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Lord_Immortal_0170

Shameless 5* review from the translator. I am doing my best to improve the readability of this story. But if there are still some errors, please bear with them.

1yr
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Deikon
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It could have been a good story but it is truly Chinese trash and I don't recommend it this needed a villain tag right out of the get-go and the main character just a piece of s***

5d
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zapasnoikaspet

The main character is just a cruel idiot with an inflated ego and classic 8th grader syndrome. . ....,,,,,,,,,....................

Membuka SPOILER
17d
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Lithiel

It’s a well done translation, you just have to keep remembering it’s a translation so every time you think β€˜why is this guy so stupid?’ You just have to remember that.

2mth
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Error000000

Fire I just wise he could have stayed more on earth . Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z A Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z

3mth
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OnlyLucas

Good translation, my friend... Although the story has some good ideas, the shitty MC ruins any desire to read the rest of the story. I can't describe how irritating I found this MC.

3mth
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Deuteronomy

You will enjoy this if you just accept everything and turnoff your brain. Cause if not you will die of brain cancer. Read at your own risk.

4mth
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zelbard

Good translation, bad story. Too many monologues that aren't connected to the story where it gets is only one conversation in a single chapter and the rest are monologues. And about his system power is kind of useless he doesn't use it that much and it becomes even more useless for the later chapters. The character of the mc is your typical young master ching chong so good luck with that.

5mth
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Daoist_CloudySky

well let's give it a go and see what's happening. I am feeling very positive about this novel.

6mth
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redkingtfk

Great translation, shitty story. Add the villain tag, Mc is a hypocrite lunatic. Genocide is considered heroic now eh?

6mth
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ReaderCat

Although the author will not see this comment, I will write it. I don't even know how many sessions of psychiatry I have to go to to clear this shit from my mind. I only read fifteen chapters, and my brain was dying. I give 3 stars for the translator's efforts.

6mth
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TsukasaSirius

I really like this ff and cannot understand that it does not get the hype it deserves. For the people who read the reviews before Starting a new novel, this novel is really entertaining and you should read itπŸ˜‹

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6mth
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ButterKnight

Good translation of chinese trash. china should be destroyed.

6mth
Lihat 8 balasan
Mister_Robot

I have zero complaints regarding the Webnovel translation. They are doing a splendid job. I know the original writer wouldn't be seeing this review but this fanfic would be a great read if unnecessary fluffy romance wasn't pushed in between. To the readers: if you can tolerate the usual Chinese trope of a rich young master giving shelter to a poor and illiterate beautiful girl who later becomes his wife/girlfriend/mistress then carry on.

7mth
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S_Pandey_0170

Noice. The Translation quality is just superb. As I am a translator too. I can relate the hard work and effort put into this work. Appreciate it a lot.

8mth
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Kirozen

Warning guys chapter 84 until 164 he never gonna get a ticket like no matter how op the enemy like not even a quest the system literally disappeared

Membuka SPOILER
8mth
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Mohamed_Bakr

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10mth
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Tyler_rigby

I like the MC isn't a hero or a villain he does what he wants for profit or to get new abilities he'll massacre an entire city/country (depends what u classify wakanda as) and felt guilt but he isn't bound by his guilt he'll just do what he wants to get stronger

11mth
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augusto_henrique

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1yr
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Logtagor

at the moment when the skill of changing appearance appeared, I immediately realized that this was not for me, I hate hiding my identity,unfortunately this has become a fetish for many fanfic authors

1yr
Lihat 1 balasan
hero4hire

turn your mind off and enjoy. if you try to use logic it'll fry your brain, try at your own risk.

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1yr
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Backpfeifengesicht

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1yr
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Eftamum_Chowdhury

It's Something Worthy To Watch, At least.

1yr
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Jetboy76

Loving the novel so far I’m just wondering if this is a harem?

1yr
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Xavierzelaya2

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1yr
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Murod
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1yr
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Trouxa_157

I really liked this translation, I hope it doesn't drop. To this point, 30 chapters have been posted, I won't say much about the development of the story, but I really liked how the plot is unfolding and the MC's relationship with Polares, if he can recruit Emma Frost that would be great. Thank you for the translating work, the grammar is OK, take my 5 stars here! P.S: I didn't like this arc of the Largado. If it was to take care of the villain, it should eliminate evil in its cradle and not leave the city in chaos and people dying for nothing, even more so our MC, who broke Spider-Man's fate.

1yr
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ShikharPandey

Superb Translation.

1yr
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dccobra

Keep up the good work, One of my fav. Marvel Fanfic out there....

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1yr
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SORCERERSUPREME_7

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1yr
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hairyniggaballs343

good story please continue writing and no harem

1yr
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Lord_Immortal_0170

Shameless 5* review from the translator. I am doing my best to improve the readability of this story. But if there are still some errors, please bear with them.

1yr
Lihat 29 balasan
Deikon
LV 13 Badge

It could have been a good story but it is truly Chinese trash and I don't recommend it this needed a villain tag right out of the get-go and the main character just a piece of s***

5d
Lihat 0 balasan
zapasnoikaspet

The main character is just a cruel idiot with an inflated ego and classic 8th grader syndrome. . ....,,,,,,,,,....................

Membuka SPOILER
17d
Lihat 0 balasan
Lithiel

It’s a well done translation, you just have to keep remembering it’s a translation so every time you think β€˜why is this guy so stupid?’ You just have to remember that.

2mth
Lihat 0 balasan
Error000000

Fire I just wise he could have stayed more on earth . Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z A Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z Z

3mth
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OnlyLucas

Good translation, my friend... Although the story has some good ideas, the shitty MC ruins any desire to read the rest of the story. I can't describe how irritating I found this MC.

3mth
Lihat 0 balasan
Deuteronomy

You will enjoy this if you just accept everything and turnoff your brain. Cause if not you will die of brain cancer. Read at your own risk.

4mth
Lihat 4 balasan
zelbard

Good translation, bad story. Too many monologues that aren't connected to the story where it gets is only one conversation in a single chapter and the rest are monologues. And about his system power is kind of useless he doesn't use it that much and it becomes even more useless for the later chapters. The character of the mc is your typical young master ching chong so good luck with that.

5mth
Lihat 0 balasan
Daoist_CloudySky

well let's give it a go and see what's happening. I am feeling very positive about this novel.

6mth
Lihat 0 balasan
redkingtfk

Great translation, shitty story. Add the villain tag, Mc is a hypocrite lunatic. Genocide is considered heroic now eh?

6mth
Lihat 0 balasan
ReaderCat

Although the author will not see this comment, I will write it. I don't even know how many sessions of psychiatry I have to go to to clear this shit from my mind. I only read fifteen chapters, and my brain was dying. I give 3 stars for the translator's efforts.

6mth
Lihat 1 balasan
TsukasaSirius

I really like this ff and cannot understand that it does not get the hype it deserves. For the people who read the reviews before Starting a new novel, this novel is really entertaining and you should read itπŸ˜‹

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6mth
Lihat 1 balasan
ButterKnight

Good translation of chinese trash. china should be destroyed.

6mth
Lihat 8 balasan
Mister_Robot

I have zero complaints regarding the Webnovel translation. They are doing a splendid job. I know the original writer wouldn't be seeing this review but this fanfic would be a great read if unnecessary fluffy romance wasn't pushed in between. To the readers: if you can tolerate the usual Chinese trope of a rich young master giving shelter to a poor and illiterate beautiful girl who later becomes his wife/girlfriend/mistress then carry on.

7mth
Lihat 0 balasan
S_Pandey_0170

Noice. The Translation quality is just superb. As I am a translator too. I can relate the hard work and effort put into this work. Appreciate it a lot.

8mth
Lihat 0 balasan
Kirozen

Warning guys chapter 84 until 164 he never gonna get a ticket like no matter how op the enemy like not even a quest the system literally disappeared

Membuka SPOILER
8mth
Lihat 0 balasan
Mohamed_Bakr

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10mth
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Tyler_rigby

I like the MC isn't a hero or a villain he does what he wants for profit or to get new abilities he'll massacre an entire city/country (depends what u classify wakanda as) and felt guilt but he isn't bound by his guilt he'll just do what he wants to get stronger

11mth
Lihat 5 balasan
augusto_henrique

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1yr
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Logtagor

at the moment when the skill of changing appearance appeared, I immediately realized that this was not for me, I hate hiding my identity,unfortunately this has become a fetish for many fanfic authors

1yr
Lihat 1 balasan
hero4hire

turn your mind off and enjoy. if you try to use logic it'll fry your brain, try at your own risk.

img
1yr
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Backpfeifengesicht

_________________________________________

1yr
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Eftamum_Chowdhury

It's Something Worthy To Watch, At least.

1yr
Lihat 0 balasan
Jetboy76

Loving the novel so far I’m just wondering if this is a harem?

1yr
Lihat 4 balasan
Xavierzelaya2

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1yr
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Murod
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this is history has potential , continue ! [img=Ρ€Π΅ΠΊΠΎΠΌΠ΅Π½Π΄ΡƒΡŽ][img=Ρ€Π΅ΠΊΠΎΠΌΠ΅Π½Π΄ΡƒΡŽ][img=ΠΌΠΎΠ½Π΅Ρ‚Ρ‹][img=ΠΌΠΎΠ½Π΅Ρ‚Ρ‹][img=Ρ€Π΅ΠΊΠΎΠΌΠ΅Π½Π΄ΡƒΡŽ][img=Ρ€Π΅ΠΊΠΎΠΌΠ΅Π½Π΄ΡƒΡŽ][img=Ρ€Π΅ΠΊΠΎΠΌΠ΅Π½Π΄ΡƒΡŽ]

1yr
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Trouxa_157

I really liked this translation, I hope it doesn't drop. To this point, 30 chapters have been posted, I won't say much about the development of the story, but I really liked how the plot is unfolding and the MC's relationship with Polares, if he can recruit Emma Frost that would be great. Thank you for the translating work, the grammar is OK, take my 5 stars here! P.S: I didn't like this arc of the Largado. If it was to take care of the villain, it should eliminate evil in its cradle and not leave the city in chaos and people dying for nothing, even more so our MC, who broke Spider-Man's fate.

1yr
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ShikharPandey

Superb Translation.

1yr
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dccobra

Keep up the good work, One of my fav. Marvel Fanfic out there....

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1yr
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SORCERERSUPREME_7

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1yr
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hairyniggaballs343

good story please continue writing and no harem

1yr
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