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I've never written a review before, but as a fellow reader of Naruto fanfics (I have read them all), this is worth the read. I'm currently on chapter 100-110, and the only criticism I have is that sometimes it's hard to follow the story, specifically who the pov character is, hence the 4/5 for writing quality. I can't speak on update stability, since I binged all 100+ chapters, but I felt that the novel on the whole deserved the high rating. Story development; this author is smart and skipped a lot of the unnecessary bits. This isn't a 1000+ chapters Chinese novel. Time skips aren't annoying, and what is there is worth the read. World background; the novel is unique in how it separates itself from other boring fanfics, in a good way. This alone is why I'm highly recommending this. I want to avoid spoilers so just trust me on this.
There is no doubt about the quality of this story, and i definitely think its good, but I just cant say i enjoy it, i don't mean that its boring or anything, but the whole time i just feel this sad depressing aura looming over the story, maybe its because i don't like some of the decisions made, or maybe the characters don't feel quite right to me, or the main character feels of in how strong he is or how preachy, or how he interacts with other characters, something about it just feels off to me in a way i cant put into words, I'm not saying this isn't a good story or that i don't enjoy some of the creative ideas the author has put into it, but while i read it, i don't find myself enjoying reading it, i feel off after i stop, maybe that's intended, maybe its supposed to make me feel things, to make me thinks. Well that's just my opinion, i still think this is a good novel, i just wanted to rant a little
For The Readers; There is no Harem, Mc's intelligence is well written, the consistency of timeline is in order (I mean, the story is not out of place/everywhere), and I'm at hundredth chapter and the author is not bullshitting us with plot armors, For the Author. There some minor mistakes but it's bearable. It's a unique storyline, it shows a human who lived and has a moral value of a modern world. He has aversion to the barbarism way of life of the Shinobi's. A sudden timeskip is an immersion killer and your power scaling is kinda off. What is stopping you to collect the tailed beast? And also, you did Jiraya dirty.
I love the the different styles of storytelling used. Definitely one of better fanfic. I love the fact that the MC is not a mindless killer, there is actual depth in characters. The writing style is not repetitive, it does not give every boring detail of training like most fanfic uses to fill up the word count, which is good. 😊❤ Looking forward for more updates 😁
It's just as the creator says, he's starting to get good at the chunnin exams. I hope there are more interactions between the MC and the main characters of Naruto, because as far as I'm going there are 5 dialogues and then pure narration Also another thing I see is that some explanations of concepts are unnecessarily long but hey, it's still a good fic
jaime vraiment lh'istoire et ce quil a fait a ino shika cho est juste fenial et surout le fait quil soit pas devenue un dieu mais juste pour linsant un ninja puissant est juste tellement agreable
Truly good stuff. It's been long since I've read a good Naruto fanfic. Pliz keep writing . (:-):::)= qwertyuiopasdfghjklzxcvbnm,,👌👌👌👌👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
A great more realistic take on a reincarnation protagonist in the Naruto world with lots of pop culture references. The protagonist takes after Tobirama (water style jutsu) and Minato (rasengan alternatives) but believes it’s because he’s reincarnated and not because he’s an experiment of some kind by Orochimaru. Seems to update very often.
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I stopped reading at chapter 28, this story was written very well, I like it a lot, but I just can't stand when the mc gets emotional, I'm more used to cold edgelords who don't care about anything. The story is great and you should read it, it just ain't for me though
-The writer is pretty good. He doesn't constantly repeat himself, he makes strong choices, he has a sense of humor without overdoing it and manages to convey the feelings he wants. -Domination by making the human cruelty of the shinobi world of the Narutoverse more "realistic" has disturbing moments... so it's interesting. -I have to remove 2 stars for character design. For me, apart from the MC, I have a hard time having empathy (understanding them intellectually and emotionally) for the characters. I don't feel any depth in them. That they all have internal goals, motivations and values that conflict with each other.
I love this fic. Realy this fic is great. Please contunie this fic..........................................................................................
A very well written fiction. It was satisfying to read. The quality is very good. The interaction between characters feels real. What I like the most is that the main character is developed pretty well and the story do contain "butterfly effects". Over great read.
Great! The only flaw I can point out is regarding the fight scenes. The first-person point of view spoils the suspense of the fights, and I struggle to fully immerse myself in them... Aside from that, the story itself is very well done :)
While the initial arc may seem somewhat lackluster and easily forgettable, akin to a slow burn, the narrative gradually unfolds to reveal its true brilliance. As the story progresses, it metamorphoses into a masterpiece of storytelling, seamlessly weaving intricate plotlines and character development that kept me on the edge of my seat. One of the standout aspects lies in its main character. Unlike many fanfics where characters feel like mere caricatures, the protagonist here possesses a depth and complexity that make them feel like a genuine individual. Their journey is compelling, filled with growth, flaws, and introspection, making them relatable and multi-dimensional. Furthermore, the interactions and relationships between the main character and other characters within the Naruto universe are a testament to the author's skill. Each interaction feels authentic, adding depth to both the protagonist and the supporting cast. Whether it's moments of camaraderie, conflict, or introspection, these interactions enrich the story and elevate its quality.
Thsi novel is must read. Because unlike other naruto fan fic novel the mc is alive and is thinking. It’s not just killing and going home real eating mission or just system give all the power without and explaining. And the author have used knowledge from novel and medical knowledge and history to keep the story instreating. I have to say the mc precpective is diffrent form other mc like asking why. Anyway it’s good read it and thank you author fro nice story.
The character's development is actually crazy.You could see it. You could feel it. highly recommend
I devoured all 58 chapters currently available and I have to say that I absolutely loved them, the story trapped me and never let me go, when Daiki felt angry and powerless, sad or even happy, I felt the same. I tried to think of ways in which I would've done things differently, and I came up with none, and friends, that is incredible. Thank you author and keep the good work.
It is not possible to find such an original novel. I can actually rank the novel in the top 10 series (I literally looked through over 6 thousand novels, maybe more). I guess some idiots thought the first episodes were boring. They don't know what the beginning of a story and what a good beginning is. An excellent novel. Its operation is so nice that it does not leave the slightest trace in your mind. I will continue to follow.
so what I have read so far has led me to believe this vould be a very solid narulto fanfic I really like the novel and I'm glad I found it when looking through some different fanfics
A well put together story it’s very realistic and the mc can be cold and yet chill
Tttttttttttttttttttttt Ffffffffffffffffffffffff Tttttttttttttttttttttt Uuuuuuuuuuuu Ccccccccccccc Author 😏👌👍 This pace and storyline much entertaining and gold.... please kill Danzou mitokado Utatane
He saws the beginning is boring, do not trust him in this. This fic has two pillars that prop it up, it’s ability to progress character dev through dialogue and it’s wicked cool fight scenes. Give it a go you won’t be disappointed
I truly think this is one of the best Si/OC Naruto fics. It is realistic and I also appreciate the MC's thought process, especially when it comes to killing. "You kill because you chose to". It's also nice that he knows when to kill and when not to kill. Not like some that kill everyone in their way and some that do not kill due to some misguided sense of justice (DCVERSE I'm looking at you). The writing quality is also superb, sure there are some repeated paragraphs, but it's something you can overlook and it gets better and so interesting that you won't care. I also like his insights into how the shinobi world think and behave, especially during his chunin exams. Overall, this is a highly recommended fic. Good on you author.
You should know that the first part of this fic is terribly boring and with very little to offer. Having said that, it gets better after a few chapters, so lI hope you'll stick with the story until the chunin exams (of the MC, not Naruto's ones) before declaring this fic to be a waste of time. I won't go back to rewrite the first part; it's been over a year since I wrote those initial chapters, yet I never published them. However, I've now decided to revisit and complete this fanfic, for it's something I wish to keep to see how far I've come and how far I'll go.
Nice ff ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
I've never written a review before, but as a fellow reader of Naruto fanfics (I have read them all), this is worth the read. I'm currently on chapter 100-110, and the only criticism I have is that sometimes it's hard to follow the story, specifically who the pov character is, hence the 4/5 for writing quality. I can't speak on update stability, since I binged all 100+ chapters, but I felt that the novel on the whole deserved the high rating. Story development; this author is smart and skipped a lot of the unnecessary bits. This isn't a 1000+ chapters Chinese novel. Time skips aren't annoying, and what is there is worth the read. World background; the novel is unique in how it separates itself from other boring fanfics, in a good way. This alone is why I'm highly recommending this. I want to avoid spoilers so just trust me on this.
There is no doubt about the quality of this story, and i definitely think its good, but I just cant say i enjoy it, i don't mean that its boring or anything, but the whole time i just feel this sad depressing aura looming over the story, maybe its because i don't like some of the decisions made, or maybe the characters don't feel quite right to me, or the main character feels of in how strong he is or how preachy, or how he interacts with other characters, something about it just feels off to me in a way i cant put into words, I'm not saying this isn't a good story or that i don't enjoy some of the creative ideas the author has put into it, but while i read it, i don't find myself enjoying reading it, i feel off after i stop, maybe that's intended, maybe its supposed to make me feel things, to make me thinks. Well that's just my opinion, i still think this is a good novel, i just wanted to rant a little
For The Readers; There is no Harem, Mc's intelligence is well written, the consistency of timeline is in order (I mean, the story is not out of place/everywhere), and I'm at hundredth chapter and the author is not bullshitting us with plot armors, For the Author. There some minor mistakes but it's bearable. It's a unique storyline, it shows a human who lived and has a moral value of a modern world. He has aversion to the barbarism way of life of the Shinobi's. A sudden timeskip is an immersion killer and your power scaling is kinda off. What is stopping you to collect the tailed beast? And also, you did Jiraya dirty.
I love the the different styles of storytelling used. Definitely one of better fanfic. I love the fact that the MC is not a mindless killer, there is actual depth in characters. The writing style is not repetitive, it does not give every boring detail of training like most fanfic uses to fill up the word count, which is good. 😊❤ Looking forward for more updates 😁
It's just as the creator says, he's starting to get good at the chunnin exams. I hope there are more interactions between the MC and the main characters of Naruto, because as far as I'm going there are 5 dialogues and then pure narration Also another thing I see is that some explanations of concepts are unnecessarily long but hey, it's still a good fic
jaime vraiment lh'istoire et ce quil a fait a ino shika cho est juste fenial et surout le fait quil soit pas devenue un dieu mais juste pour linsant un ninja puissant est juste tellement agreable
Truly good stuff. It's been long since I've read a good Naruto fanfic. Pliz keep writing . (:-):::)= qwertyuiopasdfghjklzxcvbnm,,👌👌👌👌👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
A great more realistic take on a reincarnation protagonist in the Naruto world with lots of pop culture references. The protagonist takes after Tobirama (water style jutsu) and Minato (rasengan alternatives) but believes it’s because he’s reincarnated and not because he’s an experiment of some kind by Orochimaru. Seems to update very often.
Membuka SPOILER I stopped reading at chapter 28, this story was written very well, I like it a lot, but I just can't stand when the mc gets emotional, I'm more used to cold edgelords who don't care about anything. The story is great and you should read it, it just ain't for me though
-The writer is pretty good. He doesn't constantly repeat himself, he makes strong choices, he has a sense of humor without overdoing it and manages to convey the feelings he wants. -Domination by making the human cruelty of the shinobi world of the Narutoverse more "realistic" has disturbing moments... so it's interesting. -I have to remove 2 stars for character design. For me, apart from the MC, I have a hard time having empathy (understanding them intellectually and emotionally) for the characters. I don't feel any depth in them. That they all have internal goals, motivations and values that conflict with each other.
I love this fic. Realy this fic is great. Please contunie this fic..........................................................................................
A very well written fiction. It was satisfying to read. The quality is very good. The interaction between characters feels real. What I like the most is that the main character is developed pretty well and the story do contain "butterfly effects". Over great read.
Great! The only flaw I can point out is regarding the fight scenes. The first-person point of view spoils the suspense of the fights, and I struggle to fully immerse myself in them... Aside from that, the story itself is very well done :)
While the initial arc may seem somewhat lackluster and easily forgettable, akin to a slow burn, the narrative gradually unfolds to reveal its true brilliance. As the story progresses, it metamorphoses into a masterpiece of storytelling, seamlessly weaving intricate plotlines and character development that kept me on the edge of my seat. One of the standout aspects lies in its main character. Unlike many fanfics where characters feel like mere caricatures, the protagonist here possesses a depth and complexity that make them feel like a genuine individual. Their journey is compelling, filled with growth, flaws, and introspection, making them relatable and multi-dimensional. Furthermore, the interactions and relationships between the main character and other characters within the Naruto universe are a testament to the author's skill. Each interaction feels authentic, adding depth to both the protagonist and the supporting cast. Whether it's moments of camaraderie, conflict, or introspection, these interactions enrich the story and elevate its quality.
Thsi novel is must read. Because unlike other naruto fan fic novel the mc is alive and is thinking. It’s not just killing and going home real eating mission or just system give all the power without and explaining. And the author have used knowledge from novel and medical knowledge and history to keep the story instreating. I have to say the mc precpective is diffrent form other mc like asking why. Anyway it’s good read it and thank you author fro nice story.
The character's development is actually crazy.You could see it. You could feel it. highly recommend
I devoured all 58 chapters currently available and I have to say that I absolutely loved them, the story trapped me and never let me go, when Daiki felt angry and powerless, sad or even happy, I felt the same. I tried to think of ways in which I would've done things differently, and I came up with none, and friends, that is incredible. Thank you author and keep the good work.
It is not possible to find such an original novel. I can actually rank the novel in the top 10 series (I literally looked through over 6 thousand novels, maybe more). I guess some idiots thought the first episodes were boring. They don't know what the beginning of a story and what a good beginning is. An excellent novel. Its operation is so nice that it does not leave the slightest trace in your mind. I will continue to follow.
so what I have read so far has led me to believe this vould be a very solid narulto fanfic I really like the novel and I'm glad I found it when looking through some different fanfics
A well put together story it’s very realistic and the mc can be cold and yet chill
Tttttttttttttttttttttt Ffffffffffffffffffffffff Tttttttttttttttttttttt Uuuuuuuuuuuu Ccccccccccccc Author 😏👌👍 This pace and storyline much entertaining and gold.... please kill Danzou mitokado Utatane
He saws the beginning is boring, do not trust him in this. This fic has two pillars that prop it up, it’s ability to progress character dev through dialogue and it’s wicked cool fight scenes. Give it a go you won’t be disappointed
I truly think this is one of the best Si/OC Naruto fics. It is realistic and I also appreciate the MC's thought process, especially when it comes to killing. "You kill because you chose to". It's also nice that he knows when to kill and when not to kill. Not like some that kill everyone in their way and some that do not kill due to some misguided sense of justice (DCVERSE I'm looking at you). The writing quality is also superb, sure there are some repeated paragraphs, but it's something you can overlook and it gets better and so interesting that you won't care. I also like his insights into how the shinobi world think and behave, especially during his chunin exams. Overall, this is a highly recommended fic. Good on you author.
You should know that the first part of this fic is terribly boring and with very little to offer. Having said that, it gets better after a few chapters, so lI hope you'll stick with the story until the chunin exams (of the MC, not Naruto's ones) before declaring this fic to be a waste of time. I won't go back to rewrite the first part; it's been over a year since I wrote those initial chapters, yet I never published them. However, I've now decided to revisit and complete this fanfic, for it's something I wish to keep to see how far I've come and how far I'll go.