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It’s a solid story and a good way to pass the time. Within a day of finding the story i read all 95 chapters currently released because it kept my attention. There are instances where the writing quality could be better but its honestly better than most stories on webnovel. The character dialogue also leaves something to be desired but still good as it is. Shame that it hasnt been updated in almost a month though. I say its worth the coins i spent to read. Good job Mr. Author!
It's disappointing when a story that could be great ends up not being so good. The writing is confusing, the characters aren't interesting, and there is not much world-building. When you read this book, it feels more like reading someone summarizing the story instead of experiencing it. Instead of showing us what's happening, the author just tells us, which isn't very exciting. Also, important parts of the story are rushed through in just a few paragraphs. The action scenes are written with just a few sentences, and the main character becomes very powerful too quickly. He always wins without facing any real challenges, and his decisions are pretty stupid.
Good but the side characteres really plain ,and mc become op very soon no struggle at all maybe in future some 'trouble' may come . the worst part is very slow update overall story has potential
the story is interesting. the author explains how the main character is growing and developing through the story.
The cover hooked me, so I decided to try this book out.... I can say that I didn't waste my time trying it out.
This is the first novel i found that the mc isn't some trash. Like every other novels this novel starts pretty basic but if you read some you can see the differences. I like the mc, power system ext. I hope author doesn't drop this gem.
Not much to say as there are only 25 chapters out but the way the plot is unfolding and the whole set up of this story makes this novel worth your time
I love the way the story is paced, my kind of flow, and the MC is great so far. I wonder how it develops, very curious
this is my second book from this author and i like it already this is just my styleeee hope to get more of it and i hope as always that there wont be any romance it almost always ruins the hole book
Shameless 5 star review for motivation. Welcome, people of great sight. I don't have much to say for now, but ask questions if you have any, and come back to leave your review and thoughts on the book, helps a lot. Thank you in advance.
It’s a solid story and a good way to pass the time. Within a day of finding the story i read all 95 chapters currently released because it kept my attention. There are instances where the writing quality could be better but its honestly better than most stories on webnovel. The character dialogue also leaves something to be desired but still good as it is. Shame that it hasnt been updated in almost a month though. I say its worth the coins i spent to read. Good job Mr. Author!
It's disappointing when a story that could be great ends up not being so good. The writing is confusing, the characters aren't interesting, and there is not much world-building. When you read this book, it feels more like reading someone summarizing the story instead of experiencing it. Instead of showing us what's happening, the author just tells us, which isn't very exciting. Also, important parts of the story are rushed through in just a few paragraphs. The action scenes are written with just a few sentences, and the main character becomes very powerful too quickly. He always wins without facing any real challenges, and his decisions are pretty stupid.
Good but the side characteres really plain ,and mc become op very soon no struggle at all maybe in future some 'trouble' may come . the worst part is very slow update overall story has potential
the story is interesting. the author explains how the main character is growing and developing through the story.
The cover hooked me, so I decided to try this book out.... I can say that I didn't waste my time trying it out.
This is the first novel i found that the mc isn't some trash. Like every other novels this novel starts pretty basic but if you read some you can see the differences. I like the mc, power system ext. I hope author doesn't drop this gem.
Not much to say as there are only 25 chapters out but the way the plot is unfolding and the whole set up of this story makes this novel worth your time
I love the way the story is paced, my kind of flow, and the MC is great so far. I wonder how it develops, very curious
this is my second book from this author and i like it already this is just my styleeee hope to get more of it and i hope as always that there wont be any romance it almost always ruins the hole book
Shameless 5 star review for motivation. Welcome, people of great sight. I don't have much to say for now, but ask questions if you have any, and come back to leave your review and thoughts on the book, helps a lot. Thank you in advance.
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