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Update more, and you will be 5 🌟 ..................................................................................................................................................................ps. I like you[img=recommend]
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adorei, achei incrível, a forma como foi escrito, o diálogo dos personagens a personalidade deles, tudo de alta qualidade👌
Uma coisa que odeio de fanfics quando fazem do protagonista original como um mc e que fazem mudanças Drásticas nas personalidades deles ou decisões incompatíveis com o tipo de personagem já solidificado na nossa mente. E fácil replicar um personagem mas é difícil manter ele, e fácil perceber que muitos autores usam sistemas ou outras coisas para fazerem uma mudança forçada no protagonista ou até no enredo para se adequar ao tipo de protagonista ou enredo que eles querem.
it's a little slow pace but it's good ,i really love your unique perspective of team change that was the best part ,I also liked the way u make Naruto intelligent stil he is loud mouth ,it needs little refining but other wise very good 👍👍👍👍👍
It's been a while since the last time I was so excited over a fanfiction of Naruto! Good job!!
just a boring version of naruto. nothing that makes him special. basically just turned into a transmitigator with no past memories and cheats. this isn't naruto. That ain't hinata. im good on this story.
Best Fanfic !! I Really Want Naruto's Team to be different, just for that you deserve 5 stars My man!! And This team is too awesome 👌 Keep it up, and pls don't be a harém here🤧
Good until Naruto rejoins the academy. The writing takes a severe drop from that point on. It turned from a decent fanfic to a Young Master protagonist who lost all his personality so they just say quotes as if reading from a book. Thats not how Gamers mind works. I would have liked to see how his emotions affect his control of the 9 tails chakra or comparisons to his father about his calmness.
Please update. I really enjoyed this. Also please don't have any gacha to the system, and don't add anything from outside of the Naruto universe.
Update more, and you will be 5 🌟 ..................................................................................................................................................................ps. I like you[img=recommend]
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adorei, achei incrível, a forma como foi escrito, o diálogo dos personagens a personalidade deles, tudo de alta qualidade👌
Uma coisa que odeio de fanfics quando fazem do protagonista original como um mc e que fazem mudanças Drásticas nas personalidades deles ou decisões incompatíveis com o tipo de personagem já solidificado na nossa mente. E fácil replicar um personagem mas é difícil manter ele, e fácil perceber que muitos autores usam sistemas ou outras coisas para fazerem uma mudança forçada no protagonista ou até no enredo para se adequar ao tipo de protagonista ou enredo que eles querem.
it's a little slow pace but it's good ,i really love your unique perspective of team change that was the best part ,I also liked the way u make Naruto intelligent stil he is loud mouth ,it needs little refining but other wise very good 👍👍👍👍👍
It's been a while since the last time I was so excited over a fanfiction of Naruto! Good job!!
just a boring version of naruto. nothing that makes him special. basically just turned into a transmitigator with no past memories and cheats. this isn't naruto. That ain't hinata. im good on this story.
Best Fanfic !! I Really Want Naruto's Team to be different, just for that you deserve 5 stars My man!! And This team is too awesome 👌 Keep it up, and pls don't be a harém here🤧
Good until Naruto rejoins the academy. The writing takes a severe drop from that point on. It turned from a decent fanfic to a Young Master protagonist who lost all his personality so they just say quotes as if reading from a book. Thats not how Gamers mind works. I would have liked to see how his emotions affect his control of the 9 tails chakra or comparisons to his father about his calmness.
Please update. I really enjoyed this. Also please don't have any gacha to the system, and don't add anything from outside of the Naruto universe.