some Grammer errors, but it should be fine. All forms of criticism, reviews and advice are welcome. I'll try to improve as the fanfic progresses.


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