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The novel idea is unique, as not many support type mains are used in novels these days. Unfortunately, the plot was not well done. After reading the first chapter I had to bounce out simply because it was boring and subpar. The reason is because we aren’t introduced to the world at all, what it’s systems are (like what determines the class of someone, what they train for in school, who the other classmates are, the background of the mc) etc. Felt very rushed and to be honest a gimmick by the author to make the first chapter as interesting as possible to appeal to webnovels contract requirements. If I were you, I’d read something else.
The novels I have been reading so far are pretty good. I like to read the talent series of novels. The MC has written a storyline where the protagonist is ruthless, decisive in killing, and full of love and hate.
tbh I was surprised how good it was compared to what i thought when i saw the title , but now i can't read beyond the unlock chapters until free reads are uploaded online
The story is impartial, and the writing is interesting. The characters are very delicately drawn, and everyone has their own style. Although novels such as harem are all the same, this novel is still okay, not to mention unique. it’s still interesting. I hope the author can keep writing, come on!!!
Bro, I really like your novel. The mc's personality seems appropriate to me for the stage where he performs. Please don't drop your novel, it's very good and I see a lot of potential.
The subject matter is very engaging, and the theme is highly inspirational. I do hope you wont drop this novel cuz I really curious about the upcoming plots
I absolutely loved this novel so far. It has great potential. I just request the writer to continue writing it. Also, I will recommend everyone to read this novel.
Author here, It's my second novel and I really do want to make progress in this writing. Show me your support if you like this story! Tell me everything you think I need to know to make this novel better!
The novel idea is unique, as not many support type mains are used in novels these days. Unfortunately, the plot was not well done. After reading the first chapter I had to bounce out simply because it was boring and subpar. The reason is because we aren’t introduced to the world at all, what it’s systems are (like what determines the class of someone, what they train for in school, who the other classmates are, the background of the mc) etc. Felt very rushed and to be honest a gimmick by the author to make the first chapter as interesting as possible to appeal to webnovels contract requirements. If I were you, I’d read something else.
The novels I have been reading so far are pretty good. I like to read the talent series of novels. The MC has written a storyline where the protagonist is ruthless, decisive in killing, and full of love and hate.
tbh I was surprised how good it was compared to what i thought when i saw the title , but now i can't read beyond the unlock chapters until free reads are uploaded online
The story is impartial, and the writing is interesting. The characters are very delicately drawn, and everyone has their own style. Although novels such as harem are all the same, this novel is still okay, not to mention unique. it’s still interesting. I hope the author can keep writing, come on!!!
Bro, I really like your novel. The mc's personality seems appropriate to me for the stage where he performs. Please don't drop your novel, it's very good and I see a lot of potential.
The subject matter is very engaging, and the theme is highly inspirational. I do hope you wont drop this novel cuz I really curious about the upcoming plots
I absolutely loved this novel so far. It has great potential. I just request the writer to continue writing it. Also, I will recommend everyone to read this novel.
Author here, It's my second novel and I really do want to make progress in this writing. Show me your support if you like this story! Tell me everything you think I need to know to make this novel better!